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baisakh45

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Posted: 11 years ago

#311

why did rishan do that??oh no.i want the next update.

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FatehTejo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#312

Superb I like it, keep it 👍🏼

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Neela

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Posted: 11 years ago

#313

Read both updates... getting intense little by little. I will like to see it as a novel before CVs steal your ideas. You must put a footnote about your ownership.

Very nice updates Apha, Beta.

Maya's nightmare is a very scary one, and it must be linked with her sad past, just guessing.

As a critic I have one thing to say though I'm not aware of the reincarnation process. What I thought that they didn't need to be resembled to Rishab and Madhu. But they would've had a strong feeling of knowing each other somehow, or a strange feeling of attraction or something like that.

Because when Maya saw the RKMB wedding picture, she knew there were something misterious between them, or somehow Rishan and she is connected, and thus the intensity of confusion about her weird feeling about him will be reduced. I wanted to see without knowing about RKMB, Maya and Rishan just feel their inner connection.

Just my thought, but still loving it.

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trolldemortx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#314

Bookmarking :)
Guys, I just read the prologue and the first chapter! superb work :)
will read the rest tomorrow when I can keep my eyes open :) ehehe!
Great job :D ❤️

Love the concept :)

Keep up the good work :) ❤️ 🤗

xxx

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baisakh45

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Posted: 11 years ago

#315

till I give us a tragic end????what nooo please.i want happy ending this time.maya is a hard nut i must say.

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mydrashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#316

wooowww its fr ur first updateee👏 aweesummm dudee u r creating the charm of maya with ur woderful writing skills👍🏼 so maya is living alone n still she is so much in life s positivity i would say bcz she is living her life in hope bt its hope with excitement though reserved bt kind at heart n emotional i so feel connected to this story, so anna is her neighbor cum fiend. i loved her passion for dance can see her dance through my soul as i can feel that sooryy to bore u as i really got nostalgic while reading thiss.😳

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Survival

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Posted: 11 years ago

#317

I looove it, especially the part where you were talking about the irrepraceable Rishab Kundra who defined superstardom, I wish it is the case in the show too, and what made him even more epic 'his love for Madhubala " his wife, I just love that. By the way I can't help thinking that normally, as per the original story Rishab kundra "RK' in the show MEIEJ was supposed to force Madhu into films against her will, and this kind of things Rishaan is doing to force Maya, could have been done by Rishab if the story proceeded as it was supposed to be initially, but anyways with your FF we get to see that too😊

Thank you dear for your efforts, and daily updates, and for this double dose today😳👏

Edited by arshisfan - 11 years ago

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mydrashti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#318

so the 2nd one is ruling my brain n some directly goes to my heart 😃🤔

so meera is the pa of rk the kapoorr n i surely recognised him the way he mocked meera fr expl so u enjoying ur n waiting my precious time😎 that is expected frm rk n his khandaan bczz they r rkk no matter kapoor or kundra as rk is a hint will surely do his task properly😆really like this rudra kapoor sounds already jerk as u say😆 so maya finally at peace bt someone out their struggling fr his sleep very good so the initial stage is arriving we are waiting fr it... another wonderrr update 👍🏼

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mimibm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#319

I had goosebumps after reading the last line...why does RK want a tragic end? Why does he want to repeat the past in the name of recreating it? I loved the way Madhu could think and deduce RK's scheme so coolly..I am loving this Madhu...in fact it would be a treat to watch our DD playing such a real and straight forward character instead of the teary eyed Madhu...thank u so much for this wonderful piece of fantasy...

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Meenu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#320

This is getting dark, the intrigue deepens. I'm loving it - the peeling of the layers of the onion, only to reveal more and more. I can't wait till the next update, and the one after, and the one after! Some random thoughts and questions...

Maya's nightmare evoked shades of RK's nightmare. When she opened the door, what would she find? Something horrific akin to what RK had seen all those years ago, with his father?
And the beating? What's going on over there? Some kind of abuse - who was the perpetrator? Made me wonder whether these were suppressed memories that somehow made their way into her subconsciousness, or whether it was a kind of hallucinogenic effect of the drug that Aditya/Rishaan had given her. (That was nasty nasty by the way - can't condone that)
A shirtless Aditya? Whoa! How did that come to be? I digress...
Well, looks like he has all sorts of diabolical schemes up his sleeve. What's going on in his mind, and driving his actions? Yes, his soul is restless, and after finding his Madhu - Maya he is energized. So he wants to tie her to him, to act in his film. Will that relieve the darkness that seems to shroud his soul? And what's the story with the tragic end? Is that a red herring that you guys have thrown out there?
And Maya - am waiting to see how she moves forward. She seems insightful, and spunky.
And waiting for Rudra-Meera story to unfold. Is there going to be one? As I said before, I'm totally intrigued by Rudra.

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