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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello all...here is the double update 😃 please read on..
and one more thing...you guys gave me '42' likes for the second part of the OS i had recently posted... i PMed may be 60 ppl...and most of them read it!! wow...im crazy with happiness!! Thank you so much lovelies🤗

Chapter ten

Manyata woke up covered in sweat, feeling disoriented. Moments later, previous day flooded into her wake. So today was the first day of the challenge, she was ready for it. The sun was beating down on her face, oh gosh what time was it?

She checked the bed side clock and found it was 9AM! 9AM?? Usually she never slept so late. Even if she tried to, her mom wouldn't let her sleep beyond seven. But there was no mom here. That thought made her feel a lump in her throat.

She hurriedly brushed and bathed in record time and it was 9.30AM when she was ready to face the world. Well.. at the moment, her world was her husband and his family, her family.

She usually wore a salwar or a half saree but today she chose a yellow saree which was part of her wedding trousseau. She found Mrinalini devi in the veranda sitting with the news paper.

"pranam daadi saab" Manyata said. The lady looked up once and turned back to her newspaper again.

Manyata sat still for three minutes and DS didn't say anything. The silence was stifling and she tried to start a conversation. "aap ne Uday ko kahin dekha?"

Her voice went two octaves down at the last word as DS kept the paper down and stared at her.

"aap ko raat ko achchi neend aayi? Koi pareshani toh nahi thi na?" DS asked.

"jee daadi saab..woh Uday-" she stopped. She had no idea why her mind was trying to locate Uday.

"toh phir aap hume bata sakti hain ki aap aaj itni der se neeche kyon aayi? Shayad aap ko is ghar ke niyam kaanoon(rules and regulations) ki jaankari nahi hai par iska matlab yeh nahi ki aap ko dand(punishment) nahi milega" DS looked very angry.

Manyata bit her lips to tie down the sob that was threatening to break out of her throat.

"humare ghar me sab, subah theek 8 baje nashta karte hain..8.15 ke baad aane wale ko khaana nahi diya jaayega..dhyan rakhiye. Aur aap ka dand yeh hai ki aaj aap sham 4 baje tak apne kamre me band rahengi, jab tak muh dikhayi ka waqt nahi ho jaata tab tak aap kisi se nahi milengi" DS's voice was low but her tenore was clear.

As Manyata practically ran back to her room her mind recognized a not so discreet personality streak both Uday and DS possessed. Both were kind of split personalities who could be as soft as marshmallows or as hard as volcanic rocks. Eaves dropping last night's conversation between them had made her think that DS was an easy person to be with. But hell no, she was wrong. When was she not?

She heard a click of the bolt from outside as she got into her room. So her punishment for the day had begun. Would life never seize to surprise her? she let out a sigh. She spent an hour playing a game on her new mobile which was a wedding gift from her parents. But then its battery ran out and she felt too lazy to get up and find its charger.

Half an hour later she stood by the open window watching the back yard of the house she was going to spend her entire life in. no scratch that, she would be out of here as soon as the one month challenge' is won by her. a sudden gust of wind threw the curtain on her face and she closed her eyes. The image behind her eyelids made her open them in disgust, at herself. But Uday refused to go away even after 5 seconds of opening her eyes. She blinked. No..

He was here?? How?

"tum..-she corrected herself in time- aap andar kaise aaye?" she hadn't heard the door open.

"khidki se" he pointed to the open French window beside them.

"aap yahan kyon aaye? DS ne kaha ki-"

"DS ne kaha ki aap shaam tak kisi se nahi mil sakti" he tried mimicking DS's voice.

She only looked at him in question and saw that he took something out of the back pack he was carrying on his back which she had failed to notice till now. Her face lit up with happiness first and then turned to disgust as Arjun was handed to her.

She left Arjun on the floor and turned to Uday "aap ne Arjun ko apne bag me band kiya!! Aisa kaise kar sakte hain aap..agar use kuch ho jaata toh!" she was almost mad at him.

His jovial mood turned to anger as he blurted out, "hum trekking ke liye gaye the aur aate hi pata chala ki DS ne aap ko sazaa sunayi hai..tumhare Arjun ne kuch khaaya nahi hai kal se..isiliye hum use tumhare paas lekar aaye..warna hume kya padi hai tumhari" he turned his face.

Manyata wasn't paying attention. She was still disgusted that Uday had so carelessly dealt with the tiny cat. But what amused her more was, Arjun hadn't protested a bit while being handled by Uday, a literal stranger to him!

if she didn't hold herself tight, who knows it might be her turn next, to be charmed by the devil..She brushed the thought aside and cast an accusing glance at Uday.

"suno, hume pata hai tumne bhi kuch khaaya nahi hai..yeh humne trekking ke liye jaate waqt Parathe pack karvaaye the, humari partner ke liye, ab usne khaaye nahi..tum hi khaalo aur Arjun ko bhi khilaana" he gave her a box.

"main yeh nahi khaaungi..naahi Arjun khaayega, DS ne sazaa di hai mujhe.." she said.

Uday had sat down cross legged on the floor and the next moment she looked in horror of horrors as her Kuvar Arjun singh' jumped from her hands and positioned himself in Uday's lap. He was purring with satisafaction like he had known Uday from years!

"Dekha, sirf ladkiyaan hi nahi, jaanvar bhi humare jaadu se nahi bach sakte..haina Arjun" the cat looked at her like she was the stranger. What the hell is happening here, had the world turned upside down while she slept?

She was about to say something when the doors of her room opened and DS stepped in. Manyata's face changed a shade deeper. Oh gosh!

She looked behind her and Uday was gone. DS was saying something "Manyata, aap itni der akele kamre me band rahi..ummeed hai agli baar aap niyam nahi todengi..hum aap ko yeh bataane aaye hain ki sham paanch baje aap ki muh dikhaayi hai..tayyar ho jaayiye" she turned to leave without waiting for an answer. Manyata kept a hand on her chest to steady her galloping heart!

But her loving' hubby and the traitor cat had other plans for her as Arjun leapt infront of DS out of nowhere. "yeh billi aap ke kamre me kaise aayi?" she asked.

"DS woh..woh Arjun..woh" she fumbled for words.


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Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter Eleven

As if godsend, DS's phone rang that very moment and she walked out to answer it in private.

She made sure that DS was out of ear shot before she started on with Uday and his partner in crime; who were hiding behind the curtains in the corner.

"aap apne ko samajhte kya hain? Pehle aap Arjun ko bag me band karte hain, phir DS ke saamne! Aap jaisa bura insaan maine aaj tak nahi dekha..jaayiye aap, nikal jaayiye..nahi wait..yeh toh aap ka karma hai..main nikal jaati hoon" she had just turned to leave when two pairs of strong muscles stopped her.

"bas..bohot ho gaya..hum toh yahan tumhari help karne aaye the par tum!" he left the room in a huff.

Her mind was in total scrambled condition and she feared she might be going mad. There was something on the floor; the box Uday had given her. Thankfully DS hadn't noticed it.

The box reminded her of the lunch box her mother used to send everyday while going to college. Her eyes moistened as she opened it and found parathas as Uday had said. Her stomach growled and mouth watered. The next moment she found herself taking a bite out of it without realizing. As food went in, her thoughts began to clear and she let herself feel what she should have really felt in Uday's presence; Gratitude.

Gratitude for bringing Arjun to where she was, okay even if not in the way she would approve. Gratitude for those yummy parathas she was devouring so shamelessly now. And she felt pity for Arjun who was now looking at her with his tiny eyes demanding the food in her hand.

There was a sudden rustling sound at her window and all her gratitude melted into thin air. Oh no..that must be Uday, came to finish some unfinished business maybe. But why the window again!

She went forward with a soild expletive on her tongue and found herself face to face with Kabir.

Kabir gave a good look to the room, stared at her for a moment and looked at arjun for a second. The next second he began to drag her with him.

"Kabir..yeh kya kar rahe ho? Tum andar kaise aaye? Chodo mujhe..kahan le jaa rahe ho..CHODO! dard ho raha hai mujhe" she screamed to be let free.

"Manyata, kuch bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai, mujhe sab pata chal gaya..achcha hua maine sahi kamra dhoond liya..chalo mere saath" he said.

"Kabir..tum kya bol rahe ho? Kya pata chal gaya?" she asked.

"ab tum is ghar me ek aur minute nahi rukogi..mujhe sab pata hai ki us ghatiya aadmi ne tumse dhoke se shaadi ki hai, maar daalunga main use..main tumhe apne ghar wapas le jaane aaya hoon, chalo"

She didn't know what had come over her but Kabir's words angered her instead of providing relief as he had intended.

"tum sharab peekar aaye ho kya? Jis aadmi ke baare me tum bol rahe ho na, he is my husband..vivah hua hai humara..koi dhoka nahi..aur yeh mera ghar hai..tum jao yahan se" she pushed him to the exit.

"Manyata tum yeh majboori me bol rahi ho na? us aadmi ne tumhe majboor kiya na..but tumhe darne ki zaroorat nahi hai..main hoon na" he tried to give her a hug but was instantly pushed back.

"Kabir..tum mere bachpan ke dost ho..aur tumne humesha meri madat ki hai..par aaj mujhe tumhari help ki zaroorat nahi hai..just leave.." she pleaded.

"mujhe abhi bhi yeh lagta hai ki tum mujhe sach nahi bata rahi..abhi toh main jaa raha hoon..lekin.." he made a motion signifying that he'll keep an eye out for any trouble she might under go.

Time passed in a smudge and now she was seated in the hall; wearing a nine inch ghoonghat over her face. Her muh dikhaayi ceremony was in full swing. Married women were coming in turns, lifting her ghoonghat, and giving her their blessings, also congratulating DS on getting such a beautiful bride for her grandson. Some of their comments made her blush crimson red. The gathering consisted only women as men were strictly forbidden from entering.

The atmosphere was alive with celebrations but her mind was still in throes of her conversation with Kabir. She was happy to see her friend but still scared from the emotions she felt emanating from him. She had never seen him so much angry before.

She really wasn't paying attention when a tall, masculine woman came to bless her. She tenderly lifted manyata's ghoonghat and let it fall behind, revealing the bride's face. She herself had her pallu pulled over the face and without a word she made Manyata stand up from her place and gave her a hug, rather a tight squeeze. This impromptu hug was too uncomfortable for the bride and inadvertently she let out a scream.

Everyone stood up in shock and nobody moved for a second. Then somebody lifted the intruder's veil and more shock ran through the air. It was Uday.

"dada..aap bhabhi saa se milne ke liye itne uthavale the?" Unnati giggled.

Manyata wanted so much for the earth to open up in a hole so that she could jump in and be saved from those knowing glances the ladies were casting on her.

They all had surrounded Uday and a very old lady pulled his cheeks. (remember the 'naughtyyy' scene in Chennai express movie?).

But the quota of shock for the day had not ended yet, as Kabir shot out like a bullet from somewhere behind and knocked Uday down.

"meri Manyata ke saath badtameezi karta hai? Teri toh!!" Kabir shouted.

Precap: "tum kya samajthi ho, just because tumne Uday se shaadi ki toh tumhara us par haq hai?..no ways sweetheart..Uday is mine..and will always be..tum toh uske liye bas time pass ho" Jainandini said.


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Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

39 likes! wow🥳Thank you so much friends😃


as promised i posted the double update, as not one but many people got the answer right for the question i had asked😛

Thank you all who commented...🤗

loved your comments❤️




Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
WOAH, double update!!!
First of all let me start off by thanking you for the double update... I really appreciate it..

Coming to the updates, both of them were really good... i love Uday and i am sure he will win the challenge... Actually i think manyata will fall for him before that cause she was defending him and all that in front of her childhood friend kabir...

This kabir, you have to do something about him... I was feeling pity for him but now i just hope he doesn't get in the way of manyata and uday's love story..

Thanks for the PM and continue soon.

P.S> you deserve all the appreciation you get
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Posted: 11 years ago
Cool yaar and funny too...nicely sritten
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome really loved both the parts omg can't believe kabir shot uday...I somehow hope it's just a dream... Really loved the scene between uday, manyata and arjun.. Precap is interesting god y is jainandani back it feels like she and kabir will join hands to separate manveer please update soon and thaks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a cute and funny update Vibha di!

That "naughty" scene was so damn funny, BESHARAM UDAY!

Loved both the updates ,bichara Arjun had to get into a bag.

And here my darling bugging Jainandini is back to ruin the story all over again..

Will be waiting for the next update EAGERLY!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hai, awesome parts.loved uday's naughtiness.kabir physco bangaya...continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updates vibha, really enjoyed reading the double update. poor Manyata, got punishment on her first day and ManVeer nok jhok was amazing as usual, no wonder manyata has started to trap, in Udayveer charm.

thanks for the pm and double update.
update soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey jiji,
how are you,
that was simply awesome,
thanks a lot for the double update
the first update
i do understand ds is strict
but the punishment and behavior
is too harsh anyway
finally uday and arjun came to her rescue
uday outburst is very common
as she is continuing to accuse him
and maybe she took out ds anger on him
awn arjun was incredibly adoring
and then kabir conversation
i do not understand the reason for his such savage behavior
and soon now she is going to
tackle with two possessive lovers
uday sneaking into the sangeet was awesome
omg hope kabir did really NOT do that
and the promo
no way why is this jai back
thanks for the pm
hugss


Edited by annabh - 11 years ago

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