[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED - Page 94

Originally posted by: NushIsh

As usual I'm extremely late, blame it on my boss.

The Vihaan and Manvi parts were really cute, its like she sees Virat through him.

Interestingno one knows where Virat is and you have made Manvi preggy which means that if Virat was out of her life for 10years then he couldnt be the father. Or could he ??

The present parts with the Manvi and Virat cuteness is really nice to read, finally after all this time you are giving some passionate scenes for them. Forgot to tell that loved how you put that Virat asked permission to kiss manvi i know you mentioned in my thread that you thought that writers always go for the kiss rather than ask permission. Love how you are writing things that you always want to read.

Ok so instead of the mystery getting solved we're getting into more mystery now the question is what happened to Virat and who's the baby daddy. Know the whole weird convo on fb but that would be so weird if he had you know what stored and please don't make Varun the father.

where the hell did he come from

update soon, you might not see me much around on FB but hope to be back soon.

take care

Love ya

Nush

Sorry will go but cranky!!! U will see a different virat next!!!!! He won't be easy on her !!! His pride, ego n self respect will be his power n manvi gonna cry every single day !!!! Rofl I'm so excited but I have to restrict myself from giving u ahem stuff as the IF RULE CONCEREN! Which is goood in a way I don't have to work hard n be embarss on the scenes!!! However, dirty minds will be dirty >_< anyways rite now planning to end rape case have dragged much need a stoppage! Phewww as far as father concern I'm loving this game babyyy soon u will know who the father is! N for FB convo I'm still rolling on the floor... U better come back to FB soon miss u there :)! Can I be mean n make vihaan cry?? I love to make him be in trouble..

This is time i m too late !!!! sorrryy yaaar !!!! first eid preparation n all later college !! everything !!!! psssh :/

chapter 22 _ awwieee viren n manvi convo !!! tat was really sweet !!! :D i m so happy too coz u praised ur boy :P
vihaan ki toh baat hi alag hai !!! he is smart n sweetheart !!!! ❤️ why is viren hiding tat diary !!!🤔

OMG !!! virman in each other arms !! ahem ahem !!! Kya mast scene tha !!!😉
he was playing piano on her bare stomach☺️ yeh kya ho rahaa hai :P my god !!!😳 manvi ko toh hyper honaaa hi tha !!!! :D 😉 ahem ahem !!!! :P

virat reaction was hilarious😆😆 thank god he didn't remember anything !!! :P
tat part was damn funny !!!! lamaao !!!! i m still a man !!!! tat line cracked me up !!!gosh i can't stop laughing !!!!

i loved fatty n viat convo !!! :D it is sweet !!! their bonding is nice !!! :)
manvi ignoring virat !!! lol !! but virat is virat !!! he will never ever give up !!!! :P


Chapter 23_ fabulous update !!!! starting from vihaan n manvi !!! My god !! how much i loved them n their bond !!!! vihaan is really naughty n sweet !! the way he was teasing her !!!! so cute !!!! i loved it !!! awwieee vihaan manofying manvi was super cute !!! Lovely ❤️

wat the !!! who is this varun 😲 thank god manvi ne engagement thor diyaaa !!!!! :D

haww blackmailing manvi !!!! vihaaan !!!! puraa apne chachu pe gayaa hai 😛 now the diary is in manvi hand !! Great :)

ok the dance part !!! tat was awesomely written !!!! i could juz imagine everthing in front of my eyes !!! nice selection of song !!!! lol no one can stop him !!! kya mast character hai !!! :P

abt the pregnancy !!!! i can't see manvi carrying other child !!! so keep ur evil brain aside of let manvi carry virat baccha only !!!

umm abt the age i m 19 !!!!

waiting for next part !!! looking forward for it !!! Continue soon Faria :P :D

NEW TEASER

M-"wat do u all think of me huh? A piece of crap who is no longer in use, a soft toy, whom u played with until I became old, or a s**tty bitch, a cheap prostitute who is bound to fulfill ur lustful desires? A stone cold statue whom u kept for decoration until it had a crack n shattered into pieces? Who am I to u???huh Who am I??" shouted on top of her lungs, tears were rolling down her cheek continuously
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Jer-" phewww cheesy wasnt she? Gosh so dramatic.. Anyways I can work out with her but what you gonna do Virat? Poor bud.. She's never gonna believe you... U may try but ops good luck" :p
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Jer- "finish his game... He is no longer in use... Wen u are done call back.. Until then "DO NOT DISTURB", gonna have sum fun now.." He hung up

dont ask me for update cuz I'm not touching this chapter for a while .. Y? Cuz I'm writing another chapter :p I wrote this long back for this chapter so just posted. I still don't know wat will go in there it's just a rough sketch :p so if u have patience than wait for it if no then too bad u know I'm a evil soul... I rest my case.

Sayonara <3

Nice Teaser..!!Waiting for the Update..!

Aaawww nice n cute update
love manvi n vihaans bonding
you make me love virat more n more with each update
hes an adorable bad boy
really wanna kno manvis pregnancy secret
virat ka bacha hai bhi ya nahi... Really wanna kno
eager for next chappy
update soon faria dear 😉

lovelnyc teaser..!!!!

seeems like sumthing is gonna end ...waiting for the update

lovely nyc teaser..!!!!

Originally posted by: anvyagnihotri

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New reader? Or silent one?

thnx for the teaser..nw update fast...😉.😉.😉.😉.😉.😉.😉.😉