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JAYASHREE

@jayvenk

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Ya both ram sita. Second after she is banished.

I took a leap.

Thought process was on over drive.

I am trying the siya haran.

Sorry mixing up😕

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barbieindia

@barbieindia

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: tuna_star
@Barbie sorry I totally missed ur latest drabble... I will update it in index tonight... It's just awesome...
barbie if it is in parts plz write part 1 and next one part 2... if there are parts in same drabble... this way it will be easy for readers...😊

Thanks Tuna for the suggestion😛 I have edited it

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barbieindia

@barbieindia

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: varshu27
@ Barbie and @ Tuna, you guys are talented...what amazing work!!

Thank you so much😛

Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30
@Barbieindia...excellent ...keep it up

Thank you so much navya😛

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barbieindia

@barbieindia

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: tuna_star
So guys I m back with a poem on urmila... I cannot write poems
well but tried a lot not to bore you guys...hope its not that bad... expressed
what she felt in few words.the 2nd one from lakshman's pov ..true love is always without expectations...that's what i wished to convey..❤️
Forever in my heart

Fourteen long years of wait, seems like it's never going to
end,

Five years have passed since I saw you last,

Still remember the day you came to take my hands in yours,

Seems like it was just a day before,

Even if I have to wait I will wait forever,

Coz your love gives me strength to bear this separation,

Or maybe it wasn't a separation only a bad dream

As you are in my heart forever,

Even if I close my eyes forever my last wish would be

To die with your name till my heart stops beating...

~~~~
I saw him putting a flower in my bhabhi's hair,
The smile on his face was reflecting the love in his heart,
Oh I know this smile adorning your face once'
Maybe this is the magic of love,
I still couldnot tell u how much I love you but you already
know,
I could not be away from bhaiya so I came with him
And I couldn't be away from you so brought u with me...

... In my heart

Amazing tuna👏

The pain of seperation they faced was expressed beautifully 😳 They carrried each other's memories in the heart in this long seperation with the wish to meet again and recreate those moments again

Do write more⭐️

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barbieindia

@barbieindia

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: jayvenk
Thick lashes shyly screened
Her khol lined eyes
He was so near
Yet so far
Her fingers played with the red roses
Their fragrance gently wafted
Like a signal it slowly spiraled
His eyes from the Danush shifted focus
Across the murmuring court
Their glances held
The wait is over my beloved.

loved it loved it 😳👏 He was so near yet so far⭐️ loved this line

The moments between their meet is so enchanting to read⭐️

Do write more

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barbieindia

@barbieindia

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: -She-loSarun
@barbie my fav character in Ramayana is hanuman and u have written this amazing piece on him. Loved it to the core. hanuman wanting to know the reason for his lord's agony. I can't wait

I really adore the devotion shown by hanuman to ram. Just wanted to try to express his feelings in words on how he would have felt seeing his idol for first time. I am glad u liked it

Part-2 i will update soon

Thank you so much for liking it😛😊

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barbieindia

@barbieindia

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#187

Tuna, javyenk,SweetRogue,anu,shruti ( Sorry if i missed anyone) All you guys are amazing👏

Please write more⭐️

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sugunmanas

@lifeiscrazy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Hello friends
Read my fictional work on Ram and Sita😊
Hope u guys like it😊
link
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/siya-ke-ram/4546830/sita-meets-ram-my-version-5

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: barbieindia

I really adore the devotion shown by hanuman to ram. Just wanted to try to express his feelings in words on how he would have felt seeing his idol for first time. I am glad u liked it
Part-2 i will update soon
Thank you so much for liking it😛😊

thank u, I will be waiting.

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shruthiravi

@shruthiravi

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#190

The Next Queen

Sita was sitting with Kausalya and Urmila. An anxious Lakshman was pacing in front of their room. King Dasrath had called Ram. And Ram had asked Lakshman not to accompany him and stay with mother.

Sita looked lovingly at her anxious devar " Lakshman Pitaji would have called your bhaiyya to give some good news only. Don't be anxious like this. Come inside. Have some fruits "

" Didi your calm words can soothe the universe but not my aaryaputra. When separated from Ram Bhaiyya even for a small thing arya cannot take it " said Urmila giving a twinkling smile at her husband.

Seeing her laugh Lakshman couldn't suppress the smile that was coming in his clouded face and feeling no use arguing with the ladies he walked inside the room and kept his head in Kausalya Maa's lap.

Kausalya lovingly caressed his hair. "Lakshman don't worry son. Ram will come soon"

Just then a dasi came. She looked breathless. Lakshman immediately got up " What happened"

Dasi looked at Lakshman and then turned to Kausalya " Maharani Kausalya good news has come. Maharaj Dasrath has announced the coronation of Prince Ram. It is going to happen tomorrow. "

An overwhelmed Kausalya took the chain of pearls from her neck and gave it to the dasi the bearer of good news, which was followed by Sumitra who entered the room hearing it.

" Didi" Sumitra rushed to hug Kausalya. Kausalya hugged her back. And it was then their eyes fell on Sita who were standing as if in a trance.

" Sita my dear you are going to be the next queen. Come here my child. Let me see you. My simple DIL is going to take big responsibility. Sumitra. Bring all my ornaments. Ask the tailors to stitch the most beautiful dresses for my dear child. No one should find any flaw with my Sita doing coronation ceremony"

Sita was feeling overwhelmed. Queen. That was a big responsibility. Was she ready. But no one seemed to understand her plight.

Lakshman had bought fresh flowers and he kept that at her feet " Till now I have revered you as my Bhabi, but today you are going to be Queen, that means you occupy the same place in my heart as my mother"

Sita chided her devar " Lakshman I am still your bhabi. If you talk to me the way you talk to Sumitra Maa I will feel bored. I will miss your pranks oh brother. Please don't rever me this much"

" Queen of Ayodhya" exclaimed Urmila hugging her. " Urmila my sister you too. How I loved the simple life. Now all of you are making me feel I have grown up a lot"

" Yes my child. You have grown up and you need to grow up more. But we know you will rise to the occasion" said Sumitra gently patting her cheeks and assuring her.

Sita reveled in the attention and love of her near and dear ones. Yes she did rise to the occasion, but only the occasion was different. Little did they know the one for whom the ornaments and finest dresses were demanded is going to walk bare foot with the dress of a hermit to the forest

Edited by shruthiravi - 9 years ago

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