Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5

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richa

@richasharma0991

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Posted: 8 years ago

#451

I loved that mehek's me part.

Shaurya 'S situation is same with present story

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#452

Loved it Shristi!!!

The man is in complete turmoil... please let it last a little longer. I want to see it transform into yearning; a deep intense😆 yearning.

Kelly

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candy02

@candy02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#453

Mom is working as his inner voice almost, which is screaming to release the unknown feelings. He is in murky water, bamboozled literally. Result of his own kaarnaama. How he is going to ignore her next day !! Wonderful update @Shristi. Waiting for the next chapter.

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Sanju

@Sanjh30

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Posted: 8 years ago

#454

Beautiful update my dear 👏
Nothing can be hidden from mothers 😆 here karuna knows something is seriously wrong with shaurya ..or he's hiding things
Loved mother son convo ...very well written shristi baby 👏
He's thinking about forgetting her n concentrating on his work ..well that's not possible mr khanna 😆
Waiting for next chapter,thanks for updating sweetie
Love n hugs,
Sanjh 😊

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stellaV

@stellaV

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Posted: 8 years ago

#455

Love it shristi 👏 Mother son duo having heart to heart talks after a long time 😊

One specific thing that stood out for me was when karuna mentioned MEHAK of the roses and shaurie thinking about HIS MEHAK Wowww. Would be waiting eagerly for the next part dear 👍🏼

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thabassum

@Thabassum19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#456

Ha ha ha...

Shaurya's entire convo to his mother was awsum...😆

He sounded like a grown up baby

I mean he literally fell for mehak ...while in his love / hatred period ...and know his heart's halat is like this

Its time for our shaurya to taste his own medicine 😉

The ignorance and the impatience ...😈

Very well done shri ...

Good job with the update ...

Do conti soon ji ⭐️

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vimikrao

@vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#457

Poor Shaurya thought Karuna ma talking about his Mehek.. 😆

Na sub janti hai what is happening in her child's life can't be hidden anything from her.. 😉
Mehek's presence made him lazy he is not abluto concentrate properly in his business.. 😲

Let's see how many days this one will go like this 😉

Nicely written & Thanks for PM

Vinu

Edited by vimikrao - 8 years ago