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Posted: 11 years ago
again super update😊
i was laughing when the bartender offered maya a drink &explained y she shuld hav it😊
i think anna was at the verge of identifing rk😲
maya know karatte???😲😆she is truely the "madhubala"who had a pepper spray😉😆
i like it when madhu sighed"what a gentleman"😆😆
😆oh god maya fainted again and rk knows this was coming?😲
plz update next update...dying to know 😊
Edited by meiejrishbala - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! This one ended on a suspense for me. What's Rishaan upto now? And the name Madhubala also troubles Maya besides the man in question hmmm. Lets see where this is all leading to. Maria next update n fast please.
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Posted: 11 years ago
plzzz update the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update!i'm loving rishaan!pls update NOW!
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Posted: 11 years ago
now am gonna read !!!😳 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another wonderful chapter dear👏, I liked the first scene with Anna, and then Jon came and she forgot all her anger😆

Mr Rishaan does everything to get what he wants, even using the most unethical ways, a very twisted man, I'm not yet very fond of him, but yes I liked the fact that he didn't like the goons touching her though he was the reason for that at first place!

Looking forward to read your next chapter, you are doing a marvellous job😊


Edited by arshisfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

I am so sorry about the delay!

Anyways... here you go with the fifth update... that's alright 🤗

Montreal, Canada.

Rishaan looked at her closely and then replied, "But you are not needed here anymore." --ouch that was rude ..but RK is like that 😆


Meera gulped. 'Oh God! Why?! From a self-centered prick to a misogynistic jerk, why can't I catch a break?!' she thought. She nodded and he went outside without uttering another word. --am sure Rudra will fall for her ..n that's be amazing to see ...😳 and when Rishaan gets to know this it wud be a shock of his life !!!😆

She lied down on her bed and pondered over how her life had changed in the past seven months. She had been a motherless child as her mother died in an accident when she was just 10 years old but her father never made her feel that way. He was the best father she could have ever asked for. He gave her everything she wanted and needed. He gave her complete freedom to make choices in her life. -- i would love to see bittuji n his life too when we touch the flash back of RK n Madhubala's story !!!😳


'Perfect', he thought as he chided himself mentally, 'this is just perfect! Rishaan Kapoor, the heartthrob of millions has turned into a retard who cannot make up a stupid sentence!' --hahah what has he become ?? lol


She came back with the book and stood behind the counter to finalize the sale. Rishaan walked towards her and looked at her intently for a while and then said, "I know I should have said it earlier... but anyways... Hi! My name is Aditya!" --he is giving a fake identity ..coz he doesn't want he to know he is a superstar ? 😳 ..i wud say Rishaan escaped coz Maya never watches Bollywood movies 😆.


Rishaan as if reading her mind left the store. Maya sighed while she gathered her stuff and went outside to lock the door. Just as she turned around after locking the door she almost bumped into Aditya's chest, but she stabled herself before that. She gasped and glared at him while moving away from him. aawww ☺️

'Sexy and charming as ever!' he thought as he smirked. 'Maybe, she is not normal,' ---hahah mahn he is a unique piece !!! 😆

"We will see how you will get away now, Miss May..." he paused, smirked and then continued whispering to himself, "Madhubala..." --why does always Rishaan addresses her as Madhubala ..this guy sure must have known abt the connections ..or he must be aware of his previous birth ...may be certain incidents that connects him to madhubala ..okiee ill wait for it 😛..



Awesome again...u are getting us glued n that the success of ur story/writing Maria !! ⭐️

bella jumps to the next chapter now !!!😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
Woohoo...mazzaa aa gaya...enjoyed this update very much...so Maya thankfully did not inherit the eternally distressed damsel trait from original Madhubala...she is capable of kicking the balls of her attackers rightaway..Rishaan should be very careful in dealing with this karate beauty...
Now plz plz updatw the next chap right now...
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting
yes yes update it nowww
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Posted: 11 years ago
next update please 😛

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