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tuna_star

@tuna_star

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: -She-loSarun
Hey tuna,
nice surprise han?
beautiful to see mandavi spending time with kids not caring of her status.
thanks for this.

heya shilpa..thanks yaar... 😊 why thanks yaar... I think i could do better

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#222

Awww loved the incorporation of the song.

Beautiful writing.

Can visualize mandvi

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Darkchocolates

@darkchocolates

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#223

Hey Tuna.

So beautiful dear!!!!

I am at loss of adjectives. Loved it.

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shruthiravi

@shruthiravi

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#224

Really nice tuna keep it up

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radianteyes.

@radianteyes.

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#225

Well done
Nicely written
Waiting for more

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#226

Beautifully written..
Mandavi with kids and doing all this to bring smile on their faces...
Looking forward...

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tuna_star

@tuna_star

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#227

Thank you so much to everyone who gave review on my OS.. :)

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: tuna_star

heya shilpa..thanks yaar...😊why thanks yaar... I think i could do better

okay then I expect more from you. 😆

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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#229

His hazel eyes glittered

His forehead furrowed

A slight twitch on his lips

One palm curled into a fist

The other held a silk scroll

A swayamwar

A dhanush to be lifted

His eyes narrowed

He read again

Shiv dhanush

His fist came crashing on the throne

Mahadev

his voice echoed

He stood

Rudra

Maheshwara

Your dhanush

His head thrown back

His laughter resounded

The palace vibrated

Lankapati

Ravana

Dashanan

Will raise it...

Hands on his hips

With arrogance

that will bring

his end he stood

Edited by jayvenk - 10 years ago

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sugunmanas

@lifeiscrazy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: tuna_star
Thank you so much to everyone who gave review on my OS.. :)

nice write up😊

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