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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jayvenk

Amongst the fragrant flowers they stood.
He a little awkward,
she a little bashful yet able to look at him.
They had been asked to meet.
A decision had to be made.
Her lovely light brown eyes looked deep into his.
He could not turn away his gaze.
A shy smile curved up on her lips.
He managed to turn away.
In a voice of that held strength and respect...
She heard...
My brother follows the path of dharma.
And I, follow him.
I go where ever he goes.
I walk beside him,
At times behind him,
And at times before him.
He turned his gaze back to her.
You understand they seemed to ask..
She acknowledged with a slight nod.
Her eyes never left his
His piercing alert eyes, softened.
She turned as her name was called.
She bowed before she walked away.
She looked back once more.
Their eyes held.
A soft tinge slowly crept up her cheeks.
In her heart, a gentle flutter..
His heart a missed beat
Both were stolen.
From the grand window janak smiled.
His second was also taken.




So beautifully written!
I was smiling after reading it, so sweet.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Thank u so much. sahana and sarun. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Should I also write I am thinking to write One shots !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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^ Yes, please do. The more, the merrier. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Crazy girl please do.
Be crazy😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh sorry Jaishri I just saw that you have posted your work here on the Drabble series . Like I said on Ashish AT it's outstanding . You and tuna are absoulutly marvellous
@ Crazy Gul please do write .
Edited by NavyaKavya30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Hi navya no apologies please.
I will post in Ash AT whenever I write about ram . hope that is OK.
Ur appreciation means a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Great drabble Tuna 👍🏼 and all your pieces are beautiful jayvenk! 😃 you guys are super talented. Hope to read a lot more great works and maybe contribute a little too 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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[QUOTeE=jayvenk]Hi navya no apologies please.
I will post in Ash AT whenever I write about ram . hope that is OK.
Ur appreciation means a lot

Ofcourse Jaishri, please do...yeh bhi koi poochney ki baat hai 😊 in fact that's how I got to read your work...I had initially read Tuna's piece on this thread and loved it but after that never really got around to coming here coz got a little busy but Ashish AT par naa jaaun atleast once in a day...yeh toh ho nahin sakta 😆 but now I will make sure to drop in here too .
Anyway, you and tuna are AWESOME...👏🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am overwhelmed with the response and positive feedback for both mine and jaishree's work. Hope others will join the queue and start working with us, soon to make this thread much more beautiful...
waise i have a question... can i write on urmila-lakshman or mandavi-bharat as a couple... they all play an important role but is often left out... do reply friends...

🤗 love to have such awesome friends in the forum... and hope to get to know u guys more
and silent readers please don't be silent... appreciation always help😊😊

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