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nagummu ganal"ni n jli telisi
nanu brvaga rd r raghuvara n

Originally posted by: sugunmanas

UTIYAE KARUNAMAY (MELUKO DAYANIDHI IN TELUGU)

Arise from bed the merciful, wake up the son of Dasarata (Lord Raama).

Sun surya Bhagawan is waiting to see your pleasant face

Wake up Lord Rama it is time for sun rise.

I am getting late for my daily chores and I want to touch your charan and take your blessings.

My day will never start without performing your puja. Take this Creamy milk kept in golden bowl as naivadyam(my Offering). Oh lord please get up quickly as the milk is getting cold.

Please accept it and bless me with your kind eyes.

Rama I want to fill my eyes with your Nagumomu(smiling face in Telugu).

Take a contented look of it.

Oh Rama my merciful Lord with my devotion and my love towards you I summon you to with all the right as your favourite devotee.

Naaradaa and other sages, gods and entertainers are waiting to serve you.

Kings and emperors have arrived to learn political science from you.

Before you attend them please look at me with your merciful eyes. As long as I live your Puja and your darshan is my first duty. I wish to protect me and this whole world.

Its a wake up call (Meluko Dayanidhi) Get up my merciful.

Your's

Devotee

Hey guys this is a wake up call for Lord Rama from his beloved devotee very famous Shri Thyagaraja. This piece written by me inspired by his song. It may not convey the same meaning entirely but can be called a version of mine.

Love Karnatic music❤️❤️

Hope you guys like it.😊

shruthi, nice one. u perfectly showed sita's plight during this phase. thanks

hey tuna, sorry for late reply. perfect cliff hanger... who is she? already kaikey is not happy. may be this incident makes her satisfied and she will change her opininon on the girls. can't wait for next update. aww u dedicated the part to me... thank u so much.

Manas... I will update your work in the index tomorrow as i m on mobile now and cannot put hyperlink from here... I liked it.. But i don't understand the language of the song used... Sorry... :)

hey suga,(shall I call u that?)
are u a Telugu girl?

beautiful poem dear.
a request, it would be even more better if u write in Telugu and post the translation too.

Originally posted by: -She-loSarun

hey tuna, sorry for late reply.perfect cliff hanger...who is she?already kaikey is not happy. may be this incident makes her satisfied and she will change her opininon on the girls.can't wait for next update.aww u dedicated the part to me...thank u so much.

hey shilpa... Woh toh kal hee pata chalega who is she. Waise i thought u won't come today.. These days nobody is coming here much.. Waise do u think ev1 is having trouble in finding the posts?

Originally posted by: tuna_star

hey shilpa... Woh toh kal hee pata chalega who is she. Waise i thought u won't come today.. These days nobody is coming here much.. Waise do u think ev1 is having trouble in finding the posts?

no yar I will come. my work just got over. on the way to home. and coming to everyone coming here, it is not possible for them to keep track of different pieces in a single thread. I would rather suggest u guys to post ur work separately and have a common index of ur works. if that is not that good, then u can inform people about ur updates through pm. just whenever u get time, send pm to people informing them that they are new updates and also tell them which are the new updates. few people, once stops somewhere it gets difficult to for them to follow the rest. so u could do that once u get time. since it is starting, all these things happen. don't worry