Mehrya SS : One Last Chance Part 16 Updated 30/5 - Page 14

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tibs09

Aww.. poor Mehak 💔
Why cannot she just kick off Ajay too ...
She does not need any man ..
Let SK keep thinking she is getting married to Ajay and burn in his own hell



Yes tibs lets see wht this story has in store for our great Mr. Shaurya Khanna
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Posted: 8 years ago
Errrmmm!!! Kameene ke haath se nikal ke jah giri phir se perv, the chipku ke haath... 😵

Good one Shrishti... 👏

Looking forward for more and soon... 🤗 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Niha1999

Tysm 😳actually my real name is niharika...

Thanks niharika
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Auditi

Errrmmm!!! Kameene ke haath se nikal ke jah giri phir se perv, the chipku ke haath... 😵

Good one Shrishti... 👏

Looking forward for more and soon... 🤗 👍🏼

Thanks auditi 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanks mystic😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it .. good that Mehak ignored Shaurya in the lift - served him right !! And that Ajay is so full of himself - Mehak should something about it !!

Can't wait for the next part - I want a jealous Shaurya going down on his knees and begging for Mehak's love :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanks for the pm 😊

huh! mehek is to marry ajay oh no kya twist hein.. and that guy ajay is really weird he feels getting married is the license to do whatever he wants to.. did not even have a courtesy to check with mehek what kind of food she likes.. he just went on and on abt his work and his preferences 😕 poor mehek she is all tied down to a joker like this 😭
and shaurya what does he think of himself why is he jealous isnt he the one who did all this 😭😡

poor mehek i understand how she feels abt her loss... but dont worry girl not worth shedding your precious tears ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazingly written shristi.Update soon dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautifully written. Read all parts in one go and now cant wait for the next update!
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Posted: 8 years ago
So its Friday and time for my teaser update!!!!
Teaser for Part 5:

Karuna was really worried for Shaurya for the last few days. She knew something was bothering him but she couldn't pinpoint to what it was. The Khanna house help, Awaara, had informed her that Shaurya had come home very angry and refused to have dinner.

Karuna: Why didn't you have dinner? Bahar khaakar aaya hai?

Shaurya: Hmm nahi...not in the mood to eat Maa...

Karuna: Wht is with the workout today? Its been 2 hours since u r back home and you are still continuing with it. I guess you should stop now. You will injure yourself.

Shaurya couldn't say no to his mother. He stopped it immediately but if he wanted, he wouldn't mind doing it for the rest of the night. There was lot of frustration that he had to vent.

Karuna: Shaurie sit with me for sometime. Its been a long time that you had a chat with your mother. Aaj kal toh tu kuch jyaada hi busy rehne laga hai.

For Shaurya, his mother meant the world to him. Everyone knew how much he adored this lady who loved him like his own son. To be honest, he didn't respect her; he worshipped her.

Shaurya smiled: Yes Maa, sorry I couldn't give you much time. Really sorry for that.

Seeing her son smile, Karuna was assured that everything is fine and that she need not worry.

Karuna: So how was your day? Your hotel had an event today...engagement ceremony right? How was it?

Shaurya: It was good...very tiring. Mr. Malhotra wouldn't let me breathe even for a second...It was really tough to handle him.

Karuna smiled: Ha toh thik hi hai na...of course he will be worried. Its his son's engagement..any parent would be..I too wish to take that stress only if my son, The great Shaurya Khanna, agrees to get married. By the way, how is Mehak?

Shaurya was caught off-guard with that question. He got up from his chair and walked towards the balcony.

Shaurya angrily: What has she got to do with my marriage?

Karuna: Aree...I was just asking. I haven't met her since a long time. If I am not wrong, the last time I met her was in your hotel when my friend Savita had come for lunch. So bas yaad aa gayi.

Shaurya: How would I know how she is doing? She is my employee...I don't talk to her much...

He didn't like the concern his mother was showing for Mehak. He hated it. It really bothered when he would hear people talking good things about her. At the hotel, it was only Mehak, her dish, her simplicity and what not...He never understood what everyone saw in her. She was just a middle class behenji. There was nothing special about her nor was she good looking. Moreover, she was fat and not like those skinny hotel staff that he had working for him.

He was still lost in his thoughts when he heard his mother calling out his name.

Karuna: Shaurie are you listening? Kahan khoye ho?

Shaurya: Ha...yes yes I am..So what were you saying?

Karuna: I know beta that Mehak is your employee but I thought that you two had become friends..

Shaurya didn't let his mother complete her sentence: Mom please she is not my friend and you know well that I don't have any friends..yeh sab bekaar ke rishte main nahi manta...They are useless...

Karuna: Fine Shaurie, why are you reacting so much? Anyways, I was just saying that Mehak's husband would be really very lucky to have her...She is such a sweet girl...Hamesha doosro ke bare mein sochti hai...Every time I think about her, a smile comes on my lips..I wish she gets all the happiness in her life.

Shaurya: Why do you think about her so much? There is nothing special about her Maa...please...

Hope you guys like it!!! Will update the chapter by weekend...

Edited by shristi0706 - 8 years ago

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