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Maria

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Posted: 11 years ago

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LostTraveller

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Posted: 11 years ago

#302

Congrats to us for the 7th chappie 🥳
A job well done sistar ! You made me so proud with this update 🤗. Simply Marvellous! 👏⭐️
I loved the title...a very picturesque way to describe the chapter 👏
The dream sequence was really scary...
So Rishaan had it all planned out...drug her, scare her by questioning her reputation and distract her enough so that she doesnt think properly while signing the papers...probably bribed the landlord earlier...a devious and frankly quite cruel mind at work.
There is a stark contrast between this contract scene and the one the old RK had created.
The old RK was motivated by a strong unparalleled sense of vengeance after facing humiliation at the hands of an ordinary girl.
This RK is motivated by nothing but a mere selfish desire to fulfill his ambitions, be that at the cost of an innocent girl's life.
It takes no guesses exactly how incomparable this fallen Rishaan is to that legend of old.

I loved Maya today. She has decided to stand her ground and face all challenges head on. Loved the winter imagery and metaphor used in reference there. She refused to flinch at the problems heaped up on her so suddenly...makes me think she has faced much bigger crisis in her life already...

An extremely strong and resilient woman in the making...that is what Maya is.
The last lines were awesome. Keeps the suspense rolling 😆😉

So stay tuned for the next chapter folks...oh and do be prepared for it...you will be blown off you feet in the next update 😎

Edited by -Evil-Defiance- - 11 years ago

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

#303

i reserved it b4 getting pm 😆😆😆

i am doing a jig as its thrice in a row i am the first

so i had made the correct assumption

rk wants maya to come to bollywood

well i am happy he did not touch her

and i know understood that he had made the contract

he has also had a word with the house keeper

he had deliberately spiked the drink

so madhu would not be in her senses the next morning

and she will just sign the papers without reading

perfect plan perfect time perfect way

though it was an under handed way to do all this

i still did not get why he wanted meera to furnish his flat

so that is appeared as his flat was used for a long time

i mean what is the need now

he has already explained all to maya

and i am awestruck at the way maya reacted

she was as cool as a cucumber

she was so calm cool n composed

as if nothing happened at all

and i loved rishaan's reaction seeing her reaction

i mean however whatever he is dealing with her

she is just taking al in her stride

and she is giving the most unexpected unbelievable reactions

i am wondering is she for real

i mean how is she acting like that anyway ?

so now rk want to recreate the same magic with maya

here i feel her name maya is so symbolic significant

i mean maya means magical or some thing like that

and he is trying to create a magic with maya

i mean it is so perfect in the literal sense as well

well sorry may be i am looking into it too much

how ironic it is that they both are the same people from the previous births

and now they will try to recreate the same magic of their previous birth

what does rk mean by their tragic end ?

i hope after some time in the future both of them feel a deja vu

i want both of them to feel that they are doing the same thing as b4

i know it can come in a later stage of the story

your updates are at times reminding me of reincarnation hindi films

like karan arjun , prem shakti , mehbooba , kudrat , om shanti om , suryavanshi etc

believe me when i say this essay was not meant to be an essay

i have never reviewed a story update so long

i am really sorry for making u read this long essay

one more thing i did not get the nightmare

mayas mom had died early ?

by some accident ?

Edited by rima4ever - 11 years ago

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BeautyForAshes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#304

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis
Chapter Seven: When Winter Comes Knocking...

Montreal, Canada.
The landlord looked at the file with a serious look and opened it. He looked at the papers and took away the first two pages in the pile and handed the rest to Aditya. Aditya looked at the papers and nodded while giving the file back to him. ----read all the above in just one go ..non stop ..no time to think n write at all⭐️ .. n when the landlord was asking her to sign the papers i expected some trick there by our Rishaan <3 😳

Maya stayed rooted to the ground. She did not know what to do. She was numb. She could not feel a thing. Just then she heard a voice from above, "Want coffee?" She looked up, it was Aditya. He was so tall. How did he get so tall? She realized then that she had fallen down on the ground without even feeling a thing. --haha. lovely ..i must say great write up⭐️ ..specially the ones above wit a pinch of humor ..that adds it to the perfection !!

She kept staring at him. She wanted to ask what had happened to her last night and what were the papers for, however, somehow, she knew that fall had ended; the winter had arrived in her life. The dark, cold and rigid winter that would last long. ⭐️
"I didn't sleep with you, if that's what you're wondering." he said, anxiously. 😳😆
She looked at him, finally. "I know. I figured." she said calmly. 👏 😆 Maya is just lovely <3
There was no need for you to take me on a date after my permission if all you wanted was to sleep with me. There was something else that you wanted ⭐️and I take it that you already have got it. So, let's leave aside the small talk and tell me what you have gained and what I have lost." 👍🏼

'What is this girl made of?' Rishaan thought. --am thinking exactly the same 😳 😆
She looked at him confused. He took out his phone from his pocket and after a while he passed it to her. She saw a picture of Adit... Rishaan with ...her. No. It wasn't their picture. It was a picture of a wedding. Their wedding? Her heart started hammering. She felt the ground beneath her crumbling but she cursed her heart and locked it away. She would never listen to her heart again. It gave her nothing but pain. She looked at Rishaan, with a questioning look. ...i felt it all ❤️

"Just like you are Madhubala's look alike, I am the look alike of Superstar RK, Rishabh Kundra! The man who defined superstardom!--Whoa awesome👏 ...
The man who had been proclaimed as irreplaceable. And you know what made him more epic than ever?" he looked at her, enjoying every bit of it. Finally, she was looking like a clueless broken girl he wanted her to look like. Just the kind of reaction he wanted. "His love for Madhubala, his wife, the eternal diva of Bollywood, who left a mark on Bollywood with just a single movie! They even died together in a fire, an accident! Since then it is the most loved and treasured tragic love story of Bollywood. A real but dead love story still thriving amidst the living falsehoods of glamour!" this is one amazing paragraph..loved it to bits ⭐️

"What do you want from me?"
"I want you to help me recreate that magic in Bollywood. Be my Madhubala, till..."
"Till what?" she asked
"Well, till I give us a tragic end..." he said casually and then smirked at her. ⭐️

A chill ran through Maya's spine. --mine too 😳

thank u soo much...now ill patiently wait for the next !!to read a lot more about RK Madhu Rishaan Maya !!🤗

we need to name the couple Maya n Rishaan ... i thot of " Masha " ... which means Maria in Russina language ...a coincidence ?? some reincarnation connections ?? 😉

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LostTraveller

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: rima4ever
i reserved it b4 getting pm 😆😆😆
i am doing a jig as its thrice in a row i am the first

Dia, I literally have to race with you to be the first to comment 😆
My place as the Beta is in jeopardy because of you 🤣

here i feel her name maya is so symbolic significant
i mean maya means magical or some thing like that
and he is trying to create a magic with maya

See I love mythology...esp the Shiv Parvati tales...so you will notice that all these names are related...as I have explained before about Rishaan and Rudra both being names of Shiva...

Maya...is the common derivative originating from Mahamaya or Parvati or Durga...Essentially, Mahmy (great my) both blinds us in delusion (moha) and has the power to free us from it.
Connect this meaning to the world of Bollywood and you will understand why we named her as Maya. 😳

how ironic it is that they both are the same people from the previous births
and now they will try to recreate the same magic of their previous birth

You're pretty confident there 😆
Good for you 😆
Lets see what you say after the next update 😳

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

oops sorry ankita

i do not mean to put your place at risk at all

but i want to be the one after u always

and u are the beta

so u r part of the writing team only

so no competition with u at all 😃

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NadiaZ

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Posted: 11 years ago

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amazing part finally Maya knows about RK's plan and i am glad she is smart type ...so initially RK's aim is to recreate RM's magic as he and maya r their look alike but he already feel the connection between him and maya even she feels it ...i wonder what will be maya's reaction to all this will she agree on his terms that easily or is she planning for something

for that u need to update it soon lol

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LostTraveller

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Let me answer the name references...you should read my comments below Maria's updates...they have some added info if read closely 😆

Okay I love the Shiva Parvati Vishnu tales of Indian Mythology...
So the names come from there...

Rishaan - another name of Shiva, means "a good person"...ironic right? 😆 Lets find out 😉

Rudra - another name of Shiva, means rage and destruction or any sort of extreme passionate dangerous feeling.😳

Maya - Maya...is the common derivative originating from Mahamaya or Parvati or Durga...Essentially, Mahamaya (great my) both blinds us in delusion (moha) and has the power to free us from it.
Connect this meaning to the world of Bollywood and you will understand why we named her as Maya. 😳

Meera - Meera bai was a woman saint of Rajasthan of old, she was in love with Lord Krishna who everyone thought was just a idol to be worshipped. It is a tale of pure, selfless love 😳

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LostTraveller

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: rima4ever

oops sorry ankita
i do not mean to put your place at risk at all
but i want to be the one after u always
and u are the beta
so u r part of the writing team only
so no competition with u at all 😃

Its alright 😆
Just let me res before you jump in 😳
We are glad u are enjoying it so much...😳