RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 45

Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

Another fastastic chappie update 🥳
Awesome sistar 😃
I loved it 😳
The POVs of the various characters...their unrest, restlessness, anger, scheming...very well described.
Bechara Rudra...🤣
So that is why he is into S&M 🤣
Because idiot is haunted by Biwi everytime he tries to Do It ! 🤣🤣🤣

Loved the last lines...😳
That was just so hauntingly romantically perfect ⭐️
Par mera dimaag VD ki laal hoodie pe atka hai abhi...aur review nahin hota 🤣

Originally posted by: rekha.366

brilliant update👏 you protrayed very well on the emotions of rudra rishaan and maya.i think bittuji knows who is real rk thats why he dont like rishaan ,and rudra does not do it with another girls kyunki ,biwi satha rahi hai dreams main aakar 😆😆😆 ,and i really impressed that😳😳 and last line i found you biwi stole the my heart ,eagerly waiting for next update

Originally posted by: arshisfan

I love it to bits, the magic, the feelings are back "I found you biwi," very nice, it's very soothing to read your FF given the current situation of the show. This is why I was talking about feelings, indescribable feelings which pull you against your wish towards your soulmate. I know it's about reincarnation but I always loved it when someone feels a strong connection which they can't understand towards someone, no matter what, no matter if she just heard that Rudra is a jerk, her heart, her feelings were for him, she can"t see him in pain

On the other hand Rishab has found his Madhu in the same position they died, his head on her lap

Originally posted by: mimibm

It felt like I was watching a movie on a big screen...forgetting all my surrounding I was so engrossed in the passing scenes...I could feel the undercurrent of tension between the brothers...but the most intense impact was from the last scene where Rudra calls Maya as Biwi and faints...waiting with my pop corn and pepsi...please update soon..

Originally posted by: amrithas

Aaawww the last line just stole my heart! Superb work Maria! The update was worth the wait!

Originally posted by: tulipstar

Awsm...👏

Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

Very nice update.

RK finally recognized her.

Originally posted by: rima4ever

wow again another bombastic mind blowing superb update maria

Thank you so much, Dia!!! 😳

You commented late this time.. 😛😆

rudra was living an empty useless life till now ?

his life has no purpose and he was just existing ?

so he keeps thinking about maya all the time

he cannot sleep and then he starts painting

and he paints the last scene of their previous life

all the time he dreams about the girl in the fire

and madhus last words keep haunting him

so that means in the subconscious he remembers the last fire scene

You got that right. 😳

and maya could not understand what differentiated the 2 brothers

i feel rudra was he soul mate of her previous birth

You're still not sure? 😲

this was the major difference which she did not know

Maybe.. 😳

i did not understand why rishaan was angry

Was he angry? I think he was restless... frustrated..

is it because maya told him that he has no identity ?

Her words did hit a nerve somewhere...

did that mean he could not do anything without his brothers help ?\

Ummm... no. 😛 😆

reading the newspaper maya stopped at the last line why ?

why was rudra so restless in the morning too ?

i mean why did he have so much conflicting feelings ?

i did not understand why rk made the tattoo

he knew in his mind surely even if he makes the tattoo he will never match to the real rk

i did not understand why and how bittuji agreed so easily

and why was he so engrossed in the newspaper article ?

and i could not understand what the brothers conversation meant when they met and talked

why rudra got hurt seeing the tattoo on rishaans hand ?

and what exactly rishaan meant by rudra dont have to bother now

and why after the conversation rudra was hurt yet again ?

Read between the lines and wait for future updates... 😆

i loved the last part so much where mayas heart beats fast even b4 the accident

and she cannot see rudra in pain

and rudra is about to say biwi

Thank you, Dia. I am glad you liked it. 😳

does that mean he has recognised his soul mate already ?

Maybe... let's see. 😛

sorry i have a lot of questions and doubts in this update

this was a very intriguing and interesting update

That was the intention... 😆

could u please answer my questions and clear my doubts ?

i can understand it much clearer then

I tried.. but I cannot give you any spoilers. Sorry about that. 😳

again it is a long rant from me

I love your rants Dia. 😆