[VM FF+18] One Mistake Chapter 25, pg 144 UPDATED

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#751

it was awesome

superb update

loved flashbacks

virat and maanvi n viren and virat's flashback was superb

plz cont soon

thanks for pm me

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@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#752

Awsm updt... The terrace scene was very heart wrenching... ... ... At present manvi is pregnant!!!... Where is viru the bad boy ??... Pls cont soon and thanks fr th pm...

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itsfate

@itsfate

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

awesome update

liked it

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

Ok my brain is all over the place after this update
nt able to digest properly
so all im gonna do us keep reading n figuring stuff out
until u decide to hav merct on us all n clear things out soon 😉

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

Honestly i have read it 2 days bak !! :P it is juz tat i was being too lazy 😛
Coming to the update it is was Fabulous !!! Man i m juz loving this flashback parts !!! virman ,jeevika virat ,vv brothers !!! awwwieee !!! every scene was wayy too good !!! ❤️
so virat kept the name vihaan !!! awesome ^_^ n the virman scene !!! lovely !!! :DD but u didn't complete it !!!! i want complete scene !!! plz !!!
n the vv bothers !!! eeks !!! they are juz mind blowing !!! ❤️ the scenes bring a big smile on my face !!! :D

Wat the !!! u blackmailing us !!! we can't say we hate Jeremy !!!:/
ok with "I love jeremy he is soo hot" !!!!;(
viren n vihaan scene !! cute :)

haww viren saw the diary !!! ab kya hogaa :( don't make vihaan suffer yaar >.<
again u stop at the wrong place !!! still the question remain tat where is virat !!! ???
looking forward for next update !! will be eagerly waiting !!! continue soon !!! :D

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ashfaqmiyaann

@Anees.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#756

omg what a teaser pls pls pls update soon pls

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SNTG

@SNTG

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#757

I M EXTREMELY LATEEE THIS TIMEEE !!!! i missed ur 2 updates and then u completed 100 pg's awww CONGRATULATIONSSS FARIAAA ...PARTYYY;))))) and and and and 2 UPDATESSS lets go with 18th first i know i know he won't do anything, he hurt her again goddd her handdd . WHAT DO YOU DO TO VIRAT !!! where is he and maanvi 7 months pregnent, where is virat i know u will NOT riveal it soonerrr.

and coming to part 19th this part was bit confusing :p , now J is in que hahaha let the truth come out i can only say this and there were more flashback in this part but every relation u should it very nicely like VV and JV , and the goons and virat hahahha, and now coming to present goddd mera sir ghum raha tumare present , flashback ke chakker main :(( maanvi fainteddd now what will he dooo. and just wanna remind you my wish ;)

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Faria12345

@Faria12345

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: SNTG
I M EXTREMELY LATEEE THIS TIMEEE !!!! i missed ur 2 updates and then u completed 100 pg's awww CONGRATULATIONSSS FARIAAA ...PARTYYY;))))) and and and and 2 UPDATESSS lets go with 18th first i know i know he won't do anything, he hurt her again goddd her handdd . WHAT DO YOU DO TO VIRAT !!! where is he and maanvi 7 months pregnent, where is virat i know u will NOT riveal it soonerrr.
and coming to part 19th this part was bit confusing :p , now J is in que hahaha let the truth come out i can only say this and there were more flashback in this part but every relation u should it very nicely like VV and JV , and the goons and virat hahahha, and now coming to present goddd mera sir ghum raha tumare present , flashback ke chakker main :(( maanvi fainteddd now what will he dooo. and just wanna remind you my wish ;)

Feeling like a Santa clause :/ wat was ur wish again? Virman scene? DO U REALLY THINK I WILL GIVE U VIRMAN SCENE? 🤬

What will he do with manvi? Eeh noting let him party <3 let's go party tonight$!

Edited by Faria12345 - 12 years ago

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bebo

@Vibhu3

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#759

omggg!! m so sorry!! m late again but was busy in lectures n classes too!! yea!! the update as always great ❤️ loveed it really!! u dont even know how much m addicted to this story coz this an inspiritation for me to write VID lol 😃 but its true !! now back to update !! fariaaa!! why u just stop it in the middle when m falling for it more than anything???

do i say i hate u for that? or i should sue u ???? lol not at all ❤️

lol what virat is planning to do?? m yea!! my vihaan boy is gone!! whoppss!! daddy got the dairy!! baby is kicking manvi lol 😛 virat ki hi beti h i think so!!! i just guessed !! update jaldi i want more of virman moments!!!!😊😊😊