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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: varshu27

@ Barbie and @ Tuna, you guys are talented...what amazing work!!

thanks varshu for coming here... The fiction series is mostly barren these days :p ... Seems like everyone is busy... Thanks sahana and yuvika too for liking my work...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tuna_star

So guys I m back with a poem on urmila... I cannot write poems
well but tried a lot not to bore you guys...hope its not that bad... expressed
what she felt in few words.the 2nd one from lakshman's pov ..true love is always without expectations...that's what i wished to convey..❤️

Forever in my heart


Fourteen long years of wait, seems like it's never going to
end,


Five years have passed since I saw you last,


Still remember the day you came to take my hands in yours,


Seems like it was just a day before,


Even if I have to wait I will wait forever,


Coz your love gives me strength to bear this separation,


Or maybe it wasn't a separation only a bad dream


As you are in my heart forever,


Even if I close my eyes forever my last wish would be


To die with your name till my heart stops beating...



~~~~
I saw him putting a flower in my bhabhi's hair,

The smile on his face was reflecting the love in his heart,

Oh I know this smile adorning your face once'

Maybe this is the magic of love,

I still couldnot tell u how much I love you but you already
know,

I could not be away from bhaiya so I came with him

And I couldn't be away from you so brought u with me...


... In my heart






Hey tuna..
It's beautiful...
Am just waiting for both the love stories..hope they show Lakshman and urmilla story too.. 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv



Hey tuna..
It's beautiful...
Am just waiting for both the love stories..hope they show Lakshman and urmilla story too.. 👏

thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW Tuna!!!!
It's so beautiful.

Read it twice. Loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shruthi tuna barbie simply superb stables pens and stories.
We can make our own mini series.
😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thick lashes shyly screened
Her khol lined eyes
He was so near
Yet so far
Her fingers played with the red roses
Their fragrance gently wafted
Like a signal it slowly spiraled
His eyes from the Danush shifted focus
Across the murmuring court
Their glances held
The wait is over my beloved.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk

Thick lashes shyly screened
Her khol lined eyes
He was so near
Yet so far
Her fingers played with the red roses
Their fragrance gently wafted
Like a signal it slowly spiraled
His eyes from the Danush shifted focus
Across the murmuring court
Their glances held
The wait is over my beloved.



It's too good!!!!

Beautifully described their yearning for each other.

👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww thank u niera. I just wrote a quick one.
This thread had gone of to 3rd page.
A little busy so not able to write more often.
Edited by jayvenk - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk

Awww thank u niera. I just wrote a quick one.

This thread had gone of to 3rd page.
A little busy so not able to write more often.


Please do write dear whenever you are free.

Love to read your work.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jayvenk

Thick lashes shyly screened
Her khol lined eyes
He was so near
Yet so far
Her fingers played with the red roses
Their fragrance gently wafted
Like a signal it slowly spiraled
His eyes from the Danush shifted focus
Across the murmuring court
Their glances held
The wait is over my beloved.


Another awesome work of yours. Good job.
Btw, what's your name?

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