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Mili

@LakshMila

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Posted: 9 years ago

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4563678&PID=130987630&#p130987630

My first SiyaRam-cum-LakshMila OS!Do have a look:)Do review

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Mili

@LakshMila

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Oh shruti,it was beautiful! By the end of the drabble,I had a mile long smile on my face.Both the sisters being portrayed so well,nature's bowing to them and the faith they have!Very well described

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LostGirl02

@LostGirl02

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Posted: 9 years ago

"Nature will have to listen to Urmila today. It cannot take Lakshman from her. She had only let him go for 14 years, not more than that. Jijashree my husband has to come back and I have complete faith he will come back."

These are my favourite lines.Loved it.👏

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Sowmya

@my_angel...

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

I read all the stories right from the beginning and this was just mind-blowing

amazing...awesome...lovely...

fantastic...fabulous...astonishing...astounding...spectacular...

.captivating...great...phenomenal...impressive...outstanding

...interesting...remarkable concept and story...superb ...

Astonishing...awe-inspiring...beautiful...breathtaking...

Impressive...magnificent...shocking...stunning...

Stupefying...striking...majestic...wonderful...mind-blowing...

Wondrous...overwhelming...loved it

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shruthiravi

@shruthiravi

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you luna, Lakshmila and angel for liking it.

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Bharathi

@b2011

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Beautiful OS Shruthi. Please write more.

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tuna_star

@tuna_star

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

shruti di... awesomeee... dusre couples pe bhi likho na...👏 love your works

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