Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5 - Page 20

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: melissaR

Shristi I couldn't stop laughing at Shaurya antics 🤣 🤣 🤣 I pictured every scenario in my head. Really good one 👏

Do update soon! I want to know if Mahek left the room or sat in another chair to face him directly in his face. Dun dun dun...


Hey Melissa I am happy that the chapter made you laugh...thanks alot dear!!!!

The Mehak that I want to see will definitely not walk off when thrown a challenge...😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: chandrima02

Words woven beautifully. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Loving the tension you are building between these two. Keep her strong and make him suffer as much as you can. Have I become a sadist 😆 !!! Please update the next chapter ASAP.


Thank u so much Chandrima😳😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thank u dear😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: nish_vir

Really all parts in one go...I just love it when his ego hurts, I just love it when she deprives him of the satisfaction of seeing her hurt. Loved it, update soon



Thank u Nish😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Teaser for Part 6:

The situation had become tensed in the room now. Alok looked at her and gestured her to relax and put forward her point. Shaurya too knew about Mehak's fear and he was deliberately using it against her now. Mehak prayed to her Mata Rani asking for strength and took a deep breath.

Mehak: Hmm I had thought of Matar ki kheer as one of the recipes. We could use the...

Shaurya didn't let Mehak complete her sentence.

Shaurya: Oh please Ms. Sharma, this is a five star hotel not your roadside dhaba so don't give such middle class ideas. I won't include something like that in my menu at all.

Mehak to herself: Relax Mehak its him not some monster. You know why he is doing this. Keep your calm. You know the recipe so well and you also know that how tasty it is. Just explain it properly and clearly. Don't look at him. Look at your friends and talk. Darna mat! Darna mat!!

Shaurya angrily: Are you even listening Ms. Sharma...If you want to use these dhabbewalle recipes, then stop working here.

All looked at Shaurya with surprise. They couldn't understand his anger towards Mehak. Everyone realized that Shaurya was unnecessarily targeting Mehak. But they couldn't do much about it. They really felt bad for her. Mehak decided to stand up for herself. He could try all the tricks in the book but she wouldn't give up now.

Mehak spoke with confidence: No Sir, I really enjoy working here and the dish that I am talking about has got nothing to do with being middle class. Believe me, it's really tasty and I am sure the customers would like it.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Monster khanna.. 😆
Use your all tricks.. she is not gonna gave up 😛

Looking forward for the full update shri..
Loved this teaser 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wowww.. Can't wait for da update. Shaurya, u better brace urself as this time its gonna be tough to break her. 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mr Khanna is too much now... Paani sir se ooper ja raha hai... 😡Mehek u shouldn't give up now.. show him what middle class girl can do... 😛
Update soonish Shri. Can't wait any longer
Thanx for PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Shristi Thank you so much for a amazing teaser... please continue, and thanks for the PM 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
👏 ...Go Mehek...

great teaser Shristi. Update soon

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