RM FF: Entwined - Thread I (Thread II Link Added) - Page 44

awesome update 😊 pls continue soon!

OK so after a week's worth of depression over the state of the serial, I finally forced myself to engage my mind into something else. 😆😆

sorryyy fr the late comment 😳 bt u write every update with so much effort and i jst wanna say one line comment like ya very good one thats sit i mean realllyhow come i came with a short one i knw i m crazy bt i will comment on ur every single update bcz u put ur time in it thats why i take time ok back to ur fourth updateee u knw wat u actually give us sme flying imagination their is alwayz a flow when i read ur story i think u should send this story to madhubala producers so we can see the shooting in canada👍🏼 with our very own rishbala .... u do a damnnn goood job dude👏 seriously send it so they knw actually how to carry the story precisely frm the beggining meera s detective behind maya then the anna n maya convo it made me really emotional sme time dunno... bt ya they are friends actually and thats good, rudr s accident rishaan n rudr mishhh isshh talking ... i mean ..use her😆 pause make use of her mygod they r too much when it comes to double meaning😳 so rishaan actually got attracted to maya or something else... well get to knw after reading another one

after reading the fifth one i was like😳 first emotn goes with rishaan n meera scene he barged in her room poor girl not let her sleep so meera is fuu too lattooo on his boss and knws him that he is planning something fr maya and rk on hunt to impress may.. no madhubala ...must say this rk is really demanding comparing to our rkk seriously man yeh to rk ka baap hai is mamle mein😆 he and his famous taunts i know u want to spend some time with me bt i cannot give this honour as of now means later is he going to do two timing... second emo defines rk s haalat after seeing maya too closeee than throwing his charms full on showing his sexy dimples... bt maya is one of a kind though affected bt still not so fourth one goes with her attitude ... she is smelling smthng fishy kind of feeling after seeing rkkk...

nice update and I don't want Rishaan to be kabab mein haddi

Nice update, but the story is stil a mystery, I don't know after how many updates, my mind will stop with all questions, you know what, really I have tons and tons of questions in my mind, but I wanted them to be answered from the story updatesand not directly from you, so will wait for the next update.

and finally thanks for the pm

One request from a lazy friend.

Originally posted by: Poluk

One request from a lazy friend.

Can you somehow put them all together in one place one after the other? Because they are excellent to read and having them together at one stretch shall be very good like reading a novel.😊

In fact the story is going on at a very good pace.

Fabulous update Maria
poor rudra
last line was bang on..awesome..awesome