Swaron[TANHA] SS: Love, is it forever ? :: Chapter 5 UPDATED

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Love , is it forever??





Two people ... two halves of the same soul ... incomplete without each other ... lost without each other's presence to guide them ... they vowed to love, honor and cherish till death do them part ... it was the perfect beginning of the perfect fairy tale ... or so everyone thought ... but do all fairy tales get their happily ever afters ... they say falling in love is easy, but staying in love takes work ... will these two people so blissfully in love be able to fight all odds and get their happy ending or will they remain broken forever ...?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Before we subject you to our own brand of torture we want to give all the writers on this forum a huge thank you. All of us have been followers of your work since our first day on IF and it is one of the major reasons why we are still here. Your work is inspirational and gave us the courage to try our hand at writing too.


That said, it is also true that we won't be anywhere even close to the brilliance you guys have made a rule now. This is our first attempt at writing and we are extremely sorry if this proves to be an utter waste of your time.


Please feel free to comment, criticize and aim whatever rotten thing you can lay your hands on. They are all welcome.


This SS has been written for the 100th TanHa AT with Sneha as Sharon and Shantanu as Swayam and we would request our readers to read this with only them in mind as SwaRon. If that seems difficult maybe this write-up is not meant for you so please refrain from reading further.


Special thanks to Ana for getting us the banner done in a short notice 😊



Now without further ado we present to you , Love , is it forever ? .


Thanks

Sowmya, Oin, Anu

Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 12 years ago
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Reserved!šŸ˜›

Wanted to be first!... Yay!!!!!

Somi we hv an ultimate rishta 😃
Anyways coming to the intro... It was awsome ... Looks like there is gonna be a lot of love .. Fights and passion...😳

And our swaron...update I can't wait
Edited by llyrics - 12 years ago
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INDEX

Chapter 1 : Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4 : Chapter 4
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PS: If you want to receive the PM for update please add "soa_tanhaworks" to your buddy list . 😳

Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 11 years ago
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Chapter 1
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"Ding Dong" "Ding Dong"


Sharon tried to open one eye to check the time in the alarm clock kept at her bed side.It was 5:30 and her sleep fogged brain couldn't come up with single guess as to who could be ringing the doorbell at this godforsaken hour.

Her dearest husband Swayam shekhawat, who had his arm around her waist was in deep sleep and did not look like even a bomb blast would wake him up.He had been working so hard these past few days!!!


Sharon blushed remembering last night. Swayam had returned pretty late and Sharon had waited up. A habit he strongly disapproved of and one Sharon didn't want to lose, she loved the calm togetherness of dinner time. It had been the cause of innumerable arguments between them. Sharon wouldn't have admitted it under oath but she liked being scolded by Swayam. It made her feel loved and cared for.

Last night had been different though.


Sharon having missed him badly throughout the day had gotten upset when Swayam scolded her for staying up so late.She had cleared the remnants of their meal and quietly moved to their room wiping one solitary tear off her cheek. A few seconds later she had felt Swayam's arms encircle her waist as he rested his forehead on her shoulder.


" I'm sorry" he mumbled.

She remained quiet.

" I love our dinner time together as much as you do Sharon but I can't help worrying about your health."

She turned around and he cupped her face.

" I know I over-reacted but you know that you are the only one who can bring the best and the worst out in me."

He rested his forehead on hers and whispered " please forgive me Sharon..please. it kills me to have you mad at me."

Sharon heard his voice crack and immediately looked up. She could see the unshed tears.

" hmm" she said pretending to be gravely disappointed.

" I was expecting something else when I felt your arms around me..but I guess this will have to do" she sighed pouting.

Swayam's frown turned into a smirk as he enquired " what were you expecting?"

Sharon blushed furiously and replied " a different form of apology ."

Swayam stepped closer and bending down whispered in her ear " what form of apology?"

Sharon felt his hot breath teasing her skin and lost all notion of coherent speech. All she could do was stare into his eyes and blush like an idiot as he captured her lips in a kiss full of dark promises.


Ding Dong


She came out of her blissful thoughts as she heard the rude jangling of the door bell again. She got up to open the door still smiling.

"Kriyaa"

"Sharooonnn"

Kriya hugged Sharon so suddenly and so hard that a half asleep Sharon almost tumbled to the floor before she could balance herself!

Sharon couldn't believe she was seeing her best friend at her door step..

"Kriya ..you' here..when did you arrive from US and why didn't you inform us ? and how did .. '. '" . Kriya indicated her to shut up and pushed her aside to enter the house !! She looked tensed which didn't go unnoticed by Sharon..

"wait let me wake swayam" said Sharon and was about to leave to her room when Kriya stopped " no" Sharon "why" kriya " because I need to talk to you".

Kriya and Sharon sat on the couch with two mugs of coffee!!


Sharon was worried but didn't want to show it and said , " ab bata what is the issue and why don't you want me to wake up swayam your brother??" "Sharon" ..that's the best part about your best friend marrying your brother , you can always avoid calling her babhi and use the name instead' "I I love someone" .

" what ..who is he and why didn't you tell me all these months" Sharon asked almost choking on her coffee

" he was my friend's friend circle , we met at a party and it just happened .Neither of us knew when we fell in love " said Kriya trying hard to hide her blush.

Sharon snorted loudly but quickly sobered down.. "Ok fine ..who is he "

Kriya worried started studying the floor hard as if it was going to tell her the answer to Sharon's question

"Kriya" Sharon prompted

" Rey" 'she replied so softly that Sharon almost missed it.

" Rey ..Rey .eerr? " Rey as in Reyansh Singhania ,Pratap Singhania ka beta" .. Sharon choked "WHAT ??" she shouted

"shhh" Kriya indicated holding finger front of her mouth.

" How can you love your brother's enemie's son ?? were you out of your mind ..I mean you know everything..but u still " She ran out of words.

Shekhawat and Singhania's had always been business rivals but things turned really ugly after the Singhanias cheated to acquire a project which resulted in the Shekhawats going bankrupt. Swayam had to build everything from scratch.Thus their enmity had reached new heights. This thought itself made Sharon shiver ..

"Sharon when we met we didn't know that we were kids of business rivals. We moved in with similar set of friends. We became close friends . We ourselves didn't realize when this feeling changed to love .. I wanted to share with you this over the phone but was waiting for the right time. Recently I found this all, Sharon, please help us ..please" Kriya pleaded.

Sharon was numb,she couldn't say anything so Kriya shook her hard.


Sharon jerked out of her shock and asked with a tense frown creasing her forehead

" what ..what will tell swayam?"


" Sharon you are my best friend,we have been friends from college , I helped swayam to pataofy you too..so tujhe by default help karni padegi"

"par Swayam" Sharon stuttered worried.


" I know you will manage ..has he ever said no to you?aaj bhi Majnu hai woh" she smirked elbowing Sharon and winking.Sharon gave a worried smile.

"Sharon Sharon " .. Swayam came down looking for his Sharon when his eyes fell on Kriya. He was surprised ,happy and worried at the same time to see his sister at his home while according to him she must be working somewhere in US .

"Kriya Tum ..are you fine .sab kuch teek hai na ..koi problem to nahi ..tumne inform kyun nahi kiya ki tum aa rahi ho!! Airport aa jata pick karne , aur yeh surprise karne ka idea kaise aaya ??" Swayam fired all his questions at Kriya in single breath '

" bas unhi aagayi and there is no problem" she replied tightly hugging him. He hugged her back , though not completely satisfied with her answer and looked at Sharon smiling who returned his smile but suddenly his smile dimmed and Sharon knew he had seen the tension in her eyes!! That was the problem for Sharon, Swayam could always read her eyes and she could not hide anything from him !!!She sent up a quick prayer and turned towards the duo with a bigger and hopefully brighter smile.

Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Somi n oin šŸ¤— so nice of u guys to add my name too though i didn't done anything 😳 .
Beautiful intro n super duper awesome part one, brilliantly written. U guys just nailed it šŸ‘ i m so proud of u guys šŸ˜› . Aur kisi ne mujh se kaha tha ki they are pappu in writng 😔 so beta pappu paas ho gaya. You guys just get ready once my leg got fix l bill bug u guys wid emotional attayachar to write more just wait n watch 😈 .
Somi Ding dong is same šŸ˜† loved the flashback part my lovey dovey swaron & beautifully written šŸ‘ . Thanks for phulfillng my wish 😳 swaron kiss . Now dare u guys underestimate urself again😔.
One of the best writers of this forum Abby n Baz are praising ur work which is not less than an award somi n oin u guys rock n left the other's rock for mešŸ˜†.loved the response for this ss.
Thank u all for commenting loved all the comments n respect.

Ana thank u n ur frnd for this beautiful banneršŸ¤— loved it.
Update please n update soon šŸ˜›
Edited by arch2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mine
donešŸ˜›

somišŸ¤—
i'm so proud of you, i knew you could do it and you didšŸ‘
although i've read this before, many times in fact, reading it here is a different high altogether. I can't express my feelings in words right now.
You are going to have to do this again,archu won't spare youšŸ˜†
you are a writer now girlšŸ˜‰ā­ļø
I promise to give longer comments for the next chapters,right now i'm too excited!
Edited by austen4ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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to all three somi, oin, anu.. congo for ur first wite upšŸ¤—
intro looks interestingšŸ‘šŸ¼ waitg for 1st update..😊
loved the banner..😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Saare ke Saare Phele se hi res karke bhete ho 😭
Koi nhi this is mine

Somi,Anu, Oin tum teeno toh writer ban gyešŸ˜†...
To be serious... Intro is jhakaas... loved the conceptšŸ‘
Baaki ki taarif... Baaki ka ss padhne ke baad šŸ˜†
Edited by Pankhuri295 - 12 years ago
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It is so weird for u guys to say you are first timers. okay not pros but u aint first timers either people so dont underestimate yourself
coming to the update! the way u express or describe the scenes is splendid the part where swayam is smirking... i was also smirking there šŸ˜† and sharon is so cute types bhabhi here totally unlike the diva i wonder u people did that on purpose or what swayam as usual the majnu... nothing else can be expected of him when we say swayam we mean majnu only and i am totally amazed at u making rey as a rival of swayam coz every time when swayam and rey are mentioned they are always best buds but this seems to be interesting so looking forward to the next update
u guys did leave us wanting for more
i would say hats off šŸ‘
p.s. i hate it when writers make us readers wait for updates and we have to go beg them so update soon.
Edited by an_skyfighter - 12 years ago

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