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Posted: 9 years ago
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Drabble 2.

part 1

Waiting for an answer

Shrutkriti said, "didi we need to go away from here before anybody sees us." Urmila said," no way we are not going anywhere without talking to him. We need to see how the person is to whom our sister is getting married". Shrutkriti,"but I heard that his brothers are sharing this room with him. We cannot talk to him infront of them". "Then we will knock the door and call him outside, why are u so scared shrutkriti as if we are doing some crime", said mandavi.

They knocked the door and saw someone else at the door,not the person who broke the dhanush and whose marriage was fixed with sita. Mandavi said politely," we e sorry to disturb but can u call him?"."call whom? Whom do u want to see?" asked bharat with queer eyes, and somewhat amused with these girls,who were unlike the girls of those days, talking quite confidently to an unknown man. "The man who is going to marry the eldest princess (rajkumari) of mithila",said urmila. "Oh I see"; said bharat with a smile, "but may I know who u are?". "Sorry but we can't tell u, call him,will u please?" said mandavi.

{sorry had to break it in parts as it was becoming long,. I know it's boring but plz bear wit me... next part coming soon...😳 hope u guys will like this}

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Tuna awesome. Love the bold approach of the sisters.
Go girls. 😎
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Tuna skr may not portray the other 3 couples much. They have said they will give imp to urmila and laxman.
But I think we can fictionalize them here.
What say everyone
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Exactly jaishree... I feel the same... Like i read somewhere that mandavi also followed her husband to live a life in the forest,as bharat renounced palace life... Just because she was with her husband throughout she is just ignored so i thought maybe we can write something on her and bharat too...
Regarding skr i don't know whether they will get time to show all these in detail...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Tuna We will create our own love story then..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: jayvenk

Tuna skr may not portray the other 3 couples much. They have said they will give imp to urmila and laxman.

But I think we can fictionalize them here.
What say everyone



Yes I say ...go for it girls ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Tuna loved it.
Jaishree and Tuna both of you are fantastic.

Your way of expressing is beautiful!!!!


Please do write on Urmila and Lakshman.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Oh Sooo so beautiful @barbie
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Lovely poem<3
This is beyond beautiful @ barbieindia.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice work @barbieIndia ... Do tell us your name and i will update in the index as soon as i can...

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