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Posted: 11 years ago
oh awesome FF loved it maria 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
super dear👏 super 👏
no more words to describe it...each and every words was super...
amazing story!!!!!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Maria! I was totally 😲 at Maya turning alcoholic, albeit even if it was a way to get rid of Rishaan. I feel for her, and I'm feeling her claustrophobia 😆. Is there going to be a glimmer of light soon?
And poor Meera...is the worm going to turn?

Once again, fabulous. I was totally riveted. 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
Girls :) this is one of the most amazing piece of writing this forum has ever seen! Hats off to you guys :)
I had goosebumps when I read some parts :) and I am in LOVE, LOOOVE LOOOVE with Rudra already :) ❤️
amazing work :) you guys rule :D update sooon :D ❤️ 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arshisfan

Another wonderfully written chapter, the wait was worth it😉

I loved everything about it

Thank you so much, JJ!!! 🤗

Rudra-Maya in the hospital, she is getting more information about him, she thinks he is crazy, he is daredevil, risking his life for fun, little she knows that he is a restless soul, which is her soulmate too😆

Well, you can see what kind of information she has got till now. Can you blame her? 😆

Why did she ask him to remove his hand, poor Rudra😆, I was expecting her to get surprised and feel once again the connection but koi baat nahi while she was in her trance she found herself besides his bed looking at him, but since she brushed all this away she returned to reality hence behaving consciously

Yeah, you got that right. 😳

I loved the "you have two options, wake up or..." fond memories
Ahh!! I know right. I felt so nostalgic writing it. 😳


I was surprised when I first read that she turned alcoholic, I thought maybe it's not true, maybe press is making stories, but it turned to be her plan to make Rishaan fire her even if it's a destructive plan, interesting!!!


As I told you this girl has strong will power and she is ready to go to any lengths away from the limelight as soon as she can.

Rudra😳, I'm really growing fond of this man, poor thing, behind his arrogant airs and misogynistic reputation, he is just a restless soul who is still to discover who is its soulmate, he is also a loving brother, so let's see how he will manage his dilemma, he is stuck between his brother and his once and once again would be love😉

Rudra is a lot of things at the same time. He is just a restless soul. 😆
@Bold- I liked how you put it. 😳

Rishaan he is really frustrated with Maya's behaviour but still determined to get what he wants and he made it clear to Maya

He is frustrated alright for many reasons. 😆

So let's see who will win and who will lose in this "Battle of wills"

I love how the three characters are developped, keep it up dear Maria👏

That's the best compliment you can give to me. I am trying my best to do justice with the characters I have in my mind.




Thank you so much JJ for your lovely comment. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Thank you so much JJ for your lovely comment. 🤗



I was telling the truth, I really like your FF, it's really interesting, I'm sure a lot more surprises are yet to come😊

I told you I'm eager to read more scenes of Rudra and Maya
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic update...both brothers are threatening maya...& loved how both the brothers care for each other...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

fantastic update!it was worth waiting!pls continue soon!



Thank you so much!!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE
MAYA SAVED RUDRA BUT FOUND HIM CRAZY - FOR A MINUTE SHE THOUGHT HE WAS MARRIED

'You have two options... either wake up... or..

RUDRA IS LOST IN THE PAST AND IS CONFUSED

LOVE THE RELATION BETWEEN THE BROTHERS

WAITING FOR BITTUJI TO MEET MAYA
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mimibm

Woah...that was one hell of an update...it is clear that Rudra's subconscious mind is repeatedly bringing back memories from his past life and he is getting all the more agitated...but what about Maya? Didn't she have anything similar? it is evident that she abhors this industry and is trying her best to get free of this contract but what about her memories of the past life, or RK for that matter?...Is Rishaan going to hurt her out of frustration? I guess Rudra would come back and somehow add suppper garam masala to this already spiced up situation 😉😆...I am waiting for that dear...please don't make us wait longer...



Thank you so much!!
I am glad you liked it.
Yes, the Rishabh in Rudra has found his Madhu in Maya...Rudra is yet to understand and accept the reality.
About Maya not feeling like Rudra... you will find it out in the upcoming chapters. It is intentional.
About Rishaan... ummm... you will see... 😛😆
I am trying my best. All I can say is all in good time dear...😆

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