Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5

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Hello guys, I m back with a new story. Probably 3-4 parts. Please leave ur comments and let me know if u like it!!!!
Prologue :


Mehrya SS : One Last Chance

Today was a very special day for the Sharma's. Their elder daughter was getting married. All were very happy especially Kaanta. Mehak's marriage had become Kaanta chachi's dream. She wanted to see her married and settled and this was finally happening.

Kaanta chachi was looking at all the arrangements and smiling. Finally, everything was going right. PD came from behind and looked at her. She kept her hand on her shoulder and said: Kaanta aaj tere saare sapne pure ho gaye...Our Mehak is getting married today. It's a special day for our Mehak.

Kaanta chachi: Ha PD...I am very happy today...Finally, my bacchi will get all the happiness that she deserves...God bless her...Bas Mata Rani sab acche se ho jaaye..

PD: Of course, acche se hoga...Tu chinta mat kar...Apni bacchi ne kabhi kisika bura nahi kiya toh uska bhi bura nahi hoga...

Kaanta chachi nodded in agreement. PD and chachi were talking when Mansi came and asked Kaanta to talk to the pandit who was going to do the marriage rituals.

Mehak's room:

Mehak was dressed in a pink lehenga with a bright pink dupatta over it. She was wearing the traditional Punjabi chooda in her hand. Her make up was subtle, not very flashy. In fact, she insisted to keep it simple. Her friend Sonal was adjusting her dupatta over her head. She was constantly teasing her how her groom will go crazy after having one look at her.

Sonal: Haaye Mehak...aaj tu koi pari lag rahi hai...Tera dulha toh tujhe dekhte hi reh jaayega...Subhanallah, u r looking gorgeous...I think I m looking at the most beautiful bride now!!!

Mehak: Thank u Sonal but ab bas bahut tareef ho gayi...Itni bhi acchi nahi dikh rahi...

Sonal: No Mehak seriously u r looking very beautiful...

Mehak: Naah...main nahi maanti..Tum jhooth keh rahi ho...

Before Sonal could say anything, Kaanta chachi entered the room and spoke.

Kaanta chachi: Sonal sach keh rahi hai...She came near Mehak and kissed her forehead...Tu bahut acchi lag rahi hai...Sabse sundar...

Mehak blushed and said: Thank u chachi

Kaanta chachi was admiring Mehak looking at her beauty and thinking tht in a few hours, she would leave this house and go to another house. This was what chachi had wanted but now when the day has finally come, chachi is sad that she wouldn't get to see her daughter from tomorrow. She will have a new family and new responsibilities to take care of. Will she forget us? Chachi was thinking about all that when Mehak called out her name.

Mehak: Chachi app kaha kho gaye? Are u ok? Aap ro rahe ho?

Kaanta chachi wiped her tears and said: Arre roou nahi toh aur kya karo...meri bacchi apne sasural jaayegi toh main roungi hi na...wht If my bacchi forgets me?

Mehak hugged her chachi and said : Chachi pls dnt say that.. I ll never forget u...Ever since Ma Baba left me, you have been my strength, my anchor in life, my everything...Main aapko kabhi nahi bhul sakti.

Seeing Mehak and Chachi getting so emotional, Sonal tried to lighten the mood in the room.

Sonal : Itni mehant se jo parlour waali ne makeup kiya tha use kharab kar de..Uski koi value hi nahi hai...

Mehak and chachi looked at her and laughed.

Mehak: Sorry...

Sonal smiled and said: Chal I still need to fix ur dupatta...Please sit here... (she said pointing towards the seat in front of the mirror)...Baraat aati hi hogi.

Mehak sat on the seat and started getting her dupatta fixed. She was adjusting her chooda properly. Sonal was finally done with everything.

Sonal : Now everything is perfect...Now u sit here...I ll go and check ki chachi ko koi madat chaiye toh...Sit here and relax...There is still time for the baraat to come...U need to rest a little.ok?

Mehak nodded and Sonal closed the door and left.

Mehak was adjusting her bindi when someone spoke from behind: DON'T MARRY HIM!

She looked in the mirror... It was Shaurya.

To be continued...

So here's s short update ...Criticism welcomed!!!

Teaser for Part 1 : Pg 3

Part 1: Pg 4

Teaser for Part 2: Pg 5

Part 2 : Pg 7

Teaser for Part 3 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/zindagi-ki-mahek/4769818/mehrya-ss-one-last-chance-part-16-updated-30-5?pn=9

Part 3 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/zindagi-ki-mahek/4769818/mehrya-ss-one-last-chance-part-16-updated-30-5?pn=12

Teaser for Part 4 :https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/139694524

Part 4 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/139706102

Teaser for Part 5 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/139840296

Part 5 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/139860860

Teaser for Part 6 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/139972923

Part 6 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140197820

Teaser for Part 7 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140304852

Part 7 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140323340

Part 8A : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/zindagi-ki-mahek/4769818/mehrya-ss-one-last-chance-part-16-updated-30-5?pn=46

Teaser for Part 8B: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140480247

Part 8B: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140601273

Teaser for Part 9 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140752090

Part 9 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140762816

Part 10 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140890024

Part 11 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140979361

Teaser for Part 12 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/141138162

Part 12 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/141282458

Part 13 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/zindagi-ki-mahek/4769818/mehrya-ss-one-last-chance-part-16-updated-30-5?pn=87

Teaser for Part 14 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/141672710

Part 14 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/zindagi-ki-mahek/4769818/mehrya-ss-one-last-chance-part-16-updated-30-5?pn=101

Part 15: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/142128527

Part 16: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/142290053

Thread 2 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/zindagi-ki-mahek/4859060/mehrya-ss-one-last-chance-thread-2-last-part-updated-26-8

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loving the concept you've come up with! Can't wait to read more!
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Nice start ...just like movies !
But I loved the last part of ur story ..very much !
Do continue soon !
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Has shauryadumped her before and now when she is marrying someone else he realised his feelings?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Loving the plot. So, its shaurya who is asking for last chance. Isn't he??? Awesome. Probably would come to meet with restless,jealous, broken in short devdas shaurya through your ss.Continue soon.
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Ummm... curious, curious, curious...
So who is she getting married to? And ab Mr. Khanna has an issue with it?

Very well written... Its very nice... please continue soon... 🤗
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Nice start. Please continue soon😊
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very nice n awesome story pls continue soon
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nice start... getting very curious...


update soon😛
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Nice starting dear...
Is mehek getting married with bina poonch ka langoor Ajay... Issh...

How did Shaurya came inside the brides room...

Exciting for next chap...

Update soon

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