[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 51

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

Y DID SHE PASS OUT N WAT DAT QUOTATION OF HER MEANT???

IS IT RELATED TO D NXT CHAPTER???

IS EVERYTHING GONNA SETTLE DOWN?????

i loved the teaser,, yup i loved it.. i have the feeling sat both manvi & virat vl meet at hospital :p atleast dey'll be in the same place...

reveal the secrets, flashbacks, hidden mysteries faria!!!!!!!!

so emotional

poor maanvi

nice teaser

plz cont soon

thanks for pm me

-Kristina finally showed up

- virat is in Coma

- u got to know about what exactly happened inside the garage

- viren's plane is in danger

- manvi attempting suicide

Singapore Airlines...

Gilbert house

Jeremy broke the kiss..

Kristina- her breathings were heavy..Jeremy is a complete jerk.. He never lets any opportunity to go waste... He literary took her breath away..

Jer- was smirking at her expression...One thing u have to admit that he was a good kisser :p

*told ya he is awesome... Avaii tumlog usse galiyaaa dete ho >_< **

Kristina- controlled her breathings and blasted at him "U jerk how dare you kiss me like that?"

Jer- "ssshhh... Don't talk... " He pulled her closer crashing his body against her...

K- her eyes got wider..

Jer- caressed her lips with his right hand, and opened the zipper of her dress with left.. Making her go numb on each action.. Without thinking much he captured her lips into another passionate kiss... Leading her to fall on the couch... She tired to protest, but he was strong enough... So She let him in and was carried away with pleasure...


*bitter truth of life, innocent people suffers while evil monsters party like a rockstar

But the person u think is innocent is really innocent? Or shall say a monster behind the innocent face.**



Vanshika- "did u talk to viren yet? Achanak US Jane ka plan? Sab thik toh hai na? Virat thik hai na? Tumhe kuch pata hai??? I'm feeling uneasy" she said that in one breath


Jeevika- "mom relax... Itna tension maat Lo... App jante Hona yeh Dono bhai kaise hai? They love to give surprises.. I'm sure both of them will be back soon... U don't worry.. I will call them soon... " saying that she divert Vanshika out of her tension but in reality she was in tension..

Viren suppose to call her when he was in the transaction flight but he didn't.. Plus she tried virat's number and it was out of reach.. Raj didn't bother to pick up her phone either...

This two brothers r complete bad boys... Always make us wonder what they are up to... Ane do phir batayungi... But what if something is not right?
She dialed his office number to inquire about the reason behind viren's urgency to visit USA..

"what? There is no such case?? R u sure??" she asked his secretary
Viren Je ne jhoot Kyu bola?? Virat toh thik hai na?
Her chains of thought was distracted by the news on the headline of BBC network ..
"viren ji..." :O

*** when your instincts say "something is wrong" Believe in them.. They might be right

And it doesn't matter how hard you try; you can never hide a truth, it will reveal one way or other.
Now it's up to you how u come over with the shock of ur life.. I wud say face it, bare it, live it, accept it :p****


Manvi's room

"you never have to worry.. if what I say it's true... Girl I have looking for you.. And when I saw you I knew.. That I finally found.. I finally found you" her phone beeped out loud..

She was taken back by the tune.. However, she didn't care... She hold the glass tight n took a deep breath ready to cut her nerves

"manvi beta... Kaise hai??? Kaha hai??? Itne din hogaye hai phone Kyu nehi kiyaa?? We miss you beta... Call soon... Love u... Take care..." Beji's voicemail echoed her room...

Her eyes got blurred due to excessive tears.. She loved her family like anything and knew if she does something than they will die inside... *disadvantage of being the most favorite child in the house*

However, today no power was there to stop her.. Not even her family... She was in guilt... A guilt of letting her family reputation down... Everything is just finished. Her career, life, self respect everything... Her heart was hurt more than her body... She couldnt take the fact that Virat stooped down to this level and didn't hesitate once to do the action... His deeds proof the fact that "all men's r dog... Only thing they desire is women's body...they are ruthless monsters who can do anything and everything to fulfill their desires."
His action lead her to take away the hope to trust anyone ... Her desire to love someone died inside... A unknown feeling of liking someone n believing in him vanished away like a dust of ash.


**everyone has a breaking point.. There will be time when u will live in hell but that doesnt mean u will quit living.. That's dumb.. Life is magical what comes in future you don't know.. So what if ur night was filled with gloomy shadow n nightmares.. There is always a beginning.. A sunshine... A new life... A bright future... So don't make that one mistake by saying "I quit" cuz when u quit there is no way to return back..So make right choices, Don't regret!***


She closed her eyes for the last time... Ready to end her life... Releasing her soul from all the pain, taunt n torture which the world might give her next if she stays alive..

Flashback

M-" choro mujhe virat... Pleaseee...leave meee "she pleaded him with a broken voice.
She was a dead soul when he ripped her cloths, but when his hand move toward her undergarments she became conscious..
After all you have to fight back no matter what.

Virat- "abhi toh kuch kiya bhi nehi jaaneman... Don't struggle nor whine or else you will hurt yourself...enjoy the ride manvi.. we gonna have so much fun that you can ever think of" he said it in that same husky voice when they were in her room of their close encounter, however this time his voice disgusted her. It was a lustful tone instead of a flirtatious one.. Each n every word pricked her heart..

M- she tried once again and pushed him hard enough to make him fall... Was victorious and was able to get out from his hold.. But when you have a evil writer like me how can he let her go?
He became furious observing her strength to avoid him..So he hold her wrist, Pulled her back with a jerk..Got hold of her hair... And started to blast fire bolts at her.

why you are running away now huh? I thought u liked me... I felt that desire in ur eyes when you looked at me with ur witty stare.. U wanted to have fun with me na? Then y running away now? I'm giving u what u want.. Chill baby... I won't go harsh I promise..

He started to nuzzle her neck, leaving wet kisses on the crook and digging his nails on her arms.. She was twisting her arms but like I said when a monster is in rage it's hard to control.
She was about to repeat the history of biting him again but b4 she cud do that.. he moved his head out of her neck..
"na aa.. Not again... U hurt me once, not anymore... This little trick of urs wont work everytime...try something new.. But now pay the price" he said it in a monasteries way.

** there is a lot behind a innocent face.. The one u think is good is worst then the one u think is evil..then how do u trust people? **

M- leav... She couldn't finish her word when he just pressed his lips against her.. Forcing her to kiss him..
When she didn't give up, he tried the last trick... Unbuckled the hook of her bra leaving her upper body bare ..
Rest are blurred out..

*this is the last time im describing the rape scenario... Now I don't care if u believe or not...Hate describing that section :'( *

Present

She opened her eyes... Took a deep breath n without thinking twice she...
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She closed her eyes... Her head was dashed against the back wall.. Lone tear rolled down her cheek... Breathings became shallow and with a flick of a second she passed out...


"Some hearts are broken and mended, others are shattered and torn. Although it was never intended, for love is eternally sworn. I have cried and prayed and pleaded, for love to hold his ground, hope was all I needed and pain is what i found" - manvi. (credit: Miss Jii)

Hai sad story...poor her... I'm eating strawberries u want some? It's really good...
laughing is prohibited but sorry I can't help it ..

I'm insane since yesterday... So any craziness is allowed... Blame my boys :p since I'm sooo happy.. I will give u a special treat...from now on you may travel into future... XD


11 years later (my favorite section)

Vadhera mansion, 5 a.m

Every living creature present in that house was sleeping peacefully, apart from a naughty boy name Vihaan Singh Vadhera.

He don't need an introduction but since u don't know him I'll enlighten u...

Vihaan is a 9 year old boy, about 4 feet tall, skinny, fair smart kid.
Also known as the crazy munchuck of vadhera mansion. He is adored and pampered by each and every member of vadhera house. Spoilt by his moms, jeevi and mumci along with his girlfriend.
When he smiles the world smiles along with him... But he is a naughty boy ...he has the answer for everything just like...
A super talented boy who have aced in all fields of extracurricular activity.. From swimming to basketball His room is filled with trophies n awards.. However, he needs to ace a special field that no one allow him to do...reason for denial? he dont know.. Just know that he is not allowed.
But him being a stubborn kid did something that no one knows about. **Take risk think about the consequence later :p**
However, he is a good boy.. Listens to everyone and respects them very much. One thing I forgot to say, he is really curious about certain stuff specially if someone hide something from him he gotta figure that out..

But Why he is up that late? Cuz he is an owl lol.. Haha Nah.. He is reading.. Don't think he is a nerd cuz he is everything but a nerd... In fact he hates reading as much as I do.. But he is one of those special kids who dont need to study b4 exam n always get As :p
smart brain virasat mei mila hai usse.. Akir vadhera blood hai bhai..

But what is he reading at midnight? Well figure out..

Like any other ordinary boy his room was a total .. No one will think he belongs to Vadhera family if they enter his room.


U can see a basketball lying by the door side... Books were scattered around on top of the study desk.. One shoe was on the couch one was on the carpet... Remote controller of Xbox was under his blanket , Whole cupboard was pilled up on the ground..Only the guitar was placed properly by the side wall.. Rest I shall not describe he is really a messy boy.. Well that was his regular routine for the weekends and whenever he was angry :p

He was lying on his bed covered his whole body with the blanket n was reading a book called "secrets of life by________" with the help of a torch.
For others it might look like a personal diary, but for him it was the book of wisdom... He admire the writer... He couldn't read that in front of everyone cuz it was hidden inside the room next to his... Specially not in front of his Papa.. He will kill him if he finds out...
So every night when everyone dozzes off he runs to that room takes out te book and reads it.. And then he drops that book/dairy on that exact position b4 his father checks it.

Let's read what's in the diary..

Pg:13

What is life? According to normal people: You wake up every day, get ready, do breakfast, then leave for work or school.. Throughout your day u struggle for ur projects, homework, class work n yadi yada.. And then when everything is done.. You go home rest and whatever.. that's boring... Isn't it?
But my life is not like this..
I made sure my life is completely different from others...
I love adventures, thrills, suspense.. Drama and little bit of pain... Happy toh koi bhi kabhi bhi ho sakta hai.. Par Jo maza dard sehne mei hai vo khusi hone mei kaha..
Sounds crazy rite? I know it is.. But life is crazy... So u gotta be extra crazy in order to handle it.. When life will take a turn and spin u 360 angle, you wont know Wat will it end up to.. Who knows what's in your future or do u have a future or not.. Take risk, dont regret..Consequence can knock ur door later.. If u don't try something new then how will u know if u can do that or not? In between don't forget to enjoy ... Cuz if u don't enjoy there is no point of living .. After all u get one life to live.. So play cool..

Since i have talked of Playing cool.. Only thing that comes to my mind is girls.. Hahah.. Not a play boy huh.. But ya I wud like to know how to play with them.. But Wont hurt them unless... Forget that.. humans don't hurt only devil does.. Ahem control :p

Speaking of girls.. I need to run away from them.. They are following me everywhere.. Haii mere izaat..

One thing I don't understand, they get flattered by the cheesiest line of era such as "hey hotty, you are looking sexy"
I mean come on.. Do boys have to compliment for everything? Can't silence speak the words? Eeh I guess no.. Cuz girls love to know what we think about them.. *sighs*
But my girl won't get any of that.. She has to bare my sweet mood swings b4 she know what I feel about her..devil much? But hey she will be the queen of my heart so little bit of teasing is okey.. Rite? Thought so.

Well will I get one to begin with?hmmm let's see... But I already had one rite? Wasn't it last week I broke up with her? She was shopoholic I swear.. Thank god.. I saved my money...Haha insane..
Aaoo late for basketball practice.. So dear big guy catch u later.


Sign of the author.



Vihaan closed the book with a wide smile.. He learned 2 things today

#1
life should be thriller (is he talking about car race? ^__^), painful (I hurt my elbow that day :/) , suspense ummm what is that???? He made a frowning face..

#2
Play cool... "hey hotty you are looking sexy" but what is sexy??? Sex n a y... Hmmm before he cud analyze the meaning of this complicated word, he heard a cracking sound of the main door. He got scared.. When he check the clock it was 6:30 am.. And his eyes were blinking due to tiredness.. But he got up, trying to follow the lesson of life from page 10 that he read yesterday... And started to fix his room.. By the time he was done the clock hit 7:30, therefore he had 30 mins till the wake up alarm rings... So he jumped on his bed, hid the diary under his pillow n went back to deep slumber..

8 a.m

Vanshika was hurrying toward the stairs ..

"Arre bhabi aram se kaha jaa rahai ho itne jaldi mei??" SB said stopping her from behind.

Vanshika stopped and said "is ghar ke prince ko utha ne ja rahi hu...8 baaj gaye na.. 9 o clock uska basketball practice hai .." she said with a bright smile.

"Aap ne aur iske Dono mummy ne usse bigar ke rakha hai... Aaj kal saitani thori jyada baar Gaye hai nai?" SB said shaking her head

"Kyu na kare vo hai hi itna pyara... Humari jaan hai... Vo nah hota toh..." Some tears started to shred from her eyes

"acha ab app purani baato ko yaad maat karo... Jo Hona tha vo hogaya... Abhi jaldi karo Naina ke yaha haldi bhi bhijwani hai.. Or else ur younger son will blast at us.. He is already impatient to get married" she said with a smile..

"haa Mai abhi ayee" she head toward vihaan's room.

Vihaan's room

Poor boy was in deep slumber.. After all he was up the whole night.

Vanshika opened his room door n sneaked in.
Wait it's not his room? She looked around.. black and white interior design with matching furnitures ... Yah it's his room..

She was amazed to see his room was clean after ages by it self..

He was cuddling his big dinosaur soft toy.. Had a fawning cute expression while Resting his head on the bottom of the pillow...

Vanshika came closer n caressed his face... Brushed off the hair from his forehead and kissed it softly..

Vanshika- vihaan beta good morning.. Wake up it's 8 am

Vihaan- he squinted his eyes.. Covered his face with the blanket, not willing to listen to her.

Vanshika- vihaan.. You are waking up or not??

Vihaan- he nodded in disagreement under the blanket

Vanshika- chuckled
Ok Wat if I say I will give you Dairy Milk?

Vihaan- I already ate one yesterday.. Try something else

Vanshika- hawww saitan.. Di said it rite we have spoilt you a lot .. Now get up or else..

Vihaan- he tuck his head under the pillow completely ignoring her warning

Vanshika- that's it ..no more pampering u or listening to your demands.. You don't listen to me so I won't either.. Later don't come complaining that ur mom didn't let u do this...

Vihaan- he was very sleepy but her threat disappeared his drowsiness

He sat up instantly.. Rubbing his eyes

Vanshika- smiled knowing her trick worked..

Vihaan- "but that's not fair...i do listen to you then y u r being mean? I even drink that yukky milk Which taste disgusting like a rotten egg.. Cheee" showed a puke expression

Vanshika- drama king.. I know your trick so quit it

Vihaan- I know urs tooo.. And he winked

Vanshika- vihaan..
Vihaan- I love you girlfriend and he hugged her tightly..

Vanshika- love you beta.. Hugged him back.. Now get up, ur mumci is coming...

Vihaan- mumci is coming.. He said with excitement... But I'm mad at her... Tell her I won't meet her.. Humph

Vanshika- but y? What did she do?

Vihaan- she... Unmm he thought for a second and said "I'm not saying ask her."

Vanshika- okey grumpy kid.. Now freshen up we have to go to Naina's place today its her haldi na..plus u have ur basketball practice too.

Vihaan- eee that yuky yellow thing.. I hate that even dad tooo... He said with proud..

Vanshika- I know.. Ok now get up quickly.. Till then I pick ur shirt...

Vihaan- okey.. He stood up walking toward the bathroom
Dadiii where is jeevi??

Vanshika- she is at Naina's place.. Playing her role as jethani..

Vihaan- like a big sister?
Vanshika- hmmm... Well vihaan who fixed your room? Last night it was a complete mess..

Vihaan- I did.. His lips formed into a proud smile

Vanshika- you did :O she looked around n said "impressive"
Vihaan- thank you
Vanshika- she turned back and opened his wardrobe .. And the pile of cloths just hit her face .. Everything fell down

Vihaan- cover his face with his little hands.. Secretly watching with one eye open, between his fingers.

Vanshika- vihaan..
Vihaan- "I'm sorry.. It was way too many n I don't know how to fold so I just stack them up" he said with a very cute expression that u wanna pull his cheek.

Vanshika- cant stay angry at that angelic face.., he was looking so cute n sweet...

Vihaan- ran toward her n hugged her again "did it hurt u?"
Vanshika- no beta... It didn't but I'm glad that u r learning to fix ur mess... Good boy.. Now get ready you are getting late..
Vihaan- okey.. He peeked her cheek n ran toward the bathroom.. Took a shower.. Got ready.

Vanshika- was fixing his room ..
Vihaan- hey hotty..
Vanshika turned her face with a shocking expression

Vihaan- you are looking sexy.. He winked at her.
Vanshika- "vihaan... Who taught you that? Where did u learn this from?" she said in horrified voice

Vihaan- is that a bad word? But he said it works...His face became sad

Vanshika- no but who said it?

Vihaan- aaa oo.. Ummm.. John Abraham

Vanshika- Wat?

Vihaan- John Abraham said in his movie...

Vanshika- u r too small for this n u sud not say like that .. Got it? Go down and eat breakfast...

Vihaan- but I was just playing cool...

Vanshika- "vihaan!" she said it a bit harshly... No argument go now

Vihaan- I'm sorry and he ran away with teary eyes..

Vanshika- her eyes became num remembering those moment that meant a lot for her...she relived that moment when vihaan Said the exact words like he did.. But how's this possible... How vihaan is acting like him??? Something is wrong...
Then her eyes followed an envelop which was hiding behind his shirt..
What's that.. She took out the envelop n her eyes became wide.. Vihaan..

Aa oo.. He is in trouble... Poor boy..


Present, Hospital

Doctor came out from the ICU room...Glared at raj..

Raj is about to strangle him cuz doc's expression was expressionless.. As if he is about to give him the bad news!!

Raj- he grabbed his collar and pinned him on the wall.."what happen to him.. Don't tell me he is gone... Doctor I will kill you" he was shaking him..

Lisa came.. Raj leave him.. What are you doing... Leave him

Raj- nooo... They can't do this...

Doc- leave me... First listen to me...

Raj- u listen doc! U r so done with ur career...Now u just wait n watch Wat happens to u.. Lisa I'm charging a case against this hospital.. Specially him.. I want no mercy he better rot in jail..

Doc- you are crazy... HE IS OKEY!!!! VIRAT VADHERA IS conscious... Miracle happen... He is alive.., doctor literary shouted at him, Putting some sense to his brain..

Raj- relaxed his muscle.. Get rid of the wrinkles from his forehead n said Wat!

Doc- relax he is fine... Now will u please leave my collar??

Raj- omg.. I'm so sorry... He removed his hands from his collarand fixed his lab coat. Thank u doc.. Thank u sooo much...

Doc- better...
R- can I see him ?
Doc- yah but don't scare him.. And don't worry he is out of danger he will be fine soon...we r shifting him to the near by ward with extra precaution... So ya u may keep ur threat to urself.
R- I'm sorry doc.. I was just...
Doc- its ok.. I shall leave.. Have to see other Patient

R+Lisa+Damon went inside

Finally u can breath rite! Pheww but does he really deserve that life after what he has done? Ruining someone's life n living in peace is that fair? ? Ahem...

Now let me ask u a questing... Who is better? Jeremy or Virat?
Jeremy was attracted to her that's y he touched her.. But virat.. He did out of vengeance.. It was delightful isn't it? Lol cruel world doesn't let u to live in peace..:/

P.s u like Vihaan rite? Isn't he cute?? I love him.. Don't tell me u hate him also ~_~

There updated as u asked for.. I wonder how u all r baring this .. Don't u get bore? Like for real?

If u r kind enough let me Know my flaws I wud appreciated :p I know I did many.. Plz forgive me for the mistakes n odd writing.. Hate revising so never do that job well.. U see if I go back I add more n it become a huge chapter which I'm not suppose to give

Anyways see yaaa! Have fun.., for update lol I didn't write a single word so it won't be that early!! Muaaah good night.