#2 One Mistake Chapter 27, pg- 12 & 15 (both parts) - Page 12

Originally posted by: .LiveLaughLove.

Heyyy!! I didn't mean it that way. Infact its so nice of u to give us an update of that much words! The longest update anyone has ever given on IF and making her fans happy!😉

Lol I didn't take offensive way it's just I think I write way too much that it looks like a chewing gum :/ but thank u :D

thats why yu were so sure about the end virat is dead 😭 chalo koi nai we already guessed it ... 😛
the update was just sooo amazing ended on a real sad note really depressing end but not to forget the whole update was soo much fun ofcoz really hilarious all thanx to the crazy mad head virat created by faria ji love this virat he is insane only manvi can handle this guy 😆 😆 aisa koi karta hai kya pehle itna rulao phir created the whole filmy scene at the tunnel the phir chor diya i dnt xae abt yur god damn reason but dam to tha unn reasons mein 😉
virat's dialogues way of asking permission for the kiss that was tooo good then vihaan's doalogues nd ofcoz ur little amazing hiarious notes in between those amazing lines og virman romance all are just sooo fab kahan se aate hai wah wah dialogues ... 👏 👏
waiting for the next

faria ki bachi u r so dead...I hate u...intially I was so happy reading part 2 ... bt den at d end...u killed my boy virat n den manvi is serious...n dat too in coma upar se u called.manvi giri hui ladki I hate u faria...u demon...uggghhh...brng my boy back Nw hw I Dnt knw...its ur head ache not mine as a viewer / reader I demand my boy virat back n wid virats entry manvi getting allright...he I Dnt knw its ur head ache...


n abt d update start acha tha I was so in dreamy land bt end ki Baat mat karo u sent manvi to coma n killed my virat...I hate u

I had never said it but today I hated it 😭 😭 😭 d update yes.. no yar It cannot hv a sad ending plz do sumthing I want virman to meet... manvi was a surrogate dat we already guessed.. but I want virat to be alive... plz update asap if u can make virat alive plz 😭 😉

Super longgg updt...with so many twist n turns...the whole airport drama was funny...n virats reasoning behing that was OMG...this man is crazy

virat is dead...chal zutthi...now tell me where is ur virat bcs of him my manvi is in worse condition...call him asap...lolzz...cont soon

Originally posted by: Faria12345

Lol I didn't take offensive way it's just I think I write way too much that it looks like a chewing gum :/ but thank u :D

amazing update

Finally i m here commenting !!
yayyyiii i feel sooo good...
i know i know i disappeared nd didn't commented on ur story from long...but My Life u see... its not always a cake walk...anyways
cuming to ur updates till now !!!
i m all Confused(not really though), sad, Happy, excited, SHOCKED(Virat is dead ? then u r dead too..i wont spare u honey)
i honestly luved the twist nd turns u got in the story lyk really luvd it...!!! suppper awesome thinking u hav... imagination hats off !!!!
Did i tell u i luved the special parts in ur updates when u write ur own comments in between then updates.. that always cracks me !! hahahaha... u r too gud !!!
i hav an evil mind so i luv ur evil mind too...confusing yet engaging ur readers..hmmm gud one ha..!!
keep up the grt work...
and update soon
i hell wanna know how on earth u made my boy dead(or not really) sumthing a mystery i know...! little do i know about ur evil little mind..
so dont lemmi wait more...
and update soon..

i will show up on ur story again sumtym later...
Luv u honey... muuahhh

u monster humara virat nahi mar sackta he cant die i wasnt waiting for him to die next chapter he should be alive and this is an order

i have no words