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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Evil-Defiance-

Congrats to us for the sixth chappie
I love the title of this chapter 🤣
A lot of RK and Maya in this chapter I see 😉
Drunk Anna wa so cute and funny...😆
So Maya craves for love and affection 😳
And Rishaan truly does go for underhanded unscrupulous means...jerk 😡😆...
He first hires goons so that he can become the saviour and then guilts her into a date and then drugs her on said date...perfect way to a girl's heart 🤣🤣...
or is it more he is after? 😉😆

Maya feels something is there...she keeps getting freaked out by his face 🤣...but still knows something is not at all right?
Is this the real yearning of reunion or is this just the prelude to it? 😉

And I just loved Taewondo Maya in action 🤣

So what exactly does Rishaan have in store for a drugged up Maya?
😈

Stay tuned for the next chapter 😎...which will not happen today unless you comment and like this chapter fast ...so get working on those comments...😛

We know...we are evil 😈


Congrats! 😳


I love the title too... 😛😆 (Yes yes ... I like giving compliments to myself! 😛)

I am glad you liked drunk Anna... 😆
Yes, Maya craves for a relationship like that of Jon-Anna...

Lol! Yes, Rishaan is an unscrupulous knight! 😆
Yeah, Maya is kickass and a lot other things... 😉😆


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever

yippi yeah the first place again

Congrats again!! 😆

let me do a small dance now

Let me join you...

ok enough of my bakwaas

You can carry on if you like.. 😆


well that was an interesting awesome mysterious update

Thank you so much, Dia. 😳


meera seems to be really mad crazy lunatic at times
even the bartender laughed at her
i liked meeras boyfriend

You mean Anna? 😆 Yes, she is one fun person to write about. 😆 And isn't Jon the sweetest? 😳

so maya is yearning for a soul mate subconsciously
and rishaan doing chance pe dance

Yes! 😳😆

it was too bad that he planted goons to attack her

Well, he is not a gentleman...😆

how shocking must it be for him to see some of them already down ?

Very.😆

so did he spike her drink ?
thats too bad i hope he will not take advantage of it
i mean i will not be able to stand it if he does it...

Wait for the next update to know about it. 😛

and i loved when maya agreed for a date
so she felt bad when he told she will not see him again
she craves for a soul mate badly
and she really expected him to be a gentleman to ask her to reconsider ?
she really does not know him well

True, she has her doubts on him. But she got carried away at that moment...

i did not get why he hid his identity
does he want her to come to bollywood and be his actress ?

Let's see... 😛😆



Thanks Dia for your comment! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rima4ever





i just love getting these replies from u
am i going mad ? 😆


Lol. Maybe. 😛😆😳


Originally posted by: rima4ever

please update again tonight

i want to read what he does with the unconscious maya



Updating in a while. Wait up,😳
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thank you, my Laila. 😉😆


Originally posted by: luv_rk

Chapter 5- sorry for late comment maria
awesome update
Chapter 6- Amezing one..
Loved Maya Rishaan



Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. 😳



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis

Montreal, Canada.

Maya looked at him confused and said, "Thanks but it's she who is in pain. See."

"It's for you. I figured you must be exhausted listening to Ms. Hyper there." he said with a serious face. --ROFL the bartender is awesome 😆

the bartender was serving another customer a drink.-was that rishaan ??😛

a tall, handsome Spanish guy made his way towards Anna. --OMG what a man Anna has got 😎

She looked at them admiringly and maybe a little, enviously as well. She was happy for her friend, there was no doubt about that, but something in her heart craved for a bond like that. As Jon, pulled Anna closer, she saw the magic brewing as their eyes locked. They look so lost in each other as if not caring for the world. For them, the world stopped existing. Maya prayed that their love remained the same always and then went on to wonder if she would ever feel that way in her life. Just when she was looking at them smiling, lost in her thoughts, someone tapped on her shoulders, she turned around at it was the same guy, Aditya, from the book store! ---this is one amazing paragraph i tell u ...that unexpected tap ..was like it was for me 😳 n a shocker too !

So, see you after four days." he finished with a smile as he left the pub. --good for them n good for us ☺️ ...

It's your cue. Remember, you just have to scare her, do not touch her!" he said in a calm yet menacing tone. --haha i like that " DO NOT TOUCH " 😆

Something snapped in her right then. Maya eyes shot open, not afraid but furious. She punched the man on the left on his nose and without waiting a second she kicked the man in front of her on his crotch. -- n that's like a strong woman now !! great going maya !!!

Rishaan saw red. He beat both the men black and blue ---amazing ..absolutely loved this ...

"I told you not to touch her!" he said through gritted teeth. --oops he uttered the truth out !!

"More than that... saved them from you!" he said, giving away a small smile. 😆 that was the right way to put it ...

, "We can go out for drinks tonight, if you like."

"It's a date then! Tonight, at 8 will be fine with me." he said, raising his eyebrows and then left without a word.


"I was born and raised here. Just have an Indian passport that I keep renewing. I don't even know why. I have never been to India and I don't even want to." Maya said with finality in her voice. the story gets interesting😳 ...

, "You look a lot like one of the most beautiful divas of Bollywood, who though didn't last long in the industry but left a mark that is still left unmatched!" Maya's breath started becoming shallow. "Her name was... Madhubala Rishabh Kundra." He said as he leaned back. 👏

"I want nothing to do... with ... Madhu...bala. I need ...to go... home. This date is...ov-" Her head started spinning and everything blurred. --okieee am getting it...its only maya who resists the past getting onto her ...Rishaan already knew something about the past n the connections...he knew Maya is his ?! 🤓


Note: If you want the next update posted right away, post it in your comment. I have the update ready but will only post if you guys ask for it. Yes, I know I am mean. 😈😆 ---c'mon now Maria ..post it ..i want to read 😆 how mean !!!😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: meiejrishbala

again super update😊
i was laughing when the bartender offered maya a drink &explained y she shuld hav it😊
i think anna was at the verge of identifing rk😲
maya know karatte???😲😆she is truely the "madhubala"who had a pepper spray😉😆
i like it when madhu sighed"what a gentleman"😆😆
😆oh god maya fainted again and rk knows this was coming?😲
plz update next update...dying to know 😊



Thank you so much! 😳

I am glad you liked it. Updating now.


Originally posted by: amrithas

Wow! This one ended on a suspense for me. What's Rishaan upto now? And the name Madhubala also troubles Maya besides the man in question hmmm. Lets see where this is all leading to. Maria next update n fast please.



Thank you, Amy!
I am happy you're enjoying it!

Updating now...


Originally posted by: yogendra1

plzzz update the next part



Updating now...


Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

lovely update!i'm loving rishaan!pls update NOW!



Thank you. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arshisfan

Another wonderful chapter dear👏, I liked the first scene with Anna, and then Jon came and she forgot all her anger😆

Mr Rishaan does everything to get what he wants, even using the most unethical ways, a very twisted man, I'm not yet very fond of him, but yes I liked the fact that he didn't like the goons touching her though he was the reason for that at first place!

Looking forward to read your next chapter, you are doing a marvellous job😊




Thank you Najat.

Yeah Anna is like that. 😆

Yeah, Rishaan is one twisted person! 😆




Thank you. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
I guess I will reply the rest later... I should update now as Maria always honors her words! 😳
Wait up!!
Edited by Valar.Morghulis - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis



Thanks Dia for your comment! 😳


thanks for clarifying my doubts 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Valar.Morghulis


Lol. Maybe. 😛😆😳




Updating in a while. Wait up,😳


aww thats so sweet of u

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