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Posted: 11 years ago
Another wonderfully written chapter, the wait was worth it😉

I loved everything about it
Rudra-Maya in the hospital, she is getting more information about him, she thinks he is crazy, he is daredevil, risking his life for fun, little she knows that he is a restless soul, which is her soulmate too😆
Why did she ask him to remove his hand, poor Rudra😆, I was expecting her to get surprised and feel once again the connection but koi baat nahi while she was in her trance she found herself besides his bed looking at him, but since she brushed all this away she returned to reality hence behaving consciously

I loved the "you have two options, wake up or..." fond memories
I was suprised when I first read that she turned alcoholic, I thought maybe it's not true, maybe press is making stories, but it turned to be her plan to make Rishaan fire her even if it's a destructive plan, interesting!!!

Rudra😳, I'm really growing fond of this man, poor thing, behind his arrogant airs and misogynistic reputation, he is just a restless soul who is still to discover who is its soulmate, he is also a loving brother, so let's see how he will manage his dilemma, he is stuck between his brother and his once and once again would be love😉

Rishaan he is really frustrated with Maya's behaviour but still determined to get what he wants and he made it clear to Maya

So let's see who will win and who will lose in this "Battle of wills"

I love how the three characters are developped, keep it up dear Maria👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic update!it was worth waiting!pls continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woah...that was one hell of an update...it is clear that Rudra's subconscious mind is repeatedly bringing back memories from his past life and he is getting all the more agitated...but what about Maya? Didn't she have anything similar? it is evident that she abhors this industry and is trying her best to get free of this contract but what about her memories of the past life, or RK for that matter?...Is Rishaan going to hurt her out of frustration? I guess Rudra would come back and somehow add suppper garam masala to this already spiced up situation 😉😆...I am waiting for that dear...please don't make us wait longer...
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Posted: 11 years ago
another amazing chapter 👏
i love how you maintained the rudra-rishaan talk witty again inspite of the hospital background 😆
i love these two brothers😉 and u already know whom i love more now 😛

i loved loved loved rudra's subconscious dream of his past life when he was fighting death during ganesha chaturthi and then he holds madhu's hand and here he panicked and held maya's hand...and only realized it was maya when she spoke and tried to jerk off his hand 😳

looks like maya is still going to take some time until rudra's touch or eyes affect him?😲

so, both the brothers separately barge into maya's house at 1am 😆
Rudra cares so much for his brother...not an RK like trait 😉 😛
Rishaan is worried about his survival now, and will go to any extent. isnt he alive just to take care of his brother but, not show it obviously?

update soon 😳
luv u 😉
Edited by war_is_peace - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update 👏👏👏👏 ,and thanks for the long update😃😃😃 rudra feels so restless present of maya ,and he did not remember any thing before when he goes unconsious and maya also ignore that ,i found you biwi 😭😭 i love RR brothers ,they so much care for each other ,and maya drinking alcohol and deliberetly doing ,that ,so rishaan should fire her ,poor maya ,kya se kya hogayi , loved the last part ,dhono bhai aakar maya ko dhamka raha hai😆😆 ,and ha my favourate jodi rishaan and meera , my poor meera ,,rihaan ki tho main he is jerk bewada 😡😡, kab rihaan ko akal aayega ,meera hi uskeliye sahi ladki hai waiting for next update😊😊
Edited by rekha.366 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow maria this was simply a mind blowing fantastic update
the plot really deepens and thickens now well i love it
but i find it bit strange that only rudra has the flashbacks
maya does not yet have any flash backs
i could not believe maya started drinking
i mean she too is sort of on a self destructive path
and when rudra held her hand she just flinched ?
i thought she will get a tweeny weeny feeling
or a sort of a flashback or some blurred images
i feel so bad for poor rudra for all this now
i mean he is so trying to get a grip or hold on himself
he is trying hard to stay away from maya
but he is failing so miserably always now
and i understand rishaan must be feeling so frustrated
he must have thought that maya will meekly follow him
and follow his instructions and do as he says
but sure he did not know what he had signed up for
well it seems maya is equally stubborn and moody
does meera still harbour the same feelings for rishaan ?
sorry for being late again maria
i wanted to be the first to comment this time
well better luck net time then
Edited by rima4ever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you Maria. It is so good to start the day by reading your story
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Posted: 11 years ago
Congrats for the tenth chappie 😃
I loved it 😳
The brothers convo, the wars waging inside Rudra and Maya, Maya's resistance ...
Awesome!!
Keep it up!
Love you 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a nice FF! This is the best fic I have read so far, is truly gripping and great language! The characters all seem realistic and it feels like am watching it all happening in front of me.

I really really enjoyed reading each update and read all from chapter 5 onwards at a stretch. Sorry for not being regular, wasn't in my 'reading mood'. 😳
The story is shaping up as I thought about Rishaan, he traps Maya with his tricks. And you gave a shock with Rudra being the right guy while till then I was thinking it was the other brother! 😆

Rishaan comes across more of a baddie, though Rudra has that reputation and you have got me all worried about Maya now. Poor girl, in a fix, with two brothers bugging her now. I hope Rudra remembers everything soon enough and helps out Maya. I'm liking less of Rishaan and more of Rudra now 😛😆😆 RK might rule in our show, but here I prefer him to be a bit humane.

The funny part was Bittuji caving in to give out Sitara Studio for RK's films. Seems like that man is reviving old memories. Poor guy, I feel bad thinking about him.

Looking forward to your next update.
Thanks for the PMs! 😊

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