i think i have never mentioned before,, u know what, u are an excellent admirer!! ur description about nature always makes me calm.. and in this chapter, i experienced a blissful morning from your words.. very very serene and beautiful!!
''Calm waves, shimmering clean water, cool breeze, and the humming sound of seagulls personified the magical land of a perfect paradise, a place where existence of unbearable pain or torment served as forbidden sin.'' such a nice line!! 'unbearable pain or torment served as firbidden sin' wow!! brilliant!!
Faria,, such a sweet beginning u know,, the disturbance from the sun rays, manvi's shock at such a close view of virat, she admiring him dearly, virat's silent observation, manvi's words, confession, blush and what more.. all these were so pleasant.. u know my surrounding turned all magical and romantic with passing description of the cute one sided speech of manvi.. it was so sweet to hear manvi complaining him ''what.. Why are you silent now? Usually you have answers for everything but when is the right time you stay quite. What's up with you huh? Why don't you get it that I... Bit her lips.. I.. Ok I like you... Just said it..happy? After a pause.. Do u like me too?" this is absolutely awesome!!! i just smiled as widely as possible!! never expected something this sweet from u to be honest.. u always gave an egoistic, arrogant manvi,,, u broke her attitude all of a sudden and now delivering such an innocent and a sweet side of her is mind blowing!!!
i did as everybody expected virat to tease her vt this,, but his way of teasing her, her reaction for it, virat's action for manvi's reaction,, all these were so different!! u just proved me he's unique.. i dont know why, i cant help but admire this virat these days.. i mean he's so unique and his character is adorable! u know i always call him different and he made me feel it again..
-this virat chooses to prove manvi that she is wrong when she is wrong, he criticises.. he does forgets, forgives and moves on but only after giving her a lesson,, and yeah its true she'll never even in her dreams will think of lying to him after such a treatment from him..
-he's not fake, he doesnt gain attention by being all sweet,, but is actually sweet vt his own self of teasing attitude and piercing gaze..
-he is a talented speaker, a good thinker, he uses every freaking chance to be himself.. like u know, he confused manvi alot to say that he wanted to start things fresh,, he freaked out manvi by telling her that all those food was for them but in reality a huge crowd came for supper.. he took her soul out by making her believe that he's doing arrangements for their SR (that was epic!!! grinned for heaven's sake!).. confusing, making things hard is HIM,, just like u Faria,, if not he wudnt torture manvi vt love and he wudnt torture us vt the 'bloody diary-secrets of life'
-as he admits,, ''I never said I am a good guy n I'm not that bad either'',, he is neither good nor bad, he carries his own attitude... damn he is unique, strange, weird, interesting, cool, smart and a freaking soul!!! tell him to reduce his awesomeness... i cant but adore this character!!!
i always love him when he is himself.. a carefree guy who loves and lives his life.. a damn unique character.. i cant praise u enuf for designing such a character!!! his ideologies, his theories, his view on things are unique.. he sees the world with different eyes ('he' means obviously you) i was so amazed at his philosophies, his theories of life, truth, etc.. ''Truth cant be concealed, and a lie hurts more then the bitter truth. I prefer the bitter truth instead of being the victim of a dumb lie.''
''My point is when you decide to move forward .. You just move on, don't look back n worry about the consequence. Obstacle is in your way? Face it, don't run away''
these and a lot more lines amazed me!!! u are a great author Faria!! hats off for these brilliant lines!! u just took virat's character to unknown heights!!! just loved u and him..
i feel like keeping on telling about this virat and manvi and u.. this is such a long chapter, u have included alot, if i decide to tell, the comment's length will increase and u'll fall asleep.. so let me stop..
not landing in which place u destined to land the end of this chapter does not make a chapter crap.. this chapter is like some fresh air after so much trouble.. it spoke of manvi's brewing emotions which she chose to hide,, but to whom is she hiding, the bad-good boy of the era Virat Vadhera,, can she get away from the grip?? hell no!! that 'no' u proved to me from the interesting and unique character of virat made the chapter rocking!! i swear that this chapter was epic!!
borrow my eyes to read your work please..
and dont mention about 'you'll hate me after next chapter',, its your story, your wish, you have planned and will take it in that manner.. i loved what u wrote so far and will love whatever ahead and so will others..
ending with loads of love..
Anupamaa
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