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Maria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: baisakh45
uff the last line actually took my breath away.i just hope rudra will remember this when he becomes conscious .i so much want him to remember it.

I am glad you liked it. 😳

Let's see what happens next..

Originally posted by: sanghita0000
awesome update...but why Rishaan was angry??...loved the last line of Rudra...it was fab...

Thank you so much... 😊

I don't think he was angry. He was restless... just like the title of the chapter states...

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#452

I found... you... Biw

what a wonderful update

all the characters - one can feel their confusion, anger, helplessness

rudra cant be with any other girl - can undrstand why and the label given to him - s&m

what is rishaan's plan - except for the obvious

rudra was concerned about maya - a first in his life

bittuji and his reaction to the photo - even meera was shocked at his response

and the last line - did maya hear it

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Maria

@Valar.Morghulis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: DVDfann
soo sweet. Such a Fabulous update 👏
The last line made me cry awww😳

waiting for your next part. Please keep up the long update. Keep going😛

Thank you so much.

I will try my best to give you guys long updates punctually... 😳

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Thank you so much for your comment, Dia. 😳

maria so sorry i commented so late

i got bit busy this time

i will try to again be the first one to comment next time

i love getting your replies to my reviews

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Kanchi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#455

Hey Maria😃, please update the next chapter soon..dying to read what's going to happen next in Rudra-Maya's life 😳 !! Please update ASAP 😆

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Maria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#456

Hey guys!!

I am sorry. I know I said I will update on Wednesday but I couldn't.

I am just not happy with the update I wrote and as I am a perfectionist I just cannot post it. I do not want to give you guys any filler updates.

So, I am rewriting some parts of the update.

I will try updating as soon as I can, hopefully by tonight (latest).

Sorry for the delay everyone, please bear with me.

Love,

Maria

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#457

fruit of patience is sweet

we will wait for the perfect update

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war_is_peace

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Posted: 11 years ago

#458

no i wont wait! 😡

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis
Hey guys!!

I am sorry. I know I said I will update on Wednesday but I couldn't.

I am just not happy with the update I wrote and as I am a perfectionist I just cannot post it. I do not want to give you guys any filler updates.

So, I am rewriting some parts of the update.

I will try updating as soon as I can, hopefully by tonight (latest).

Sorry for the delay everyone, please bear with me.

Love,
Maria