#2 One Mistake Chapter 27, pg- 12 & 15 (both parts) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: virmanhus

<font size="4">CONGRATULATIONS FOR THE SECOND FREAKING THREAD OF ONE MISTAKE!!!!</font>

omg we are in the second thread of One Mistake!!! and holy shit we are yet unaware of what really the one mistake is and where the hero of the story is :p :p isnt this damn interesting???

its so interesting to recall the initial chapters of one mistake and now where we have landed.. an unexpected journey of virat and manvi!
you started it as an os right,, i am highly excited to know what really u planned the os to be,, if possible write the os once one mistake is done.. greedy right?? but badly wanted to know what exactly u planned and how it has turned..

well i must say this story is a great journey that had a lot of thrilling moments, doubts, suspense and questions.. all the chapters had hidden somethings.. all these has driven the story without our knowledge to a freaking second thread.. i love and always will your style of taking this piece of work.. unless or otherwise we reach the last chapter we wont be cleared of all the doubts.. characters of the story are very very different hence unique to one mistake alone so i love them heartily!!

new thread is a key to the new beginning of virat manvi moments which i hope our sweet sugar faria is going to shower us heartily.. your teaser satisfied me!! manvi is in Vadhera mansion!!!!! i dont know what u have done but cant help my self from calling virat 'my bad boy' in this freaking piece!!! so our bad boy's dialogues are rocking as usual!! he carries alot of style!! and that attitude u can die for,, mahhhnn murder me,, am i really loving this personality?? Faria has done something to me.. god bless manvi and me!!

so winding off with once again a hearty CONGRATULATIONS!!!
love u loads Faria!!! will follow u wherever u are!! if possible lets reach the third thread together!!

get going!!!



Jees ur feedbacks r just awesome I love it!!! 3rd thread Ki blessings awww u r too cute thank u!!
U love the bad boy already? *pats my back* I love him tooo.. I changed his personality completely n now ur manvi gonna suffer/ good way sometimes hurt too :p ok enough spoiler thank u once again!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of alll A BIG CONGRATSSXX... for second thread...love yea..
n teaser was awsome loved it to the core,,,liked it alot...n enjoyed like anything..it was lovely..brilliant superb...n amazing,,really feeling really happy for u..n excited for nxt part...n thnks alot for pm..
love yea
-anu aka rouza...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u should right chapter 26 not coming soonerrr...when r u going to update ???
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Posted: 12 years ago
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FARIA WRITE SOON
IMMENSELY WAITING
THANKS FOR PM TAKE CARE
Edited by IISHITA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update update update update ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: vamps1996

<font color="#006666" size="3">congratulations fariaaa</font>

<font color="#006666" size="3">second thread omggg this is amazinggg</font>
<font color="#006666" size="3">this is the 2nd thread and we are still unaware of the real one mistake actually :-p lol but the teaser was superrr fab i love viru boy make him more crazyyy yeahhh :-p i want the beach and goa scenesss nowww😆update soon and ya one mistake is the story with so many shades in it honestly faria u r a good writer its just u are still growing as a writer but believe me u are fab🤗</font>
<font color="#006666" size="3">lots of love❤️</font>



Mystery is still hidden n i kidnapped virat :p shall pat my back or wack my ass? Lol I'll do both but thanks to u all for having paitence n reading it! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Faria12345



Mystery is still hidden n i kidnapped virat :p shall pat my back or wack my ass? Lol I'll do both but thanks to u all for having paitence n reading it! <3



i know u kidnapped him :-p u should pat ur back for writing such am amazing plot and ill do the other if i dont get my scenes lol ;) i will read it no matter what u give us to coz i love this story <3 and thank u for writing it :-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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do you know what soon means???
update sooonnn
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: virmanhus

do you know what soon means???

update sooonnn



Cvs style = keep waiting
Kushal style = never
Evil mind say "u will get it b4 u see the sunset of tomorrow" :p
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Posted: 12 years ago
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