SS~Claimed love~Final Part updated Page 90 :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys😃
im here with a brand new SS
(pata hai, maine last wala abhi poora nahi kiya😆 more about it later)
for now im posting a trailor..please read and tell me if i should continue with it or not?😊


Prologue

'Kuvar Arjun singh' ruk jao..nahi toh!" she yelled. But he didn't listen and jumped out of her hands towards some interesting thing he had spotted in the bushes. She eventually let him go and looked behind to see her best buddy, her childhood friend Kabeer was coming towards her with a juicy looking mango in his hands which was half eaten already. "Manu, yeh dekh mujhe kya mila hai" he proudly showed off his catch to her.

"isme kya badi baat hai? Aam nahi dekha kya kabhi pehle" she wasn't bothered.

"yeh koi aisa vaisa aam nahi hai'ise main un khadoos Rajaon ke bageeche se todkar laaya hoon" he licked it.

"toh mere liye bhi ek leke aata na'"Manu made a face.

"tujhe chahiye toh khud jaakar le aana..main nahi laa sakta" Kabeer said.

"Kabeer, meri khatir bhi nahi?'" she lowered her lips, scrunched her eyes.

"theek hai chal dono saath me chalte hain, par woh tera Kuvar Arjun singh?" "tu uski fikar mat kar, woh rahega yahan..ab chal jaldi kar" she cut in.

She was Manyata, the only daughter of the Royal priest, Raj purohit as everyone called him. Kabeer was her neighbor, her best friend from the time he was born one month after she had. They both were 20 years old. Both were studying Bachelor of Arts (in music and drama) in the nearest city. Manyata loved to dance and Kabeer loved to sing. The boy-girl divide never came between them as Manyata's Parents never restricted her at anything. Kabeer's father was away as an army officer and his mother had died a few months after he was born.

'Kuvar Arjun singh' followed them to the Mangrove and started circling her legs, in the hope that they will take him inside too.



ok so that was the prologue..
i'd post the first chapter day after tomorrow😃
if you want me to continue with this SS, please 'like' and 'comment'
this SS will be updated either once in 5 days or once a week at the most😳
and one more thing, many would be angry that i haven't ended my other SS yet and started this already😆 don't worry guys..that will be updated tomorrow..😊
lastly big Thank you to my sisu who helped me with an apt title😃 love you🤗



Hyper links to the updates:





Chapter Two

Claimed love part 3


Claimed love chapter four

Claimed Love Chapter five

Claimed love Chapter Six

Chapter Seven



Chapter eight


Claimed Love chapter nine



Chapter Ten

Chapter Eleven
Chapter 12

Chapter 13


Chapter 14

Chapter 15

Chapter 16

Chapter 17

Chapter 18

Chapter 19

three updates

Chapter 24

Chapter 25

Last Part
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LittleDhampir. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Hello Vibha mom🤗
Great starting and loved the title.😃
Well, I have my doubts on the character but I think that'll be cleared on coming updates.
Kuvar Arjun Singh...Manyata and Kabeer...then where's Uday.
lastly big Thank you to my sisu who helped me with an apt title🤔 I thought you and Krishna mom were collaborating to write this one.😕😆
Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsssmmm prolouge vibha dear but who is kunvr arjun singh
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ossum cont soon
wonder who is arjun singh
anyhow update soon nd do pm me aswell
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
really really sorry for res
n sorry for late comment
i m busy some so i m unable to comment n read hope u understand now..
now come to update n prologue...!!

very nice...story liked it so much..
but arjun is a cunning dog i dont like him
but still nice n awsome prologue
great superb job nice plz update soon
i m eager waiting to read more...
plz update cs very soon i m waiting
thanks for the pm
n plz pm me ur other update
continue this asap soon...
what's ur name dear??
update fast plz n cs n chapter one update very fast n plz update ur other ss plz fast
by the way me zainab
now bye.

sorry one question who is arjun??i m confused who is arjun means dog
Edited by zainab.udayveer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fantastic prologue...continue soon...where is uday...?nd who is this kuvar arjun singh...?nd thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG 😲 ... Kuvar Arjun Singh is a dog😆!!!!!!!!! Great prologue Vibha ... eager to read more😳! Waiting for your other update tomorrow. Thanks for the PM😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
hmm..
accha prologue hai
kuwar arjun singh
aur ye Kabir isse kyun dala hai tumne kahani mein?
Uday ki entry kyun nahi karayi?
jaldi karna warna
Aam thodne jaa rahe hai😉kya waha Uday ki entry hogi?
nice 👍🏼
jaldi update karo tullu😆
mekko PM karna na bhoolna
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lol it was awesome vibhu...👏
Iam really waiting for Chapter1...😃

Is Manyata going to Uday's feet in search of mango...lol poor girl..😆

Hey vibhu kahin Kabeer ki secret crush toh nahi manyata ke upar😕...U know a boy can never see a friend in a girl...as a matter of fact...(unless she has another)😆😆😆

anyways continue soon sisu..thanks for pm
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome prologue, eagerly waiting for chapter 1
Thank for the pm

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