Swaron[TANHA] SS: Love, is it forever ? :: Chapter 5 UPDATED - Page 4

Originally posted by: -Marium-

RESERVE@!

Originally posted by: lassipriya

nice update..really well written guys👍🏼 ..Lassi 🤗

Swaron part was cute.. i liked one were sharon likes to be scolded by Swayam becoz It makes her feel loved and cared..😳 -- credit goes to Oin

Shekhawat and Singhania's r enemies... now dis something new.. till now i have always read reyam as friends...

lookg forward for nxt update..😛- will update soon😊

Originally posted by: ABBY92

I got to start by saying that the introduction somehow also reminded me of our relationship with TanHa and how we're sort of still holding on to it after all this time.- Thanks 😳

Coming to the update, I must say it's really good for first timers. - Thank you 😳Loved how Swayam holds Sharon's waist in his sleep and from the back cause that had always been a wish of mine to see them like that onscreen. - These are something we wished to see and we are doing to do armaanos ko poora karna through this SS 😆😆Cool twist with having Kria falling for Rey who is the Shekhawat family's enemy and poor Sharon has to break it to Swayam. This is going to be fun. Can't wait for the second update !!- will Update soon😊

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

I loved the starting...simply gave away the depth of their relationship and the flash back that followed was even more beautiful.. 😳 thank you .. Hahah different form if apology han sharon can't help herself in front of our majnu bowy... Hahah and then The kiss full of dark promises hahah it made my brain cell do a dark dance and my imagination showed me a picture which is not going to help me sleep tonight so if i dont sleep tonight i am blamming u guys. ... 😆 😆 thats what Oin and Anu wanted , credit goes to Oin for coming up with that ..
Now this could either go a romantic comedy way or a romantic drama way when sharon will drop the bomb. .. you being an awesome writer can guess😳We have always seen kriya and sharon rivalry it would be interesting to see reyam rivalry... You gotta wait for that 😛
A very good attempt for first time. Keep up the good work :)

Originally posted by: swaronlove001

waoo veryy nic loved it plzz update soon -- Thanks for liking our work 😳

swayam nd rey are rivals sound intresting

Originally posted by: raj_tanha_fan

lovely!!!!!!!

btw as i am always confused what is your name joshua? ..my name is Sowmya and kisne yeh fantastic chapter likha hai? this is work of me and Oin, with Anu's suggestions

whoever ya jiska bhi team work have done a commendable job!! --yes yes team work

thanks for pm:)

Originally posted by: Pankhuri295

You guys are kidding... Ryt... Can't believe this is you're first work.. Beileve karlo panku this is our first work hai and original hai 😆...First you say you are writing fir the first time and don't allow to keep much expectations... Then to give us a 1000 volts jhatka by giving this...Liar's huh 😲 - Getting scared because of such expectaion..Hope we do justice to the expectation😕

The first chapter is super duper awesomely fantastic...believe me👏... And yes it has raised much expectations...after reading this I can't wait for the next part... So I want the update fast...n by fast I mean really very fast 😈

Congo 🥳

Originally posted by: K.R_ackraal

It wass amzinggg sowmyaaa... ji - Thanks Arya😳

1st work? NYCcc

im in love wth itt updateee sooon - Hope we do justice to your expectation in next chapters😳

n thannnxx fr pm

Originally posted by: llyrics

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Originally posted by: smartypantstanu

Ok for starters seriously is this your first work??? Like seriously??😲

Lagta toh nahi hai... This actually is our first work 😳

I loved the introduction... It was just perfect...

The intro usually gives you half of the idea of what the story is going to be like...

But this has actually kept the thinking caps on and increased the curiosity levels... Fab 👏 ... Hope we keep the curiosity level intact 😃

Coming to the chapter it was a great start and Swayam-Sharon married is always a treat to read 😉 -- I too love 😛

As you'll plan to keep the eagerness levels constant

I can't wait to read what happens ahead

Update soon and do PM me 😃

P.S Thanks for the PM 😊