Swaron[TANHA] SS: Love, is it forever ? :: Chapter 5 UPDATED - Page 3

wt say yaar kriya ki entry har baar dhamaakdar hi hoti hai 😆😆

Originally posted by: arch2012

Somi n oin 🤗 so nice of u guys to add my name too though i didn't done anything 😳 . " arrey, your valuable inputs are always helped.. This SS would have got "U" certificate if it was not for you 😆now yeh "U/A" hogaya .

Beautiful intro n super duper awesome part one, brilliantly written. U guys just nailed it 👏 i m so proud of u guys 😛 . Aur kisi ne mujh se kaha tha ki they are pappu in writng 😡 so beta pappu paas ho gaya. You guys just get ready once my leg got fix l bill bug u guys wid emotional attayachar to write more just wait n watch 😈 . hum bas isse khatam karde wahi kafi hai .. Not writing any more 😈

Somi Ding dong is same 😆 loved the flashback part my lovey dovey swaron & beautifully written 👏 . Thanks for phulfillng my wish 😳 swaron kiss . Now dare u guys underestimate urself again😡. I never wanted to change "ding dong" part ..already isme "2 ding dong ho chuka hai, pata nahi aur kitne hai" 😆Kissy-wissy part thanks to Oin. I suck at romance 😆

One of the best writers of this forum Abby n Baz are praising ur work which is not less than an award somi n oin u guys rock n left the other's rock for me😆. 😳 😳

loved the response for this ss. me two , 3 idiots chale ss likhne , when i decided never thought I will get any positive response 😳

Thank u all for commenting loved all the comments n respect.

Ana thank u n ur frnd for this beautiful banner🤗 loved it.
Update please n update soon 😛

Originally posted by: austen4ever

mine
done😛

somi🤗 Oin ,🤗
i'm so proud of you, i knew you could do it and you did👏
although i've read this before, many times in fact, reading it here is a different high altogether. I can't express my feelings in words right now.
You are going to have to do this again,archu won't spare you😆
you are a writer now girl😉⭐️
I promise to give longer comments for the next chapters,right now i'm too excited!

This SS wouldnot have been so beautiful if it was not for your. Your editing and good angrezi has added chaar chaand to it 👏!!! and thanks for getting U/A certificate. Readers are appreciating that 😉

Originally posted by: u-me-aur-D3

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Originally posted by: an_skyfighter

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It is so weird for u guys to say you are first timers. okay not pros but u aint first timers either people so dont underestimate yourself -- We are first timers sachchi 😳

coming to the update! the way u express or describe the scenes is splendid the part where swayam is smirking... i was also smirking there 😆 and sharon is so cute types bhabhi here totally unlike the diva i wonder u people did that on purpose or what swayam as usual the majnu... nothing else can be expected of him when we say swayam we mean majnu only and i am totally amazed at u making rey as a rival of swayam coz every time when swayam and rey are mentioned they are always best buds but this seems to be interesting so looking forward to the next update - Glad you liked it . We were skeptical as it is our first attempt and thought will fall falt on our face 😆

u guys did leave us wanting for more - Your expectation has increased our responsibility towards this SS, will still request you to keep the hopes low 😛

i would say hats off 👏 -- Thanks 😳 😳

p.s. i hate it when writers make us readers wait for updates and we have to go beg them so update soon. - I know , I used to hate too, but it is time to take revenge 😈 . will update soon