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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

oh no hope they don't die, how did Udayveer end up trying to help Tanya?



Thank you Sonali 😃 the update im gonna post now, will clear your doubt...😳



Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Wonderful Part Vibha

Very nicely written
I loved Arjun and Manyata scene awww so so cute glad you included him in...precap is scary so much suspense
cont soon



Thank you Anam di 😃 i'll post the update now...



Originally posted by: angleroops

hey thanks for dedicating the update to me

i m so happy
sry for late comment
oh so uday is thinking that manyata loves kabir
and here manyata loves udday
oh god i hope manyata confess her felling
the promo is dangerous
i hope uday is fine
how uday is helping tanya
tahnks for pm



Thanks for the comment Rupali...you guessed right, Uday is thinking exactly that😉


Originally posted by: capriya

Hai , great part ! The feelings of Manyata are very natural . Thanks for the PM. Continue...



Thank you Priyanka 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Vibha - A huge hug to u for updating . As u know (I've said it before) - THIS IS MY FAVOURITE SS 😳. & Thanx so much for the dedication 😃 ... it lifted my low mood! Im glad you liked it, because i was really apprehensive whether you three(the people i dedicated the update to) would like it or not😳

The warning u gave was 100% UNTRUE - the entire time I was reading ... my eyes were wide open, anticipating the next scene .aww Thank you so much😛
OK - let's start at the beginning ... the chapter was incredible 👏!!!
After u ended the previous chapter - I had 2 guesses in mind of what'll happen : 1) I thought terrorists entered the school , and since Manyata was on the verge of leaving the premises ... they grabbed her from behind! & 2) I thought those drug addicts/dealers (Walter and Lily's gang {hope I got the names right 😕}) tracked down Manyata - now they want to kill heri did have that plan but changed it at the last moment😆 because she could identify them later on 😔. But I was wrong - and the track u opted for was much much better 👍🏼! Thank you I liked how Manyata encouraged herself to take on her attacker ... she is MRS BRAVE-MAN after all 😉!! Kabir is lucky that he's still alive after that 😆!
Awww - Kuwar Arjun Singh is in love ... and he has found himself a mate ... too bad his "heropanthy" let him down 🤣. these men i tell you🤣
I felt really bad for Uday 😭 ... it must've been so difficult for him to witness Manyata's closeness to Kabir💔, and then his realisation that he'd never get such loving looks from Manyata . That was so sad .but next part, everyone will be sad
Manyata writing Uday a letter ... was so cute ; I'd go for MY DEAREST UDAY ☺️ (🤣) !!
And the final part, where Manyata is waiting so anxiously for Uday to profess his love for her , is going to end poorly ... because I feel Uday is going to set her free Exactly right....
Now coming to the precap ... WHAT WAS THAT😲?? I have this image of the climax of NO ENTRY happeningunfortunately i haven't seen that movie , don't kill Uday or Tanya please Vibha . Uday i won't kill😳
Anything else ... - or ya , U are going to update in 3-4 days time , I'll be looking forward to the Final Chapter ! Sorry about the delay...
I think I better go now ... ,
Thanks for the PM .
PS - I hope U got another concept in mind ... we want another SS from you let me see🤓😆 .



This was such a lovely comment Navina😃
thank you so much🤗🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nash..

WONDERFUL UPDATE!! Thank you Nishu🤗

I literally had my heart in my mouth..thinking that Manyata is in Danger-Zone now but funnily it wasn't so..

Manyata and Arjun scenes were so cute. Even I think that he has got himself a girlfriend🤣sabki jodiyan pehle se banti hai😉

You stopped it at such an exciting point di.. i did Have got so curious. I beileive Uday is going to let Manyata go her own way (though I Dont want THAT)..thats absolutely right.. Anyways lets see what you have restored for us!! im gonna update now...

Please continue soon.



Thank you so much Nishaya😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nityatandon


Hey... Vibha...
Sorry for the late comment...
One thing I noticed is that the chapter which is marked 24 should actually be 23 and the chappy which is marked 25 should be 24...
Anyways...
Coming to the updates...
Both the updates were fabulous...
I would comment chappy wise...

Chappy 24 (23)
So finally Manyata and Uday escaped...
And it was all because of Manyata...
Because Uday was toh completely drunk...
Abhi pini thi usko bhi...
Aww... Kabir still helped him...
This is called true friendship...
Ohh god... Why is somebody pointing a gun at Manyata...
And who is he...

Chappy 25 (24)

The Manyata and Arjun part was cute...
Manyata was going to tell Uday about her feelings...
But he interrupted...
I think...
Now he will tell her that the bet is over and that she can go to her house back...
Pls don't let that happen Vibha...

Update soon...
And thanx for the PMs...



Thanks for the detailed comment Nitya😃 yes, i did make a mistake with the numbering...lol
all of you guessed it correctly, he indeed is calling off the challenge..😉
i'll update in few minutes😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Please

Please
Please
Please
Please
Please
Please
Update Vibha!!!



How can i ignore such a comment🤗
gimme a moment..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey... Vibha...
First of all I am so happy...
I am the first one to comment...
And its the first time ever in you story...
And that to on the last chappy...
Now keeping my excitement aside...
Lets come to the chappy...
Finally Manyata and Uday became Manveer...
They confessed their love to each other...
And that slap that Manyata gave to Uday...
He deserved it...
He is letting her go...
Anyways...
Alls well that ends well...
But you killed Kabir and Tanya...
I liked both of them...
Chalo Kabir toh returned...
But what about Tanya...
And I had thought that Manveer's child's name would be SRK... 😉😆
And you better write a new story...
As you have finished this one...
Thanx for the PM...
Edited by nityatandon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful ending...loved it...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Eeeppss - you updated . I'm sooo happy! And the update was Just Marvellous!!!!

Oh , sorry - I forgot ... Hi Vibha 😃
- u made my day!!! I had a very sickening day🤢 ... but the moment I saw your PM in my inbox, my Life returned to me.
As usual - the chapter was Superb!!!👏
Uday battling to get the words out at the beginning was too sweet! I'm just as shocked as Manyata that HE can get tongue-tied 😆. But then , I understand why he hesitated, as letting Manyata go was the most difficult thing he had to do in his life .
The kiss was unexpected ... Manyata actually jumped him . Awww , then came the best part - Manyata professing her love for her bad/mad man . That was beautiful!
Oh man ... poor Udayveer got punished too 😆. OK - it's not so bad ... feeding the cat is quite a light punishment .
Oh God😲 ... Kabir and Tanya had a great fall. I never thought you'd kill them Vibha (I felt as though u had a soft spot for Kabir😕). But that was sad 😭 ... anyways BETTER THEM THAN MANVEER 😈.
I knew it ... I knew it , Manveer will name their son Kabir . Very befitting!
Awesome , amazing, terrific ... just some adjectives for this wonderful SS - which has concluded today .
Really sad that it has ended ... but looking forward to what u have next for us 😉.
Bye Vibha - thanks for giving us this wonderful story 🤗 .
PS - U asked for 4 lines , but I gave more😆 ... I'm actually making up for the SUPER-SHORT comment I gave for your OS! (but then THAT was YOUR FAULT - THAT Brilliant OS , wiped away my entire vocabulary 😔)
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Posted: 11 years ago
love it, very well done loved this story

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