short fiction series~index updated 6/2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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❤️short fiction series❤️

So friends, as most of us agreed on a common drabble thread I m starting one. These stories can be about any character or couple of ramanaya,these are works of fiction. I really expect that everyone will contribute their stories too, if possible, to make this beautiful. As someone posts the next drabble I will start the index.

~INDEX~

1) drabble 1-page 1 (by me aka Tuna)

2) short poems 1,2 &3-page 1 and 2(by javyenk aka Jaishree)

3)short poem 4- page 3(by javyenk aka Jaishree)

4)drabble 2-part 1-page 4(by me aka Tuna)click here

-part 2-page 6(by me aka Tuna)click here

5)short poem 5-page 5(by barbieindia aka Manisha)click here

6)short poem 6-page 7(by javyenk aka Jaishree)click here

7)drabble 3-page 8(by SweetRogue aka Agastys)click here

8)drabble 4-page 8(by anu)click here

9)drabble 5-pg 12(by shrutiravi aka shruti)click here

10)drabble 6-pg 14 (by shrutiravi aka shruti)click here

11)drabble 7- pg 16(by shrutiravi aka shruti) click here

12)drabble 8-pg 17(by shritiravi aka shruti) click here

13)drabble 9-part 1-pg 18(by barbieindia aka manisha)click here

14)short poem 7-page 19(by me aka tuna)click here

15)short poem 8-9 page 20(by javyenk aka jaishree)click here and click here

16)drabble 10- page 25(by shrutiravi aka shruti)click here

note page 25click here

17)oneshort 1-part 1-page 26(by me aka tuna)click here

-part 2-page 29(by me aka tuna)click here

18)drabbles(link posted)( by sagunmanas aka manas)click here

19)short poem 10-pg27(by sagunmanas aka manas)click here

20)short poem 11-pg 30(by javyenk aka jaishree) click here

21)drabbles( link posted)(by sagunmanas aka manas)click here

23)drabble 11 and 12- page 33 and 34(by shrutiravi aka shruti) click here and click here

22)short poem 12-page 32(by javyenk aka jaishree)CLICK HERE

23)drabble 13 and 14-page 35 and 36(by shrutiravi aka shruti)click here and click here

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lost in woods

"Where are u? shrutkriti can u hear me?"Shouted mandavi, but her voice got lost somewhere in the dense forest, and nobody answered. She shouted again but nothing happened. Suddenly she heard somebody's shriek, and instantly recognized it as shrutkriti's voice. She ran towards the direction of the sound.

Somewhere on the other side of the forest sita and urmila were looking frantically for their sisters. urmila said,"didi we need to call someone? We will never find them like this". Sita said,"I know Mithila's forest by heart, I am sure they are somewhere around, this forest is not as dense as it looks. We just need to look on the other side". After searching for more than an hour they indeed found their sisters. But in such a state that they never even imagined in their worst nightmares.

Mandavi and shrutkriti were lying unconscious. Sita and urmila ran towards them and tried to wake them up but in vain,urmila started crying after realizing what have happened. Sita suddenly recalled the route to a river nearby and she ran towards the direction to bring water. She found an empty old urn lying beside the river and collected some water and ran back to her sisters.

Sita sprinkled some water on shrutkriti's and urmila's face and after few longest minutes of sita's and urmila's life, their sisters opened their eyes. Mandavi narrated," I was searching for shrutkriti when I heard a shriek and ran towards it. I saw her lying unconscious and when I checked her feet I saw mark of a snake's bite. I knew if I didn't do anything immediately then the worst could happen so I had to suck out the venom and so I did. I didn't even realize when I started feeling dizzy ad after that I don't remember anything."

No words were exchanged for a few more minutes between the sisters, just a cascade of emotions which flowed out of their eyes. They got up to leave for their castle, as the trees in the forest witnessed the love o0f the beautiful sisters which would be remembered for ages to come.

Note:This is little longer than a drabble but couldn't write shorter. Feedback expected, one of my first works on IF so do tell me if I made any mistakes.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was good. It did not look like ur first work . [=D>] Sisters and their bond is precious.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was absolutely fantastic...SUPERB...👏👏 So simple yet enough to give you goosebumps everywhere.
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The palace resounded with the beautiful, melodious yet melonchalic sounds from the Rudra Veena.
His head bent, eyes red, a tear on the cheek, he continued playing even as he heard the first cry of the new born.
They had foretold
She will be the cause of your downfall.
They had foretold
She will be the messenger of your death.
Your world will burn
It will burn
It will burn they had said.
She was his first born.
He wanted to hold her just once.
She was already wrapped.
To be taken away.
His fingers came down more fiercely on the strings, the music that floated became more sorrowful.
He lifted his head as he felt her nearby.
A glimpse of tiny little feet that peeked out from the red silk.
A string broke loose as he played the last note.
We will leave her where she will never be found, words he heard .
He was never the mighty king again.

Edited by jayvenk - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well written tuna , short and neat and holds one.
Please do let us know ur name
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jayvenk

Well written tuna , short and neat and holds one.

Please do let us know ur name

my name is tuna... that's what i love being called😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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She sensed him long before she saw him.
Swami her heart called out.
He stopped in his stride.
His breath held.
It had been eons
The curse
The separation
His eyes thirsted just to see her.
Deeptha...
Deeta...
Harini..
His soul called out.
Her eyes brimmed.
Madhava.. Narayana
She moved
Her hand stretched seeking
They stepped through the arch,
Together they stood.
Framed against the flowers.
Vishnu vaishnavi.
Siya Ram
They knew
They will be separated again.



Edited by jayvenk - 9 years ago
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Her thick long crusted unruly hair spread behind her like snakes.
Her sharp teeth ground against each other creating screeching noise.
Her long talons tore against the air.
She let out a screech.
The dark jungle seemed to shudder.
He stood calm. Legs astride.
He touched the astra to his fore head.
He watched , his gaze steady, his fingers closed on the brhmastra.
His brother took stance, bow raised.
There was silence.
Brahmarishi watched from a distance.
His palms joined in supplication,
He closed his eyes and envisioned the supreme power.
The demoness shifted her feet for flight
There was just the minutest sound.
He lifted his astra.
His aim
Perfection
A silent swoosh
A brilliant Ray of blue light pierced the dark sky.
Fangs bearing, hair flying, her eerie face and body was illuminated.
A fire rose from within her body as the astra found its mark.
Her scream vibrated and
Echoed through the lands that she had made barren.
The brothers stood side by side .
Watched as she shriveled to the ground.
From inside rose a beautiful maiden, an apsara.
She knelt before them.
Her eyes were filled with gratitude.
I waited for a long time she said, before she disappeared.
The universe whispered
Raaammm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tuna and @Jayvenk

What a beautiful piece to read!!!!

👏

Loved it<3

And the @Jayvenk this update is fantastic.
How you expressed the whole scenario. Awesome.

Please both of you do write more.
Edited by NEIRAlover - 9 years ago

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