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rekha

@rekha.366

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

sorry dear iam late to comment on 6th chapter ,,and tumne next chapter dedhiya it is not that iam complaining😆 ,iam loving that ,back to back updates keliye thank you🤗 ,omg rishaan so much cunning ,old rk se bhi jyadha 😎,he want to cast her herione ,and ,regain his stardom ,create rishbala magic ,and thank god maya know that ,and i miss meera and rihaan in the updates i want to know kya rihaan meera keliye kuch bhi feel kartha hai . she loves him so much and he is jerk ,and i know ,rihaan ,and maya is the mean to each other ,but i like meera ,rihaan jodi also ,some sparks flying between them😉

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

loved the update maria dear !👏

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

Trailblazer

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

tfs buddy for pming 6th & 7th parts
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waiting for next part ! 😉

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LostTraveller

@LostTraveller

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: NeelM
Read both updates... getting intense little by little. I will like to see it as a novel before CVs steal your ideas. You must put a footnote about your ownership.
Very nice updates Apha, Beta.
Maya's nightmare is a very scary one, and it must be linked with her sad past, just guessing.

As a critic I have one thing to say though I'm not aware of the reincarnation process. What I thought that they didn't need to be resembled to Rishab and Madhu. But they would've had a strong feeling of knowing each other somehow, or a strange feeling of attraction or something like that.
Because when Maya saw the RKMB wedding picture, she knew there were something misterious between them, or somehow Rishan and she is connected, and thus the intensity of confusion about her weird feeling about him will be reduced. I wanted to see without knowing about RKMB, Maya and Rishan just feel their inner connection.
Just my thought, but still loving it.

Thanks Neel 😳
Glad that you are liking it 😳...your POV as a critic will probably be answered in the next update!
So stay tuned 😆

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BeautyForAshes

@BeautyForAshes

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

thank u Ankita ...

Glad to to know u guys have named each of the characters in depth !!

am not at all good this... i mean the history of Shiv-Parvathi !! thankiee that u explained it !!!! 😳 😃 now ill try n relate it !!!