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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: virmanhus

hey faria!!!
sorry for the delay

well.. it revealed alot, so happy about it..
the future,, i have no idea if i understood it or not,, yup its like clear vihaan is viren's & jeevika's son,, but again confusing.. alot of characters are dere in future,, dont know who dey are & wat dey are upto.. well looking forward for the next updates to get cleared

u know wat, only now i got that its really manvi who complained,, so she didnt go & file a case, wen she was reached she named the criminal as virat..
i loved Damon!!! mahnnn he's such a brilliant person.. virat's 'thank u' told me something is fishy, now its clear...

manvi's life is in faria's hands.. if vihaan is viren's son, den obviously viren is alive..
virat's future seems 'unsatisfactory',, ermmm judging by vanshika's reaction on vihaan signing the application for ''acting school'',, its not only vihaan signing like his dad but an application for acting school & vihaan's dad has showed least interest in signing it,, virat was at NYFA,, dis is like the vadheras dont want any more connection vt acting, etc.. soo keeping virat in mind i guess... and dat book vch was more like a diary must belong to virat as vanshika felt the familiar fact in vihaan's behaviour after reading the book...

somethings are damn clear now.. one and only thing, kristina-Jer-Virat relationship, deir past & deir contribution to virat's such state.. reveal it sooonnn..

loved alot of dialogues faria..
the philosophies u added, like the coin, its two sides, a clap vt two hands... mind blowing!!!

'' I can see anger, hurt, pain, confusion n little bit of guilt in them... Mystery guy huh... ''
nurse's dis dialogue to virat, just revealed virat's state... he's confused too... let me wait & watch wats in stock for him ahead..

''Damon- can I ask u something??
Raj- yah?
D- r u GAY by chance?
Raj- what te fuk! No I'm straight..
D- then y do u always support virat??? When everything is against him the y r u supporting him! Or R U THE REAL CRIMINAL ? Whom is hiding behind the shell?''
LOVED dis part!!!! Awesome!!! Damon is seriously rocking!!!

AND i cant judge u,, wat are u upto???
''he fainted... His blood pressure was high.. Sugar level dropped n he survived from getting a major heart attack.''
''a normal person dont faint like that...do u still think I'm mental?? Or ur friend is?''
u almost killed virat, gave him paralysis & now gonna make him mad??

totally an update worth reading & waiting.. brilliant job i must say..
unless or otherwise the story ends, we are not gonna be cleared of all the confusions.. bloody tricks faria, u are an awesome author!!
get going!!

(how can u stop it here??? vl killl uuu!!!! reveal the secrets... give a happy ending.. u cant run away like datt)

ps: had time to day to comment but forgive me i wont be able to do so in future




I'm sooo gonna miss ur feedback! But career is more important thn this so bring it on n all the best!!!!

Lol next chapter will reveal more secret n u will be shock n pissed off after reading... Lol might strangle me for pulling ur hair n making u all go in a circle hehehhehe...tere is a lot of stuff that holds the past which is reflecting the futurezzz... I'm floating on 3 boats :/ past present n future... Past n present I can handle n know how to untie the knots but the future crap I did is screwing everything!!!! Idk how the hell I added future... Kehte hainna josh mei hosh Gaya denaa :/ all addicted fault lol plus I love babies do just added for sake of it :/ n since I added I had To play cool or else I don't wanna drag the story :)
N yes in next 2 chapters all the mystery will be solved but then hehehe :p
Thanks for ur feedback!! Glad u like Damon.. Pheww at least no one hated him yay!!!
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Since I already updated so deleting the teaser lol!

UPDATE is down below
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kyu karthi ho tum asisa yaar ab tho mein definitely iss bare me soch soch kar pagal ho jaaongi im gonna go mad thinkin of the possibilities of wats gonna happen so plz end this wait quickly 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ch 15!

Recap

- Damon's suspected Virat being the actual culprit
- manvi was admitted in the hospital, critical situation..

Vadhera mansion

BBC headline: it stated the bad weather warning by the pacific ocean.. And one plane was stuck in the middle.. Of course it was viren's plane..
Jeevika's heart sank reading the headline.. She dialed the airlines n try to connect with them about te flight.. They said pilot was trying his level best to return back..they will come back or not no guarantee... It was a cyclone warning, So they couldn't give a surety of saving te lives.. miracle can happen if prayers r strong enough...

Where prayers n mantras were echoing vadhera mansion for viren's safety return, there in L.A hospital, Damon was digging the grave n going deep inside the case.. Resulting a frustrating n tension filled atmosphere for Raj..

Each time Damon finds a clue to save virat, it gets against him..And supports the accusation stronger...

Raj gave up all the hopes... He was waiting for Viren's return but there was no news from him too..

Gilbert house

Jeremy woke up lazily, looked the other side but didn't found Krist there, so he got up and freshen up. Head toward downstairs.. He found her sitting on the balcony chair, sipping green tea, enjoying the frontier view.. The sun shine

Jer- good morning baby doll.. He bent down n try to kiss her but she halt him right away..

Krist- not falling into ur trap once again.. I don't repeat my mistake twice.

Jer- ouch don't hurt this innocent heart.. U were really good last night.. Way better then last time.. More passionate n energetic.. I like the wilderness in u.. U made me feel so tired.. But it was a pleasure treat..

Krist- was boiling in anger.. Raj's line was hovering her mind... So out of frustration she spoke "who is manvi?"

Jer- squinted his eye brows.. How u know her?

Krist- doesn't matter how I know her.. What's the connection between u n her?

Jer- "Manvi... Hmmm.. She is my special treat.. Very tasty, juicy n soft.. Sometimes a wild one but a really good kisser... " lust was overflowing in his eyes.

Krist- ur new mistress huh.. U bloody beep beep beep...

Jer- chill baby.. She is just a topping on the ice-cream.. Y don't u take the Icecream n let me have fun with the cherry? :p

Krist- what do u mean?

Jer- virat sigh vadhera... B4 he cud say any further his phone ranged.

"what... Yah.. I'm coming just stay there n watch over.." he stood up from the chair

Krist- what happen?

Jer- ur ice cream is melting.. We have to rush b4 it becomes a liquid.. Let's go gotta freeze it!

*i want ice cream now :p*

Hospital

Damon+raj +Lisa entered virat's cabin

Damon- hello Mr. Vadhera, I'm Damon Salvatore, ur defense lawyer

Raj- public prosecutor

D- starred at him
R- "what? U act like one.. Don't give me that look" he retort back.

D- shaked his head... So Mr. Vadhera tell me what exactly happen... How did u rape manvi?

V- his eyebrows frowned n he shot out "I didn't touch her.."

D- oh really? Then Y were u locked up in jail n fainted inside the cell? Any particular reason? I'm sure an innocent person don't go thru those experiences that u had.

V- his eyes got red.. Look Damon this is a fake accusation.. I didn't do anything.. Manvi is lying... She is a bitch...

"oh really ?? then u weren't inside the garage that night right?" a strange voice came across the cabin door. Everyone looked back n there they saw the venoms smirking n entering his cabin

Jeremy+Kristina n Klaus

Klaus- hello everyone, myself Klaus.. Manvi's Prosecutor..

Raj was sweating.. He knew Damon already got enough proof for virat and on top of that the real prosecutor is here... Now how will this work??

Kl- u didn't answer me Virat.. Were u inside that garage with manvi that day??

Virat- looked at everyone.. Damon was eagerly waiting for his answer.. Although he had enough proof to send him jail but he had a little Hope that Virat was innocent.. Raj also crossed his fingers.. Praying to god that let this case be a fisco case...Lisa was hoping the same too.

But nothing was like that.. Virat's answer was "yes"

Kl- I'm sorry.. I didn't hear u clearly.. Cud u repeat that please.

V- crumbled his fingers into a tight fist and answered Klaus in loud voice "Yes, I was inside the garage with manvi" he lowered his eyes..

Damon's face turned shot red, he was gritting his teeths.. He so wanted to punch Virat n break his nose... Raj was shock to te core, his lips formed into a O shape.. He became speechless, dumb folded actually.. All this time he was fighting for him n all the effort for saving him got ruined.. The man himself accepted his fault that He was guilty n raj was hating the fact that Virat was his best friend... Lisa reacted with a "What.." Thn went numb

Kl- appreciated this honesty ...Thank u.. Works for me.. He turn to Damon n said "it's been a long time, since I have fought with u.. Prepare urself to accept the honor of " best advocate of 21st century was defeated by the super talented advocate, Kalus, before the case reach to jury trail session" he gave a evil laugh, Jeremy smirked n said "U do wrong.. U pay the price" I think I heard this before.. Didnt I?

V- looked at Jeremy with vicious glare.

**** i know I know u r ready to pull my hair, stab me with a knife n more dangerous stuff.. But ruk jao mere maa.. Kill me later after u hear the punishment for VIRAT SINGH VADHERA... Buhahahahah****

Damon got up n walk beside the window.. Suppressing his inner angry monster to vent out the rage...

V- but I didn't do anything... I didn't touch her.. I'm not guilty.. He said with confident...

Damon turned n looked at him with a blank face..

Kl- oh.. Someone is acting innocent here? Isn't he? Then who the hell left those scratch marks n bruce in her body so? Ur brother?

V- his blood reach to his brain.. He will accept all the charges against him but won't hear a word against his family.. Specially his bhai.. "don't u dare to say a word against my brother..." he shot back at him, tried to get up but his back shoulder was hurting.. He flinched in pain...

Kl- ooo.. I'm scared.. Don't ever threaten me okey...u don't know how bad ass lawyer I'm.. I will add more charges against u n will make u suffer inside the bar till u last breath.. Got that? Am I right? Or am I right Mr. Salvatore??

Damon- he have never felt so helpless before... All the insults he was baring from this crooked lawyer,Klaus, was just cuz of This Virat... His pride n ego were crushing... 15 years of record breaking winer becaming a loser... On top of that the case didn't even reach the courtroom.. How pathetic defeat is that??? So... u can imagine how mad was this Damon Salvatore...

*don't u love him??? I just loveee him.. He is a sex bomb! Haiii*

Kl- btw.. What's that Pain in ur shoulder huh? Is it the wound given by manvi when she tried to free herself from ur sinful act??

V- I didn't do anything .. Damn it...Damon I didnt touch her .. Believe me...

Kl- take off ur shirt n let me check the wound...

V- what?

Kl- guess u r deaf.. I said take off ur shirt boy.. Don't waste my time...

v- he took off his shirt... He had a perfect body... 6 packed abs, toned muscles, perfect biceps, juicy smooth skin..
Kristina was gawking at him.. Eyeing him with mischief intentions.. Can call her a eye rapist... She wanted to take off her cloths n attack him.. Feel each n every part of his body once AGAIN :p

Kl- walked toward him n checked his back... Te wound was covered with the bandaid but anyone can assume the wound was deep..

Oh wats that? He pointed toward the crook of his right shoulder bite mark :p looks like some one bit u.. Wonders who it is?? He passed a evil smile on Damon..

Damon- his anger was reaching its peak.. He wanted to strangle virat right away...


Kl- who bite u n gave u that painful wound huh? I'm sure not a cat but a wild cat .. Isn't it? He winked

V- kept silence.. His head was down...

Kl- who gave u that marks on that perfect body huh? Answer me.. He said in harsh voice...
He was repeating the sentence againnn again.. Finally Virat spiltthe bean n said it "Manvi did"

Kl- phewww manvi did... Good.. But why did she do that Mr. Vadhera?? I'm sure she is not a monster nor a vampire who will bite n eat ur flesh...
Then Y DID SHE DO THAT??? Any particular reason???

V- again doing silent treatment..

Kl- virat vadhera answer me why did she do that???? He was angry..

V- cuz I stopped her from escaping .. He finally burst out...

Damon- grabbed a scissors n hold it tight attempting to stab Virat...today he failed miserably.. For the first time he took this case from his heart instead of his brain.. N now he was proved wrong... Defeat never existed in his dictionary but now its yeh Main word of his life...

Kl- "because I stopped her from escaping .." he repeated virat's word making Damon go more furious on each word...
"Walaaa I rest my case... " he declared his victory

*** for my confused reader,
Bite mark was inside manvi's room time of their closure encounter :p

Wound is the one inside the garage.. Remember she was trying to go away but virat stopped her cuz he wanted to say something but she didn't realize... N pushed him hard.. He got hit by a rod type of metal...:p**


KL-whom did manvi pounced on while she was being abused? VIRAT

Who didn't let her go out of that evil palace? VIRAT

Manvi's marks r on whose body? VIRAT

Who abused Manvi? VIRAT
And I'm sure u also took her inside the garage didn't u? Virat looked down.. He was guilty...

I have my victim who is struggling for her life.. The suspect/accuser became the criminal, have two witnesses :victim n the criminal, evidence : I have record our convo.. N he looked at the file... Oh wow.. Impressive.. Thank u Damon for finishing the job for me... He took the file of clues that hinted virat as guilty...
Now I have everything to put u inside the bar !

Virat sigh vadhera... U have no clue Wat will be in ur future but no worry let me forecast it for u!

U have been changed n being found guilty for raping manvi...
This file states u r mentally imbalanced..
And right now my client is in the verge of death.. Bcuz of u she attempted suicide.. God forbids if she dies then I will file another case against u which is attempting murder...ur life is finished... Prepare ur self to live a life of a living hell.. Where darkness is ur pillow, loneliness is ur blanket n pain is ur Bed.

I will make sure u rot in jail until it last breath.. U won't have any mercy in terms of relaxing a bit... Each day u will die but u have to live just to bare the torture for ruining someone's life... Have a nice trip.. Hope u can handle it...

Humans do mistake.. But sometimes mistakes r too much to handle cuz the consequences resulting that mistake is unbearable..

"May the odds be always in ur favor, but when the odds r screwed up by urself then who will do the favor??" heheh extended Hunger Games dialog ;)

Virat hit his own foot with an AXE! There is no way to Fix the mess... His beautiful world is hovered by the dark shadow of hell.. Who will rescue him?? NO ONE except meee <3 but I'm not doing that...

Klaus walked upfront to Damon n with a proud glare he stated "even u be ready to answer the media.. After all, it's a breaking news... I beat u! World sud celebrate no? Well I Will.. Throwing a party at Dairs u may join if u want.. Get a free drink.." he patted his back n Left..

Jeremy followed Klaus..raj shaked his head n looked at virat with a angry face.. He wanted to punch him but.. He left the room too follows by LiSa...

Damon walked fiercely toward virat .. Bent down close enough to do eye contatctzzz

"u little creature... U ruined everything... I had the hope that something must be wrong or u were innocent but no... U were damn guilty... For the first time I'm regretting to take this case... U screwed ur life n screwed my reputation too... U gotta pay for ur deeds... And I will make sure Klaus have no mercy on u while charging u for punishments... U will get the worst punishment of ur lifeee...hear that? Saying that he pushed him against his bed n left the room ...

V- he was blank... He didn't cry or had a frustrated face... He was glaring at one direction...

Krist- was watching the whole drama.. Now she n virat was only present at the cabin...

She did a cat walk n sat on the stool beside virat.. N tapped his shoulder
V- didn't move nor looked at her..

Krist- got up from the stool n sat beside him on the bed... She decreased the distance between them... She was 4 inches away from his face...With her index finger, she started to seduce him, playing with his chest, abs smelling the sweet fragrance of his perfect body..she flipped her hair n pile them on her left shoulder.. Slowly n steadily her hands move upwards toward his neck.. She was playing with his face with her long nails.. Finally she cupped his face n captured his lips.. First 30 seconds virat didn't react but then as the time pass by... He closed his eyes... She kissed him for a min n half or so.. licked his bottom lip then finally got apart.. His pupil went black n She was smirking at his reaction.. She moved her face toward his ears.. Their cheeks were n contact.. She whispered in his ears "I still remember that night... U were a wild one but still a soft one... Same perfect body... That sensation n closure encounter we had... I remember all... Thn she kissed his cheek... And I won't mind reliving that night once again.. u know why? Cuz I have seen the side of urs that no one have ever seen! Bending toward his earloabs... The passion, affection n those sweet kisses... I can still sense them in my body.. N thn she bit his earlobe softly.. U were really good at that night... I wish u weren't that jerk n broke up with me .. She looked at him... U know na u were such a dushbag then? But everything can be fixed.. We can re work it out... I wanna relive those heavenly moment with u.. In ur arms.. In our bed.. U don't have to worry about anything.. I will handle this case... U will be free n thn we can file the case against manvi for harassing u... She hold his hand n placed it on her thigh.. Trying to influence him..it will be alright n u will forget everything... She hold his neck n was about to kiss him but he moved his face side ways...

Krist- virat..

Virat- leave...

Krist- u gonna regret this.. Still holding his neck

Virat- he removed his hand from her thigh n hold her wrist n uncluthed the grip from his neck.


Krist- she was raging in anger... Okey then... Be ready to suffer for ur misery... Cuz I will be the 3rd witness to make this case strong... U hear me? Ur life is finished... U r done. FOREVER!!!! She left the cabin fuming in anger.

Virat tighten his fist.. He was angry ... Very angry.. Angry at his fate n destiny... And manvi too..

He was looking straight with blood shorted eyes... His blue neck veins were visible... He was gritting his teeth... Twisting the Bedsheet into circle.. He got up n stand by the window.. Watching the outer view..


Outside the cabin

Jeremy n Klaus were discussing about the case n watching over manvi...

Klaus saw Damon was sitting on the bench.. Holding his hands in tight fist... Trying to let out frustration but was gulping it inside...
Therefore, to add some fuel on the fire he went near him...

So Mr. Salvatore... How are u feeling now??it feels awful to accept te defeat isn't it?? Accept it n inscribed in ur brain that this is the beginning of ur destruction... I will destroy u more... But for now let me throw a party... He chuckled evilly...


Damon- never take things for granted! Today Mayb ur day but Tomorrow will be mine?? So what if I lose one case?? It won't make any difference ... I have won billion cases n I have the gratitude n honor for it... I can say proud n aloud that I m the BEST lawyer of this era... Be it any way...

Klaus- u fly too high.. Don't u? Each flying creature has a danger to fall from the sky cuz thier biggest predator is the wild life hunter.. N today I'm that hunter. Who is about to cut ur wings n let u suffer for eternity...

"you see the girl there? Kristina Collins? She n virat were bF GF 2 yrs ago... But thn they broke up... N I will use her to proof that Virat vadhera is not sane... He do sleep around with girls just to satisfy his lust and throw them away after using it. There is no way he will win this case Damon... Try everything but u can't win.. I have strong evidence n the accuser confessed his charges up front...He is blocked from each n every way... No way out... It's either suffer or die.. Let's see which one suits him more...

Meantime the doctors were rushing thru the ICU! Y? Cuz manvi was having difficulties to breath...

Everyone was by the door.. Waiting for the news that manvi will be fine..

Damon caressed his hair.. He c**t take the defeat that casually not after Kalus have insulted him n not b4 the case reached to the courtroom.. If he lose today then he will lose for life... There must be way to rescue.. But what??? Every option he thought of was playing against the case/ favoring manvi from each side... But then god is not mercifully .. Something clicked on his mind.. He looked at the view of ICU for a min or so.. Then he turned n look for Raj...

He was far away form the cabin n the ICU... Sitting by the vending machine .. Head down.. Weary face.. Frustrated... His trust was broken... He didn't know Virat cud have done this... He was his best friend a brother like figure... All the sweet n bitter memory stated to flash in front of his eyes.. Their first meeting.. How they became freind... Alll pranks.. Getting in trouble n late night parties... Both were the jaan of any popular part... Y wudnt they? They were the hotness sensation n girls were fidaaa on them... That's how Kristina n Virat became friend n thn bf GF.. But y they broke up or Wat happen that night no one knows..apart from virat n Kristina.. None of them ever mentioned what happen nor have seen them having any gorges over it.. It was like a high tide which pass by without destroying anything.. Or it did? Raj didn't know...


Kar rahe badmashiyan bole Uncle-Auntiyan... Apni asi yaariyaan duniya pe mukti paaye...Saanu vele kehnde.. saanu vi ..Assi kehnde kehnde.. saanu vi..Inna shining shining future sada bright si

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=M0jcQNrQgts

Raj was recalling their party nights n late night outs! They did everything according to this song :p

He was in deep thought... When Damon tapped his back n woke him up from reliving the old memories...

Damon- raj.. Come back to earth..
Raj- I'm sorry Mr. Salvatore .. I was pointing figures at u that time.. But I never knew that virat can do that.. I mean I never thought this will happen n .. It's just... Hard to dissolve

Damon- patted his back n said "it's ok... It happens.. Sometimes u don't get Wat u want.. Life is not easy.. It has many twist n turn .. It's upto u how u see it.. Unfold it n cherish it... Maybe this wasn't Virat's day.. His odds weren't in his favor.. Or hall say he destroyed his own life... "

Raj was just listening to him..

Damon- but than what u see n think happen is not always the case.. What u don't think it can happen is the main fact...

Raj- Wat u mean? I'm not getting u...

Damon- u will get me after I solve this mystery..

Raj- huh? I thought the case was dismissed. Then how..

Damon- every coin has 2 sides... We just saw the dark side haven't seen the bright light.. And never take things for granted cuz there is a lot behind the hidden wall... N I wanna explore that hidden wall.. Crack it n let's see how far I can get...


Raj- I'm not getting u at all...

Damon- its ok.. Ur brain is not good enough to think about my logical theory.. Don't try u might have a brainhemorrhage.

Raj- hey...

Damon- chill I was just joking.. From the beginning till now this case had been a mystery n filled with bunch of twists n turns... It's time for me to unfold the knots n make it lose...
Do me a favor.. Watch over them.. Make sure they don't enter the cabin..K?

Raj- but why? What are u upto?

Damon- about to grill sum fries.. Want some? He said sarcastically

Do as I say.. Then ur friend can be saved

Raj- u mean Virat can be saved???

Damon- I never said he can't.. N he winked..

Raj- but how???

Damon- just wait n watch... The game is not finished yet.. Cuz I haven't played my part yet... He walked toward virat's cabin ..

He walk up front of virat n said in serious tone "tell me every damn thing that happen between u n manvi.. How u meet her .. Ur encounters .. Every single event in detail... And Kristina too"

V- looked at him.. Not surprise not amazed not happy or frustrated.. Not even angry either...
"y do u wanna know? I thought Klaus already wrote my destiny.. Didn't he?"

Damon- no human can write their destiny .. Only god can... There wasn't any hope for u to win the case but I guess angels are supporting u... So may the odds be alwys in ur favor .. U may live a peaceful life with a proud smile n with honor. So now u wanna say Wat happen actually?

V- looked at him... He relaxed his muscle n started to speak...

THE END!!!!!


Buhahahahah phewww kitna kaam karwate ho by god... U all confused kids dare u to say IM CONFUSED! Better not. Lol Incase u r ..write down the confusion instead of saying IM CONfused!

Blast form the future u will Know in next chapter as I'm planning to move this story a little but further since u guys said u wanted to continue.. Idk y u do.. >_< anyways .. I'm being very generous n nice today so u will get a promo for freee!! Yap!!! N yes just to let u Know the promo is my favorite section... I wrote that part after kicking out my evil brain.. It jutted a lot huh :/ but oh we'll it's my best piece of One mistake.. Here so here it is... I will give u a short sneak peak.. Cuz its too long to fit lolol!!!


TEASER


Vihaan- y didn't he write anymore??? That's not fair...
Then his curious mind lit up n he searched the locker once again... There he found a letter with no recipient name and a picture which shocked him to core..
"mumci!!" he blurred out..
He opened the letter n started to read...


On the first page of our story, the future seemed so bright..Then things turn out so evil...
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The volcano inside the demon overflowed and made u lost ur mind...Venom's vicious vengeance vanquished the virtual peace in our lives
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God casted a magic spell n span his wand ...took away all the pain and misery form our broken souls, abiding the darkest shadow of destruction a final good bye
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I was curious to know what was it that changed everything .. Tried hard but cudnt figure out.. but u knew it all... For u It was LOVE ... Isn't it???


Abhi maat bolna ke update karooo! Mai nai karne waliii I will take a sit back n enjoy reading other writer FFs. I mean come on this writer needs a break right???? Of course she does :p so I will see u after 2 week.. If I stay alive I will see u soon if no thn dua mei yaad rakhnaaa..

Let me Know how crap this was!!!!! <3
Sayonara :p
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Finally up to date with all your updates.

I sense a tinge of kindness coming our way in the next chapter.

Damon was freaking awesome, Klaus was spectacular, the two of them bickering about the case reminded me of TVD.

OK so you've showed that Jeevika is Vihaan's mom, but I have my doubts I maybe wrong but knowing the way your mind works it can't be that simple.

Hmmm so your untangling the web, that's good, maybe now we can finally know what happened in the garage, because no matter what you say I can't make myself believe that Virat could have raped Manvi, the reason being Virat is so confidently saying that he didn't. I know I know time and time again you have told me that it is what happened but kya karo I can't get my head around it.

BTW I didn't catch up so that I have to wait for two weeks to read the next update, so be a bit more caring and kind and give us the next update soon, because a lot of mysteries might be solved in that update. Including Vihaan's story which might not be as straight forward as you make it seem. I feel Vihaan is the ultimate one mistake. So I'm still betting that Virat is the papa even though he calls Jeevs momma. Twisted I know but what to do, your story is like that twisted and keeps me guessing at every update.

Love ya
Nush

PS:Don't worry your not at all confused 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update ya...
m falling hard for Damon dude...(can he hold me..lolz)
m sure he is going to kick dat klaus ass very soon coz i knw he will prove my virat innocent...(hope so...can't trust ur evil brain)

dat kristi is such bitch...jer to hai hi kutta kamina...nd now dis klaus...bt I don't care coz i knw Damon will handle them very well...evil laugh..

faria wat about d daddy cool...mera choto sa confusion bhi clear ni kiya...
koi baat nhi...jaldi kro...I can't wait...

precap..hmm confusing hai bt I knw next update will clear my confusion so update soon...

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OMG!! Ye kya ho raha hai... Ray of hope? 😲 wait wait.. I've read this in my lunch break at work :p will edit my comment later lol my boss is here
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi update was awesome U cleared my confusion I think Kris is culprit. But the teaser again confused me 😕 update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok so kuddos to u faria...after such a long time i got my breaths normal while reading ur "one mistake"
I got the same happy happy feeling whch i used to hav in initial updates (last 9-10 updates were hell dark n moreover my boy suffered so much ) bt nw i m assuming sme brightness is knocking virats door *u better let those happiness n brigthness in, in his life again plz* many thngs r clear so thank u for that :-)

N main tou abhi kaho ge Update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wat an update Faria !!! maan gayye tumko !!! the more i read the more interesting it gets !!! why did u stop there *pouts* i wanna read more !!! i can't help but say u tat u have to update soon !!! rest baad main kar !!! i want update 😃Viren is still unknown !! dunno wat is gonna happen to him ??? Evil Faria hi jaane😛 Eww Jeremy !!! gosh i hate him alot !! 😡N tat Kristina !!! 😡he was seducing virat !!! my god !!! I must i m in love with ur vampire Damon😉 he is awesome !!! :DDD ❤️ Go to hell Klaus !!! u n ur evidence go to hell !! i still believe virat is innocent !!! Bach ke rehnaa coz Demon is in action ;D😉 this was damn amazing Faria !!! n the teaser is as usal teasing us !! so u have no choice other than giving us an update soon !!! u have stop at the wrong place ;( will be waiting :DD thanx for the pm :D

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