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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u nera. I have two more write ups. Will post soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@javyenk... love ur works of short poems... plz continue to update👏 I m updating in the index...
Edited by tuna_star - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey tuna...
Marvelous drabble dear...
Beautifully written...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey jayvenk
Beautiful work dear...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing Drabble..
I like Sisters Love..
Beautifully written...
@Jayvenk Very Nice Poems..
Edited by -BhavyaEsther- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank u both of you. jayvenk ur pieces are marvelous. and tuna great start dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@ Jayvenk...loved all 3 of ur short and precise stories...it was beautifully written.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank u sooo much for the positive feed back.
I am Jaishree.
❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amongst the fragrant flowers they stood.
He a little awkward,
she a little bashful yet able to look at him.
They had been asked to meet.
A decision had to be made.
Her lovely light brown eyes looked deep into his.
He could not turn away his gaze.
A shy smile curved up on her lips.
He managed to turn away.
In a voice of that held strength and respect...
She heard...
My brother follows the path of dharma.
And I, follow him.
I go where ever he goes.
I walk beside him,
At times behind him,
And at times before him.
He turned his gaze back to her.
You understand they seemed to ask..
She acknowledged with a slight nod.
Her eyes never left his
His piercing alert eyes, softened.
She turned as her name was called.
She bowed before she walked away.
She looked back once more.
Their eyes held.
A soft tinge slowly crept up her cheeks.
In her heart, a gentle flutter..
His heart a missed beat
Both were stolen.
From the grand window janak smiled.
His second was also taken.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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urmila and lakshman's meet...
beautifully described jaishree...

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