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Posted: 11 years ago
great update...kabir is become mad...manyata hit kabir for saving uday i just cant believe on it...poor manyata she saw her husband with some other girl...and thanks for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing Part Vibha

omg Manyata hit Kabir he done all this for her.. why is this J kissing Uday Vibha get rid of J... Manyata is kinda jealous seeing J and Uday
No kunwar arjun singh
Cont Soon



Thank you di🤗

Originally posted by: saakhi01

Awesome update... Liked it a lot
thanks 4 d pm n cont soon



Thanks Saakhi😃

Originally posted by: huma12.

Awsssmmm vibha i must say i m also in love with kabir hehehehe IQBAL KHAN is one of my fav actors



Thanks Huma...yep he is my favorite too since KYPH days😃

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

awesome update yar!!



Thanks Mahima😃

Originally posted by: pari_pooja

awesome update,
loved it
please do continue soon
& thanks for the pm😊



Thanks Pari😃

Originally posted by: capriya

Hai, superb update. Manyata banged Kabir's head with vase. Manyata is changing very fast. How dare that J and Uday kissing? Loved it. Continue soon...



Thanks dear😃

Originally posted by: Karkit

Awesume update di...
Manyta something feeling fr uday bt nt undestand...
Love it...
Thanks 4 pm n update soon



Thank you shruthi😃



Thank you😃
Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: annabh

hey? Hi
how are you? Im good
the chapter was really awesome Thank you dear..
OMG the sweet kabir has turned savage and wildYep circumstances did that..
I wander now what will happen?wait and see
But I missed Kuwar Arjun Singh ohhh...
Anyway will DS accept manyata
After the entire kabeer fiasco she will
and what about Uday
why was he so quite when he was attackedthere is a strong reason behind it😉
it is really great to see that
in spite of everything manyanta
is happy about the fact that Uday had helped herlove is as such😆
Maybe she is falling for heryeah may be😆
thanks for the pm
do update your another ss
hugss
anni



Thanks for the comment Anni😃


Originally posted by: pia.raha

manyata hit kabir fr udayy,she really cres fr uday,and has a liking fr uday alreadyy!!!!!!😊😊 bt uday chup kyun tha,manyta ka reactn dkhne k liye i guess😊😊 btw kabir ka cs bhi bohot achha hai!!!!!!!



Thank you Pia😃


Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome update Vibha.Thanks Navina😃
My favourite part was when manyata gave Kabir a bonk on his thick skull😆 , he so deserved that!I strongly agree😆 Actually, just like Manyata ... I also want to know why Uday didn't react much😕.There is a strong reason behind it which will be revealed in upcoming chapters😳
Oh Damn😡 ... Jai has returned🤢. Please get rid of her Vibha😳.na she is there for long😉
I like your new entrant ... perhaps when Kabir fixes Tanya's car ; both of them can drive off into the sunset😈. (Maybe they can knock Jai whilst they're driving away😉).great idea Navina👏 why didn't i think of that😆
Thoroughly enjoyed the chapter, please do continue soon ...I updated😃
thanks 4 the PM😊. PS - Can u update your other SS soon ... it's been really long since u did😃.i will try...😳



Thanks navina🤗

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey Vibha di
How you? 😊
Wow di, amazing, superb update 👏
Loved it loads ⭐️
Wow, Manyata hit Kabir on the head just for Uday, loved this scene 😆
Was shocked when Uday didn't do anything when Kabir pointed the gun on his temple
I think DS got scared that she was going to lose her grandson
Thanks for the pm 😊
Very eager to read next update, plz update soon 😃



Thank you Humaira😃
Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cnibir

Good on Manyata for hitting Kabir... heheheheh... he deserved it... Now we have to wait for the Manveer reunion... Can't explain how excited i am and it seems that it is coming close...

Thanks for the PM and continue soon.



Thank you Nibir😃

Originally posted by: nishaya...

Nice update!

Hope Manyata soon realises the reasons of her deeds!

Do continue soon, loved it...



Thanks Nishu😃

Originally posted by: ...anju...

amazing update vibha.
loved it soo much.
omg kabir tried to attack uv
wow manyata hit kabir.
i dont like j wid uv.
get rid of her vibha.
enjoyed chappy so much.
try to continue soon.
danxs for d pm.
and plz update ur other ss 'skik'



Thank you so much Anju🤗

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey... Vibha...

First of all... Sorry for the late comment...
Coming to the update..
It was fantastic...
Kabir pointed a gun on Uday..
And Manyata saved him...
Manyata is developing feelings for him...
Is Kabir ko yeh samajh nahi aata..
That Manyata is not interested in him..
This Tanya seems a nice girl...
Aur is J ki toh main...
Hamesha peeche padi rehti hai Uday ke...
Update soon...
And thanx for the PM...



Hey its ok about late comment Nitya😃 thanks for the lovely comment🤗

Originally posted by: Avina-Ashvik

Nice story :)
Yayyy Kabir is Iqbal Khan. Wow.
Beautifully written chapters.
Please update soon and please PM me.
Thanks in advance :)

Edit: I hope Kabir does not become negative. Fingers crossed
Best wishes



Thanks dear😃 sure i'll PM you😛

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

great update...kabir is become mad...manyata hit kabir for saving uday i just cant believe on it...poor manyata she saw her husband with some other girl...and thanks for pm...



Thanks Prerna😃
Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 13

Tanya was a motor mouth and talked non stop while Kabir had a close look at her car.

"aap isi gaon ke hain? Thank god aap aagaye...warna is waqt main akeli ladki is tarah raaste me! Ooh so scary... aap aise andhere me akele kyon baithe the? Biwi ne ghar se bahar nikal diya? arre aap ne apna naam toh bataya nahi..

"Radiator" Kabir said.

"kya?" Tanya stopped in her tracks.

"maine kaha Radiator me problem hai..mechanic ko dikhana padega..is waqt gaon me aap ko mechanic milega nahi..aap kahan rehti hain?..aayiye main aap ko apni bike par drop kar deta hoon" Kabir offered her.

In answer she extended her hand with a 100 watt smile.. "Hi im Tanya, pyar se log mujhe Taani bulate hain..main engineer hoon, is gaon me ek project ke silsile me aayi hoon..aap ka gaon bohot sundar hai..chaliye chalte hain, im staying in the company guest house"

She took out her vanity bag from the car and locked it. Kabir started the bike and Taani sat behind him bringing a sad wave of nostalgia to Kabir. He had dreamt that years down the lane Manyata and him would be going for a ride on this bike with their children. Manyata would clutch him from behind and he would race the bike just so that she could hold him tighter.

"Hey stop stop stop!" Taani shouted literally in his ears from behind. He didn't stop. they were just a little ahead of where they had started..what now?

"maine kaha na roko...maine ek zaroori cheez car me chod di hai" Taani said.

She went running back to the car while he rolled his eyes. Women!

"aaahhh!" he heard her scream.

"kya hua? Chilla kyon rahi ho?" he was getting the feeling that the sooner he dropped off the girl, more the better.

"maine na guest house ka address apne purse me rakha tha..aur woh purse.."

"purse kya?"

"meri purse car me reh gayi aur maine keys ko andar chod kar lock kar diya..ab main kahan jaaoongi" she started howling so loudly that Kabir had to close his ears.

"Tanya..Taani..rona band karo..main help karta hoon...aaj raat mere ghar chalo..kal mechanic aayega.." Kabir said.

Her chirpy mood was back to its former self within moments.

"chalo...gaon me jhopde(hut) me, ek raat rehne me mazaa aayega..im so excited!" she clapped her hands together.

"hello..isse pehle kabhi gaon nahi aayi kya? Main ghar me rehta hoon..kisi jhopde me nahi samjhi?..aur tumne zyada baat ki toh yahi chod kar chala jaaoonga..phir tum aur tumhari woh khatara, chanda mama ke saath raat guzarna" Kabir said in anger.

"tumhara naam kya angry young man hai? Jab se mile ho gusse me ho.. Kya sach me biwi se jhagda karke aaye ho?" she prodded.

"tum ladki ho isi liye tolerate kar raha hoon..warna"

"warna kya kar lete? Haaye abla naari par atyachar karte!" she said in imaginery horror.

Kabir guessed that remaining silent was the best solution and didn't utter a word till they reached his house.

As soon as she got down she inspected the place with keen eyes and declared it the most serene place she had ever been to.

He was just going to open the house to let her in when she said something that stalled him.

"tumhare sar ke peeche chot ka nishan hai..kahin tum koi gunde mavali toh nahi..kisi se fight karke hua yeh sab? Tum shakal se achche aadmi lagte ho..tell me the truth..kyon baithe the wahan, road side pe? Taani was very serious now and he could sense it in the darkness of the porch of his house.

How dare Uday kiss a woman like that! And that too when the woman looked so better than she did.

"aap ye kya kar rahe hain? Yeh ladki wahi hai na raste wali? Aur aap mere pati ke saath is samay..kya aap ko pata nahi ab yeh shaadi shuda hain? She said to both of them and took Uday's hands in a possessive gesture, surprising herself and also him perhaps.

"Hey you, listen" Jainandini clicked her fingers and pointed it at Manyata.

"tum kya samajhti ho, just because tumne Uday se shaadi ki toh tumhara us par haq hai?..no ways sweetheart..Uday is mine..and will always be..tum toh uske liye bas time pass ho, right my love?" she said and winked at Udayveer.

He raised his hands in a hi-five and she joined his hands with hers. J began to laugh and Uday watched quietly.

Manyata couldn't stop the hot tears that were threatening to flow out. She covered her mouth and ran back to the sanctity of her room.

A heavy hand pressed her shoulders and she turned back to face the devil himself staring at her as if attempting to read her mind.

"yeh rone ka naatak chodo Manyata..Tumhe bhi pata hai aur hume bhi ki sach kya hai..hume J ke saath dekh kar tum kahin Jealous toh nahi ho gayi? Whoa..tum jal gayi..par yeh toh galat hai..

Dekho..tum agar apne former boy friend ko is tarah openly bula sakti ho, toh hum apni Ex ke saath thodi si flirting bhi nahi kar sakte?" Uday sneered at her.

"yeh aap kya bol rahe hain? Kabir mera Ex-boy friend nahi hai!"

"toh present boy friend hai? Humne dekha tha tum dono ko room me..hum tumhari baatein toh sun nahi paaye par humne apni aankhon se dekha ki Kabir humare kamre me window se andar aaya..tumne bulaya tha na use..aur yeh vase maarne ka natak kyon kiya? Hume sab pata hai Manyata..aur hum tumhe yaad dilate hain woh challenge..tumhe hum is kadar majboor karenge ki!!" he didn't bother to finish his threat.

Manyata felt disgusted in his company and went to balcony to get some fresh air. The sky was blue outside and the stars were twinkling. If the horoscopes and Kundali's were true things, then these very stars had brought this obstacle of a marriage in her life. She felt like throwing rocks at them in anger. She closed her eyes and laid her head on her knees. The weather was cold and she would freeze to bones if she lay here all night. But she didn't care.

It's a fact that confessing to a stranger is easier than to one of our own; Kabir learnt that this was indeed the truth when he narrated his tale to Taani over dinner. He told her about their childhood friendship before Manyata's marriage, how close they were to each other and a sudden storm had changed their life. He narrated her how Manyata had driven him out when he went to get her. Contrary to what he thought she didn't judge him. Instead she heard him with the air of a counselor hearing a confessor.

"Move on Kabir..thats all I can say...shayad Manyata yeh sab accept kar chuki hai..bas tum hi nahi samajh rahe" she said.

"mujhe nahi pata maine tumhe yeh sab kyon bataya..tumhe toh main jaanta tak nahi..ek din nahi hua hume mile hue..bhool jao yeh sab..kal subah mechanic aayega..gaadi theek hote hi apne guest house chali jaana" he ordered her, signifying that there would be no more discussion about him and his past.

Manyata opened her eyes to the bleating of the alarm clock and found that its 6am.

She was wrapped up in blanket and was lying on the bed..

bed??

She rummaged her mind and remembered drifting off to sleep on the balcony floor. There was a paper on the night stand which was fluttering in the wind. She opened it with curiosity and read. Uday had written part in Hindi and part in english:

"kal tumne Kabir se hume bachaya..aur hum tumhe thand (cold) se bacha rahe hain..yeh mat samajhna ki humne yeh tum par taras kha kar kiya hai..im a good business man..i don't believe in keeping dues of any kind..hisaab barabar"

So Uday had carried her inside and made her sleep on the bed. Probably, he had even set the alarm so that she would wake up on time. Though he had fiercely stated that it was only a pay back gesture, she felt her insides turn warm. How would it have felt to be carried in his arms? Aah if only she wasn't so under..

It took great deal of tries to get back her mind to normal.

Precap: Kabir gets caught for paper leak in final year's exam.



As promised maine kar diya update, after i got '31' likes...but i felt bad kyon ki tum logone double updates ko '42' likes diye the aur ab sirf 31😭 itna bura tha last update?


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Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update vibha.
Tanya seems to be a positive character especially in kabir's life. And that bitch jaynandani, I hate her till death...

Manyata's possessive behavior was a surprise to me to :-D lol...there little caring gestures are what they don't know. hope they fall soon.

it was overall a great update, and about the likes I too cannot say anything. as being a writer I can understand your state, somethimes you get more than you expect and somethimes you get the lowest...so it all depends upon the moods of our readers. wish you good luck.

do update soon & thanks foe the PM. :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the PM and update :)
Amazing update. Feel really bad for Kabir :(
I hate Jai she is sooo evil and shamelesss.
Hehe. Uday got it right. Manyata is getting jealous.
It is good he moved her to the bed.
Looking forward to the next chapter. The precap looks scary.
Please update soon. Once again thank you.
Best wishes
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey it was a nice update, poor manyata felt bad for her
even for kabir as well...
Hey yr kabhi -2 like button doesn't works, might b thats why less likes. .
Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hai, Thank you for the PM. Awesome part. I like Tanya's character. Loved her dialogues. Hope she will change Kabir. What the hell Uday doing with J? I felt so angry to Uday. Hope Manveer falls in love. Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey vibha... loved d update so much.i hate j.angry on uday.loved tanis character.a good jodi for kabir.hope manveer fall for each other soon.enjoyed chappy so much.try to continue soon.thanks u so much for pm.

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