[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Aenna
Awwwsum...update..
I reallly enjoyed it!!!
Nd d punishment which manvi hv given to virat my god
He can do anything but dat...lolzzz
i hope virat shud also no dat manvi is his bhai' saali sahiba..
Update asap

"for his punishment.. He can do anything but that" mmm U NEVER KNOW
😉 😉

"virat knowing the fact about manvi's identy" mmm No comment!
He will but not so soon! There is longgg way to go 😆

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Menzena

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</div>God! I loved this update it was amazing 👏! Manvi was gonna leave 😲but my Viru stopped her awww . 😊Oh and when he was feeling guilty that was so cute 😳The explanation - 🤣. Itne detail mein explain karne ki kya zarurat thi, hum samajh gaye ke use laga uska rape horaha hai🤣😛. Awww it was so cute. Thanks 😳
The ending was adorable, he told the driver she was his gf 😆. AND when you write THE END ! I was like WHAT!? Thanks for continuing 😉
Hawww? The precap => Bheege hont tere? 🤢*DEAD* . How can you give such an amazing precap and expect me to be patient 😭😛.Jaldi update karna cuz I can't wait 🤗<div>
THANK YOU! LOVE UR UPDATES ❤️</font>

Thank u for ur sweet comment I loved it 🤗
Lol for explanation idk y did I write that.. Tbh I don't think n write just type whatever comes to my mind..
promo hmmm I guess u will like part 7! Although it's so long... Stay tuned

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: keertu
hey u updated lovely part.
loved virat in tis.
but i'm confused with the promo

Just wait for part 7 ur confusion will be cleared 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: virmanhus
it was so fun reading ur update...more than the update, i loved ur prank & the explanation in middle, it delivered ur uniqueness..

get going!!!

Thank u! As far as prank concerned Virat is a bad prankster so gotta have pranks 😛

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: rasp_berry
Awww superb...loved the way virat convinced her...lovely...OMG wat a precap...any ahem ahem scean?...lolzzz

"ahem ahem scene" idk don't keep expectations u may not like it

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kalpana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

awesome update

maanvi was leaving but virat stopped her

loved maanvi's punishment for virat

interesting promo

plz cont soon

thanks for pm me

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rida12ka4

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

amazing amazing amazing story im loving it plzzz cont soon cant wait for the next part 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Hi Faria... Fast update and longest one. Let me pat u for that first. Coming to the update it was entertaining. Virman convo was nice. How he tried to explain her and all. Why did u change the font? This was also nice though. Thanks for the quick update and for pm. Have Fun.

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Faria12345

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: helina

Hi Faria... Fast update and longest one. Let me pat u for that first. Coming to the update it was entertaining. Virman convo was nice. How he tried to explain her and all. Why did u change the font? This was also nice though. Thanks for the quick update and for pm. Have Fun.

Ops sorry for the font stupid iPhone does that I think idk >.<
N update don't even ask! I'm done writing part 7! N let me tell u it's the biggest chapter Ever!!!! The convos were long as a train! U will be bore. I almost fell asleep reading it..tch tch just wondering how did I write that much...

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

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faria the update was just amazing 👏

loved it to the coreee.. ❤️ manvi was all set to go that to in that time 😲 and ur self-explanation abt molesting i was just laughing at the line when u said Explained enough?thought so 😆 OMG he said everybody that he kissed her late at night 😉 he is all dead 🤢😆 u know when u said the end i was like what such a chota update 😆 then i saw its not the end (i was thru phn na therefore)😛 virat was sitting with her in the car and also forcing her to sit with him lovely 😃 he again got frustruated OMG 😲 bt atleast he controlled it

and M- took a deep breath n said.. OK... But u don't follow me nor touch me.. Least can u do is stay away from me.. N thn u will be forgiven..

V- looked at her with a sexyyy cute smile n said "yes ma'am as u say!" this part was awesomeee...

and what did he say to driver my girlfriend 😉 kya baat hai 😆

and the precap seems damn interesting 😉

by the way when is virat gonna know that manvi is jeevika's sis

so update asap 😃