[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 90

Fariaaa!! U know what? U seriously nailed it !! Buhahahhhah!! Viren n manvi convo was very well written!! I really love dis jeeju saali bond ..!! Vihaan! This guy is in trouble by god !! Hhahaah!! I alwyss feels like chanting awww reading his lil bit part..!! I really love this preggy mannu !! The usb of the update !! Viraf checking out !! Is he still boy of turned into a girl !! I just bursted out !! Omggg!! That was just mindblasting!! Then virat was tasting his ice cream!! Gawddd..!!! Now i feel he is converted into a vihaan!! Buahhahah!! Dude!! That awkward position!! Hahaha!! I was just 8mag8ning that scene n laughing like no tom. N the way u give ur own views between update that crack me up he most !! Ahahahahah! U always cross limits of everuth8ng! Whether its showing dark side or the funny side !! N never imagine virat like this n that too in "one mistake" fattyyy! Pumpkin!!! Dude!! I was rolling like a pumpkin seriously!! That gajini vadera! Eeekhsss!! I love soft side of him! "Can i kiss u"? Yesss!!! Damnittt !! U dont need to ask!! Buahahqhahhaahahqh!! Why she pushed him! :( lol :p but overall this is getting interestint day by day! N i dont have any complains for u! Love u baby! :*

Originally posted by: Vibhu3

Fariaaa!! U know what? U seriously nailed it !! Buhahahhhah!! Viren n manvi convo was very well written!! I really love dis jeeju saali bond ..!! Vihaan! This guy is in trouble by god !! Hhahaah!! I alwyss feels like chanting awww reading his lil bit part..!! I really love this preggy mannu !! The usb of the update !! Viraf checking out !! Is he still boy of turned into a girl !! I just bursted out !! Omggg!! That was just mindblasting!! Then virat was tasting his ice cream!! Gawddd..!!! Now i feel he is converted into a vihaan!! Buahhahah!! Dude!! That awkward position!! Hahaha!! I was just 8mag8ning that scene n laughing like no tom. N the way u give ur own views between update that crack me up he most !! Ahahahahah! U always cross limits of everuth8ng! Whether its showing dark side or the funny side !! N never imagine virat like this n that too in "one mistake" fattyyy! Pumpkin!!! Dude!! I was rolling like a pumpkin seriously!! That gajini vadera! Eeekhsss!! I love soft side of him! "Can i kiss u"? Yesss!!! Damnittt !! U dont need to ask!! Buahahqhahhaahahqh!! Why she pushed him! :( lol :p but overall this is getting interestint day by day! N i dont have any complains for u! Love u baby! :*

Let me dance now! No complains? Yayyy thank u!!!!!! Loved the feedback really appreciate it!!!!! Soon he won't even ask that question :p Toing

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Dare I love dares!! Can I make it true? Tick tok tick *evil laughs*

nooo... plzzz...

request u plzzz nooo...

Originally posted by: surbhi.sur

nooo... plzzz...

request u plzzz nooo...

U don't like tragic item? How boring of u!!!!i like it a lot :p but do u still think I will do it? DO U REALLY THINK I can do that?

I like romantic...hehe...faria can do any thing 😆

wow..super..past+ present combination...wow very well written...hats off!!👏
do continue soon ...dear

First of all sorry for being extremely late.

Loved the first part with the jeeju Saali convo, it was nice and refreshing. Something big had happened and I think you're still to reveal exactly what the one mistake is all about. Maybe Virat is not the one who did the mistake maybe it's Manvi who misunderstood him and that was the mistake. Oh I don't know I'll rather just wait till you reveal it rather than pull my hair thinking about it. Coz whenever you give future updates it ends making me think about it more. Coz in they you say that she's being living her life the way he wanted to for 9 years. So does that mean that Manvi's not carrying Virat's child. I tell you faria you have a very creative mind that's sl unpredictable I can't think what is going on sometimes.
Coming to the next part, it was ahem ahem

And the next one I really like how under all that badass attitude he has the care and concern for Manvi. After all he can't deny what the heart feels and that is love.

Waiting for the next part. Since I've got bits and pieces from here and there waiting to solve the puzzle.

Update soon
Eid Mubarak

Love ya
Nush

Originally posted by: NushIsh

First of all sorry for being extremely late.

Loved the first part with the jeeju Saali convo, it was nice and refreshing. Something big had happened and I think you're still to reveal exactly what the one mistake is all about. Maybe Virat is not the one who did the mistake maybe it's Manvi who misunderstood him and that was the mistake. Oh I don't know I'll rather just wait till you reveal it rather than pull my hair thinking about it. Coz whenever you give future updates it ends making me think about it more. Coz in they you say that she's being living her life the way he wanted to for 9 years. So does that mean that Manvi's not carrying Virat's child. I tell you faria you have a very creative mind that's sl unpredictable I can't think what is going on sometimes.
Coming to the next part, it was ahem ahem

And the next one I really like how under all that badass attitude he has the care and concern for Manvi. After all he can't deny what the heart feels and that is love.

Waiting for the next part. Since I've got bits and pieces from here and there waiting to solve the puzzle.

Update soon
Eid Mubarak

Love ya
Nush

Questions questions n questions!!!! For the answer thats for me to know n for u to figure out!!!! Sooon everything will be revealed!!! N u gonna see manvi getting te diary :p psh too much spoiler I gave :/