[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved virat and maanvi's first meeting
plz cont soon
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Hello girlies! how are you all? hope u all are having you Summer vacation now.. if No then must be studying for your exams rite? well the best for the exam takers! knock it out…

first of all im really sorry for updating late BUT since im late I have a gift for you… im updated 2 parts at once… hope you all enjoy… HIT like if u liked the chapters.. all feedbacks r warmly welcome.. do tell me what you like what you don't… and yesss PLEASE forgive me for all the errors that I made below.. trust me I hate writing and the laziest person to revise ... so sorry in advance

lastly please send me a buddy request so I can send you pms for upcoming chapters… now just enjoy! thank you.

Recap: stubborn manvi didn't listen to virat's warning and entered that room and now she was partying with the roaches.. Mmm some rats n spiders too.. :p was thinking to put a snake.. But oh well I'm not that evil..
Here manvi was doing a marathon on that room n virat was sleeping like a good baby!



Room #006A

M- aaa... Mummmyyy... Helppp... Eeewww viraaattt... Somebodyyy...
Was running around the room like a crazy mental case ..
The room was pitch dark... She has claustrophobia...
the hot temperature of that room was suffocating her and she was sweating a lot... Somehow she reach the door but it was locked... Her breathings went abnormal... Voice was cracked due to loud screams ... She kneeled down n sobbed by the door... Constantly chanting "mum... Dii.. Save me.."
crying her heart out

1 hr later...

Virat woke up lazily...got ready n head toward the theatre...

On the way.. He asked Jenna if she have seen manvi or not
Jenna replied "last seen was when they returned from shopping"

J- y r u asking about her? Don't tell
Me she is ur girl of the week? Virat!!! Come on usse toh chor do.

V- ha ha nice joke jenna.. dating that brainless girl will be the joke of year..
J- oh really? thn y u were asking about her ? hmm…

V- keep dreaming babes… Was asking about her cuz in 20 mins we have our dance practice and I hate to wait Got it? Anyways u too come fast.. Ur make out with raj can held for later..Gave a sarcastic smile n just walked away from there

On the way he remembered to call miss Ria for something but his phone wasn't with him.. He ran to his room
But phone was nowhere near.. Thn
He recall where it could be.. N tha da wat other place it can be.. Of course Gym.. Tube light..
He walked there... on the way flirted with sum hot chicks :p

Gym

V- it's closed ... How will I go in ?? Urghhh.. Oh ya... My shortcut...
He have a secret passage that leads to the back door of that gym ..
There u r (talking the phone ) ... Pheww I can't lost u darling... Bhai ne di hai... N with strict warning that I have to update him about my life ... Lol.. Time For dance practice... He walked toward the passage.. But he heard a whisper.. "save me.."

V- did I hear something? Na..
M- suddenly a cockroach sat on her face n for the last time she screamed out loud n thn her voice completely cracked...
V- turned with a worried face... Rush to the door n said "anybody there?? Hello..." how can I forget this door is jammed.. That means... Oh no... He banged that door n opened it...

M- was sitting by the wall... Sweating.., red teary eyes.. Pulses r slow...

V- omg... Manvi... Cupped her face n caressed it..,
M- was fainting...
V- picked her up .. Made her sit by the table fan n rubbed her palm...
Sprinkled some water n made her drank some...

M- she was so scared that her tears weren't stopping

V- felt bad.. Was unable to think wat to say or do... After all it was his fault to lead her to be in this situation... He cursed himself for doing that to her..,

M- felt a little better after drinking water n hugged him so hard that her nails scratched his skin n she was pressing it hard...

V- didn't make any moaning sound but comfort her in his arms .., caressed her hair n rubbed her back to
Make her comfortable...

M- cockroach... Darkness... I will die... Save me...

V- ssshhh nothing will happen to u... I'm with you... Calm Down... N hugged her tightly...

M- her heartbeats started to become normal.. Was much relaxed ... Just wanted to sleep on his broad shoulder .. N that's wat she did... Fall asleep on his shoulder holding him like a girl holds her teddy while sleeping

V- manvi...??? He looked on his side n saw her asleep ... Carefully picked her up n placed her on the nearby bench...
Called raj told him to come n open the doors...
Raj sneak in n was shock to see manvi sleeping on the bench... Looking at worried virat he didn't ask anything,.. Cuz he know virat will tell him soon..
Carefully all 3 left the gym...
Raj called Jenna so they can enter the girls hostel without any hassle n place manvi to her room... Jenna helped them without questioning virat or raj...
With extra precaution virat entered her room... Without wasting a time placed her on the bed!
Jenna n raj was guarding the room ..

V- for the first time he saw her so close...although she was all exhausted n all but there was a precious smile on her face... As if she is in a Cinderella land with bunch of fairies ...
Unknown smile crept on his face seeing her angelic expression... However that smile vanished when he realized his stupid prank could have killed her today... Guilt n anger was frowning his face... But thn he bent down a little n whispered "I'm sorry manvi... I didn't know that this prank will lead to this... " n thn he whipped off the tear from her eyes.. Covered her with the blanket n left the room..

On the way...
Raj- so wat was taht?
V- didn't utter a word...
R- understood something was not rite .. Cuz virat Vadhera never stay silent...Acha yeh chor... Miss Ria was mad at u.. U promised her that tonight there will be a dance rehearsal but...

V- shit... Mmm... Well manvi is knocked out so can't do with her... Urghhh...ok I will
Manage something... U just go n have fun with Jenna :p

The night ended peacefully...

8 am girls hostel

M- cockroach!!!!!!! Woke up with a horrified expression...was breathing hard... 5 mins later she relaxed her heart n looked around...
M- how am I here? I was on that dark room... And tha she remembered the flashback! Lazy to rewrite so forget that part :p basically she remembered how virat saved her n she fall asleep on his shoulder :D

M- I should thank him.. But I don't know his name... Oh ya he is miss ria's assistant... That won't be hard to find... But wait... I was there in the gym for that jerk Vadhera... N where was he???? U jack ass Vadhera u will be so dead today... I will not spare u... N thn she got up .. Freshen up .. Head for to find virat n fake virat! :D

NYFA ground...
She was walking fast thinking how to find that Vadhera n thn have to say thank u to stranger/virat!

M- stopped walking! I guess I'm so lucky today!! Hey... Wait... Hey you... Stop...

Ugly guy stopped...
Hey beautiful...

M- u jerk ass!!!! Y the hell u called me last night???... I won't spare u! Bcuz of u I was stuck on that dark room...

V- was crossing by but stopped n hid behind the trees just to see the circus performed by Manvi n the poor guy lmao
Hmmm wild cat... Let's see wat she does...

M- knocked that guy where no sun rises :p n said u freak head... U deserve this! Don't u date to be my partner u get that! A ** hole

Boy- ouch...ooo his face got red! She hit him hard

V- O... Ouch... Ummm... Oops

Boy- he bent down... Unable to handle the pain...

M- u deserve this ! Don't dare to mess with me... U freak Vadhera ...

Boy- o.. Aaa ... Vadhera ??? Wat?

M- should have hit u more hard! Get ur brain fix virat Vadhera... I'm talking to u...

Boy- wats wrong with u women! I'm not...
V- jumped in... Hello guys wats going on???
B- gave him a dead look but still was suffering from the pain... U

V- a um..manvi u should be heading toward the theatre... Miss Ria don't tolerate late students so

M- ok fine! Bye. And u pointing her finger toward that poor soul "inscribe my words in ur brain got that?"

B- was about to say something but virat said ya he got it...u go I will handle him...

M left
V- I'm so sorry Sam...
S- wats that.,. Y she kicked me wat did I do??
V- u know her screw is kinda... Ummm I will take u to clinic don't worry ... I will hand that wild cat
Helped sam to walk to the clinic! Poor boy hope he is fine...
N thn rush to the theatre.

Virat entered... Was looking for manvi but she was not there...

V- to R: where is manvi ma'am?
R- There she is...

M with 5 girls / other students that came along with manvi for the play...

M- wearing a black tank top with white shorts! Looking very sexy..

V- walked up to her n said "it's hot here isn't it...?"

M- not again... I knew I'm hot but get ur eyes out of me...

V- n once again I'm not talking about u... It's really hot here... The AC is not working n I hate working without AC!
Btw keep ur hands to urself lady! U hurt him hard... I hope he can make families or else ahem ahem

M- kinda felt guilty but thn her ego overcame her guilt... So she said "he deserved more than that. No one messes with Manvi Chaudharay. Get that?"

V- temper temper... Well may god bless that boy who will be ur life partner... Hope he stays ALIVE... Winked at her n walked back

V- to Ria:
Halllooo...

R- hey? Looking happy... Wats up?
V- not much it's just it's so hot in here! N I'm sweating a lot ...
R- oh ya... Electricians fixing the line... Ur AC will be on soon! I'm sure u can handle this..
V- I hope so...He was sweating A LOT'

Dance master
Tell all 20 students to stretch!
Seating arrangements: Maya raj jenny manvi n so on n so forth...

v was standing by miss Ria n was gawking at manvi with a naughty smile...

M- saw him staring at her body... She showed middle finger to him

V- he was like "aha n a smirk"
M- get lost!
V- do it properly miss manvi... Ur knees r not straight..
M- gave a dead look n he just chuckle

R- n may I ask y u r not stretching?
V- oh it's cause I am loving ur company here... Btw u r looking sexy as always
R- very funny go n stretch! I don't want any mistakes n we got less time
V- signs..u worry too much ... U might get wrinkles so just relax!
R- Virat Vadhera ! I'm ur professor.. U don't flirt with me...
V- Curved a sweet smile on his face n said "not flirting ma'am saying truth.. But world don't like truths"

R- oh shut up! enough of this flirty mood n go stretch now (she said in a sweet tone)
V- yes ma'am n sat beside manvi n started stretching

Electrician came n said it will take another 20 minutes to fix the socket . The main fuse was out n they were having difficulties to fix it.

V- wala... Best day eva! Without thinking twice he took off his t-shirt n started to wipe his body

Every girl on the that room was just drum stuck. They were stretching n the moment they saw his 6 packs they just became numb n stopped watever they were doing.

V- didn't pay attention nor was thinking wat the h a c k he just did
Phewww much better! Oh god it's too hot here! N just walk by raj

Raj- was very much jealous.. Jenna was drooling virat too
Virat can u just not do that?
V- wat?
Raj- look at urself ... people r having difficulties here..
V- wow! Back off I thought u were straight... Omg Jenna will have a heart attack now
Raj- wat the.. I'm straight wats wrong with u?? I'm Not talking about myself but the girls who r raping u with their eyes!
V- huh? N he turned...
Oh shit... 20 eyes were checking him out! Ummm he walked in the middle n said "ahem ahem ... I know I know I have to work hard... Not happy with 6 packs.. Getting fat u see... Man.. Wat do u think beautiful ladies" he placed his hands on his waist n stand there for a reaction or reply..

Girls just babbled n he just chuckled... Except manvi did not say a thing.. Just was staring at him or shall say his sexy well built body! His biceps abs 6 packs n wet body was just making her crazzzy! Her heart was saying just go n kiss him untill she is satisfied with him!! N brain was saying shut ur eyes stop drooling .. Control ur self

Meantime the choreographer came n ordered everyone to take their positions ... Everyone stand in their designated area... Manvi n virat was in front of each other!

M- finally got the courage to say something other thn drooling... Y u r here? U r not my partner..
V- well too bad too sad u shouldn't have knocked him out! N I'm just helping him to fill his position..

M- whatever! Meanwhile electricians fixed the fuse n everything was working
V- shall we?
M- rolled her eyes n walked in the middle!

The song started so did the AC!

Ps: i won't describe the whole lyrics! It's boring for u to read n makes me do more work! However there is a specific section that I wanted to show! I'm not a dance freak so bare with my description... It it doesn't make sense... Thn oh well too bad skip it lol...

HERE is the song! Do listen its really good :)

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Xs9X8NhQJF4

? Virman dance style : contemporary with a mixture of ball dance?



??I know that if we give this a little time??

Virat rolled manvi on his arms.. Hold her around her skinny waist!

??It'll only bring us closer to the love we wanna find??

virat crashed her on his chest! Sudden pull was shocking for manvi...for a moment her heart stopped.. Her both hands were on his chest she could feel his heart beat racing like a horse... Soon it may fall on the ground.


??It's never felt so real, no it's never felt so right??

virat was just staring at her juicy lips. Didnt blink for once... Manvi's heart was going abnormal... No matter how hard she tried she couldn't remove her glance from
Him...

??Just a kiss on your lips in the moonlight??

she could sense the volcano burning inside his eyes... Those Eyes were asking for a permission ... But she rejected n looked.. Aside.

??Just a touch of the fire burning so bright??
My boy could not handle his emotion he just twirled her around n crashed her back against his chest...
Ps: HE IS SHIRTLESS so

??No I don't want to mess this thing up??

Manvi's heart was saying : kill me!!! Omg don't do this to me I can't control...just wanna dig the floor n burry myself...

??I don't want to push too far??

Instead of leaving her alone he nuzzled his nose n lips around her neck n shoulder.. Kissed her shoulder gently... Manvi might get asthma attack soon... She squeezed his fingers with his cuz both of Manvi's n virat's hand was entwined ...

??Just a shot in the dark that you just might??
Turned her around.. N again crashed her body on his.. This time he was playing with her back...

??Be the one I've been waiting for my whole life??

Suddenly or shall say on purpose he slid his hands under her tank top... He hold her bare waist n pulled her closer ... With a shock she looked down where his hands were but didn't react... How can she .. She was just numb... since she didn't react Virat got the signal

??So baby I'm alright, with just a kiss good nighttt??


Moved his hand a little up.. She was shivering... Had goosebumps.. Virat smiled n crashed his lips on hers... Without giving manvi a chance to react... Well it was just for 30 seconds not taht long..
He pulled apart... N just smiled he had taht naughty smirk too
M blushed like anything... Just wanted to cover her face n run away... But she couldn't he was still holding her close ... N thn he move forward to her lips without blinking for once

R- nice job virat!
V- turned around n saw who the h ell disturb him
R- manvi u r lucky taht u got a partner like Virat Vadhera... I was mesmerized by ur dancing.. U guys was looking so great together. Aah love it.. I got my show stoppers

M- wat? Had no clue whom R was talking to. Virat where?

Ria- don't tell me... Silly girl the boy who is holding u

M- Looked at his hands
V- quickly removed..
R- Virat Vadhera! Te cool dude of NYFA! Or shall say the hotness sensation n the heart throb of this academy...

M- was shocked to bits... Just looked at him
V- was guilty enough... Looked down!
R- ok pack up! I will see u his later! See u all tomorrow...
N she left

M- became red her anger reached to the peak... B4 she could blast at him she just ran away from there...

V- shit... Manvi listen.. I can explain...Wait manvi

M- ran a little faster..
But not good enough... Virat caught her waist n spinner her n thn dropped her on the floor..
She jerked his hand off her waist n SLAP him so hard taht her finger prints were visible...

DON'T U dare to touch me Vadhera ! I hate u... U ... N just ran away from there...

EVERYONE was shock to bits!
Ya SHE slapped him in the main ground ... The boy whom girls would love to die for .. who is famous for his sense of humor n politeness was slapped by Manvi Breaking news :p

Pheww cheesy much? Lol I thought so... Ahhaha ok good news I know how to end it :D don't be that happy its not ending rite here! I got 2 or 3 more parts to go ... Depends on how my brain works. I don't plan ahead but I do know wat will be the ENDING :)

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Ch- 4

Recap:
-Virman had their first kiss
- manvi got to know about virat being virat
- understood his prank n stormed out of the theatre .

M- ran a little faster..
But not good enough... Virat caught her waist n spanned her n dropped her on the floor..
She jerked his hand off her waist n SLAP him so hard that her finger prints were visible...

DON'T U dare to touch me Vadhera ! I hate u... U ...

EVERYONE was shock to bits!
Ya SHE slapped him in front of everyone ... His pride, attitude and reputation crushed into pieces!

M- I thought u were a good guy but I was wrong... cuz of u that guy was injured... N u didn't have the guts to say the truth? Mr hot n handsome is scared like a chicken ! Be a man..

That was it for him... "be a man" can he hear anything worse than this?

M- u bloody coward!
V- looked at him with red eyes!
anger.. Frustration guilt hurt n pain was mixed in his eyes...
M- for a moment she regretted saying those to him cuz if u just look at him... He was just done. But thn since she is miss ego how can she be cool about it...
Was about to say more stuff but virat turned n left the spot..

Raj n Jenna cameo ... Hey wat happen?
M- told them everything.
R- oh my... But manvi virat Is not like manvi you r misunderstanding him
M- listen raj I don't wanna hear anything in favor for him.. So just don't...
J- but..
M- I will catch u guys later.
She was walking by the parking lot and then virat pulled her aside!
Wat the hell... Why the hack did u pull me n how dare u touch me...

V- look manvi... I am..
M- not interested! I don't give a F to u or ur so called "sorry" just stay out of my way n move...
V- im sorry... I was just playing with you... N I really didn't mean to hurt u... Its just...he was honest when he said that... Guilt was sparkling in his eyes..

(I'm hating this!!! Tch Tch my self for making him say sorry to her >.<)

M- oh shut up... U want me to believe that? Ha ha funny joke! I have seen bunch of losers do that trick so don't u act smart .. Cuz rite now u r looking like a lame loser.

(oh no no miss manvi.. U don't insult my boy like that.. I will grill u >.<)

V-just lost his temper... Made a tight fist n banged on the car... Ps: it was his sexy lady BMW 520!

M- sacred much.
V- I'm saying sorry damn it...but u..U don't have any curtsy to understand someone's feeling.. N I'm so over with u.. I'm not gonna waste my time to apologize n wait for ur forgiveness..

M- thn get lost from here y wasting my time? U moron..
V- Incase u forgot... It's my ground... My school n u came here not me So u may leave. Forget it I don't wanna see ur face...He turned n walked off!

M- Incase u forgot. Atithi devo bhava... I guess ur mom didn't teach u that.
V- that was the limit for him. He turned around n walked back toward her..
M- wasn't afraid but then when he came really close to her she was a little nervous..

V- bent down way too low that manvi dashed her back on his car...
They were 2 inches apart.
Don't u dare to utter a word against my mom. U have no rights to do so.. Get that! Now leave before I lose my control n do something that u will regret for ur life!
N he was just staring at her.. His pupil went black... There was something in his eyes that manvi couldn't figure out ( no his not a vampire :/ wish he was Damon Salvator^_____^ )

M- get off of me... U pervert... N she stomped on his right foot with her 5 inch hills

V- didn't feel anything .. his full concentration was on her beautiful brown eyes.. But then she was smashing his toes...
Ouch! Sss... N she pushed him so hard that he was unbalanced but control himself n step up...

M- u scr**** I told u before don't come near me.. N that's wat u get for messing with manvi chaudhary.

V- wasn't listening to her ... Darn thing was hurting ..

M- just walked off but he dragged her on the same spot... She was shock.. Usually boys don't do that rite...
V- Very angry... Wat do u think of urself ha... This kind of tactics doesn't work with me. Got that? I'm not those jerk head who loves to follow a brainless girl like u... I have my own personality ok. N ya next time keep ur hands legs n whatever to ur self cuz if u hurt me next time.. Well there won't be next time..
He turned around to walk back..

M- u pervert u Ki...Ki...
V- turned with a smirk.. I wat?
M- u.. Regretted for mentioning the "kiss part"
V- I did wat? Angry expression turned in to a mischievous one...
M-urghh... Just stomped on his foot n left..
V- ouch... U bitch...Mera pair... He took off his shoes n it was bleeding... I will kill u bandariya...
Meantime someone called...

V- wat u want (in angry tone)
Viren- virattt
V- bit his tongue... Bhaii...
Viren- y u r yelling???
V- bhai it's hurting... Ouch...
Viren- wat? Kya hua u ok... Virat tell me Where r u? I'm coming...
V- no no... I'm fine it's just that butch stomped on my toe n crushed it...
Viren- wattt? A girl stomped on ur foot?
V- haaa... I swear I will kill her.
Viren- hahhaahahahhaha. O M G... Hahahhahahah ...
V- bhaiii >.<
Viren- ok ok chill...but how did taht happen n medicine lagaya ke nehi..
Is it too bad?
V- idk it's bleeding..
Viren- go to the clinic now... N let me know when u r done with first aid... Ok? Take care... N haaa dubara aisa na ho dhyan rakhna.
V- ha ok bye..

Viren- hmm yeh ladki kaun hai... Lol Jo bhi hai manna parega virat se kam nehi hai... I love it... Hahaha

Kis baat pe itna muskurarahi ho viren ji? Girl friend ka MSG tha kiya...

Viren- turned n pulled her in his arms.. Well I wish girl friend ka hota.. U see I am so bored this days

Jeevika- kyaaa. N hit his arm..
Viren- chill .. Tumhare boyfriend ka phone tha...
J- boyfriend? Viraattt..Kaisa hai vo? Kab araha hai ... Kya kaha usne? Thik toh hai na??? Bataonaaa...
Viren- wow wow... Break lagao... Miss Fm vo thik hai bas pair mei thori se chot aye hai...
J- kya??? Kaisee... Aur app mujhe abhi Bol rahai ho... Viren ji app...

Viren- Jeevika breath in breath out... He is fine.. It's just one girl stepped on his toe that's it.
J- wat??? But y?
Viren- hahahah... He didn't tell me the reason but he was sounded funny...
J- kya virenji aap bhi.. I hope he is fine...
Viren- he will be... He is a strong boy aise thori na muscles banaye hai so chill.. I'm thinking about the girl who did that to him... N ya he is with the nurse so don't worry he will call me..


NYFA Clinic
V- ouch ouch ouch oh ... Aaa...stop stop stpppoopp...

Nurse- relax virat... If u don't let me clean the wound then it will swell up n the infection will make it worse.

V- aah.. Ok... But generally ... It's hurting... Is my toe is broken? Don't tell me...

N- lol no u were lucky but don't put pressure and no dancing for 3 days at least.

V- haha very funny joke. Miss Ria will kill Me

Nurse- don't worry I will talk to her.

V- ah it's fine! I can handle it. Don't worry

Nurse- but virat.. U don't understand

V- that's so sweet of u but I can handle it sweet heart (the doctor is out of station n she is a student /nurse )

(In mind) cant sit like chicken. Miss Manvi it doesn't matter how bad it hurts u will never see my weak side.
I guess bandage is done? May I leave?

Nurse- I guess :(
V- ok then see ya later.. Virat gave her a hug n left the room.


Girls hostel

M- I hate u Vadhera...she remembered the moment when virat touched her lips...
Urghhh y did I let him... Ass hole Vadhera I will kill u!

NYFA ground

Virat was walking n girls were staring at him n then someone said something n they just laughed at him..

He knew y they were laughing! Just looked at them n they stop laughing...n then he saw the girl he hate the most ... Guess who? Of course manvi ^_^
Manvi saw him n her blood boiled... He walked toward him so did he ...
Both were pretty close but then virat hit her shoulder n just left...

M- ouch u moron.. She was accepting a sorry but he would care less. Don't even look back nor turned just walked off...
M- y do I even expect from him. Idiot.

V- u will never get anything from me ... N he head toward te gym.

Gym

Trainer- here u are! Welcome to club! Where the hell have u been virat? U didn't show ho since 2 days!!! What's wrong with u?

V- chill coach I was just taking a break. There is no harm in that.

T- ya there is none! Will see how much weight u gained then will talk.

He weighed virat n he just gained 1.2 pounds.

T- he gave a dead look to virat! U ate burgers
V- shit.. I'm sorry . Come one I didn't touch them since a year...u can give me that as a Christmas gift u know.
T- yah sure... U have Ur gifts..
250 push ups, 150 sit ups, 50 crunches n 20 mile treadmill jogging in 1 hr! Make it fast...
V- but...
T- 40 mintues... if u utter a word I will make sure u don't leave this gym
For 3 days! Got that ?now warm up n start working

No options left he walked toward the treadmill ..after he was done with jogging .. He did Sit ups n crunches in 30 mins!
For the first time he was fast n did not take any break nor stop to drink water. Was Just running like a mad horse.

T- was amazed but happy! Finally virat listened to him without nagging or any buttering...

N here comes the 250 pushups...
He recall nurse's warning "do not
Put pressure"
T- wat? Tired I thought so.. U r no use..
V- nope I'm not n he started doing pushups... It doesn't matter how painful it was he did not stop for a sec. N he did 300 instead of 250

T- ok stop! U r done... Relax have this... He handed him a water bottle
V- gulped it instantly..
T- pheww... R u ok? I have never seen u like that... I mean u didn't even complain for once... That's so not virat Vadhera... What happen? Any personal issues?

V- gave a sweet smile n said " aah.. I'm fine it's just I can't stay at gym for 3 days... I have to see my family... N I just can't wait to go back"

T- aaa... He patted his shoulder n said "u know u r a good kid. Ur mom should be proud of u na..."

V- haha I hope so... Am I done for the day? Can I change?

T- oh ya! Good job today proud of u... I will be back

V- cool n he sat on the bench... Took off his shoes... N his socks was blood red...
Phewww... Lol ... This can go to trash...
T- return to take his water bottle n rushed to him..
Omg wats this? Blood? R u ok? Let me Get first aid...

V- relax coach. It's just a small scratch... I am fine...
T- no u r not.. Look at ur toes.. Y didn't u tell me?
V- lol u said if I utter a word i have to stay here for 3 days ..
T- urghh. Screw me im so sorry... I didn't know... Here put ur foot on this it willl make it a little better...

V- he put his foot inside the ice cubes... 10 mins later his toes were numb n it wasn't hurting

T- crazy kid take care ok? N ya tomorrow go take rest! No gym tomorrow...

V- mad god bite u?

T- oh shut up or else I will
Make u do 500 sit-ups
V- oo
T- funny boy take care n ya see a doc. I hope ur toes r not cracked.
V- I hope so too.. See ya...
T- left ...

Ps: he did not stop because Manvi's words were hovering his brain "BE A MAN!"
Yap my boy is a crazy one . he can go to extreme if he is angry so it's better not to mess with him :)

V- urghhh y does it hurt??? Mum... Ouch...
His phone ranged...
Hey girl friend... U r awake??? Haww bhai went to date with his GF kya?

Jeevika- oh shut up... Now tell me
How are u? N how's ur toe? Does it hurt? Did u see a doc???? Virat hello u there?

V- god girlfriend break lagao... I'm not running in a Marathon... One
Question at a time.. I'm ok! U can breathe. I did first aid n I'm perfectly alright.
J- hmm. Ok but r u sure u r alright?? Look if u can't walk then there is no need to walk u better do complete bed rest! Samjhe
V- yes ma'am! Now tell Me how are u? How's everyone?

J- I'm good .. Everyone is alright n we r missing u. Btw when r u coming????
V- bola thanaa surprise... Now u sleep n I go have lunch.. Ok ?
J- OK but take care ... N ya no masti.
V- yes boss
J- oh wait..
V- yes?
J- who is the girl that did this to u?must be someone special na?
V- bhabii She is such a witch! I hate her. Brainless creature jab dekho apna pair chalati hai...
J- "bhabii" ooo some one is really angry ha... Ok ok cool down angry boy. Won't mention her but she have an attitude n u have to accept that rite?
V- girlfriend .. I'm hungry bye!
J- but.. Ok fine u take care n sleep well n ha don't put pressure on it. N if it really hurts then see a DOC ok!
V- Yes I will . Now can I go?
J- hmm yes u may.. pagal bye.
They hung up n virat head toward his hostel.

Poor boy couldn't walk properly but tried his best n reach the parking lot.

There he saw a couple was kissing.. He wud care less cuz its obvious in NYFA but it was manvi... *hides b4 u all throw tomatoes .. Well I don't like all goody stuff! It's too boring *
V- lol god bless that boy! Watever...n he walk toward his car n got in.


Boy- he was going wild... His kiss was getting more hotter n stronger... He moved toward her neck n was kissing it harshly ...

M- ok stop .. U r going too far... Get off me...
Boy- chill baby... Let's have some.. U won't be disappointed. N he started to slid her tank top...
M- I said get off... She pushed him n walked off...

V- wore his glares! Was looking smashing hot! The same one as UK Trip :p (p.s: anyone know the brand name?) started his engine n start moving...
M- didn't look n got in the middle of the road...
Beep beep...
M- relax dude! I'm moving... U don't have to beep horn.

V-pulled down his window half way n said this is not ur personal property miss.. so don't walk in between.. you never know who knock u out

M- chill out. I was moving she couldn't see him since his glass was black.

Meantime that boy came. Hey baby whats wrong.. Come na will have fun...

M- I said no na... Get lost.

V- rolled down his window all the way n said "dude ur hard luck. N ya be careful she is a wild monkey :) see ya adios

M- :O wat did u call me?
V- if u r deaf then it's not my problem! N he just zoomed away!

M- u monster! I hate u.
N u ugly Face (stranger) don't u dare to come close to me cuz if u do u won't be alive n I'm done with u.. Saying that she zoomed away ..

------------ end of part 4----------

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Res..

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awesome...
Double updates...
To double awesome...
Like both one...
Thanks for pm..
Nd;
continue soon...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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#15
woww double updates thanx alott for the double updates...
Those were two awesome updates just soo much fun to read...
Manvi woww she is just soo amazing with full of attitude loved her character her ...
Virat shudnt have done tht it was mean and he gets a slap plus two high heels on his foot lol poor guy ..:p
Manvi kissing a guy who the hell was he ???
Virat being so damn effected with manvi's words haan itna gussa like tht ...
Update next part soon
And thanx alott for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
thnx sooo much...double dhamaka😆

gonna read it😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
loved virat's character 😛
u wrote it so well
his attitude , style and the i enjoyed the most is his flirting man 🤣
the dance sequence was very well written 👏

now abt manvi i liked her ego part a girl must be lyk that bt if a girl have soo much attitude and ego in herself then how can she just kiss a banda aweein he muftt ka 😕
over all its a wonderfull work
your writing touched my heart
just make the manvi and that guy part clear in next update
and update soon
thumbs up 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Fab update as usual.. loved it.. I read dis update again Faria.. 😉 Keep writing.. 😊
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awesome updates
really luv them
continue soon
plz do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was just amazing faria 👏
both have their own egos 😃
loving to read it 😃
plz pm me too 😃
uff manvi's anger and virat's anger loving it 😃
update asap 😊

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