Swaron[TANHA] SS: Love, is it forever ? :: Chapter 5 UPDATED

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

nice update..really well written guys👍🏼

Swaron part was cute.. i liked one were sharon likes to be scolded by Swayam becoz It makes her feel loved and cared..😳

Shekhawat and Singhania's r enemies... now dis something new.. till now i have always read reyam as friends...

lookg forward for nxt update..😛

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

I got to start by saying that the introduction somehow also reminded me of our relationship with TanHa and how we're sort of still holding on to it after all this time.

Coming to the update, I must say it's really good for first timers. Loved how Swayam holds Sharon's waist in his sleep and from the back cause that had always been a wish of mine to see them like that onscreen. Cool twist with having Kria falling for Rey who is the Shekhawat family's enemy and poor Sharon has to break it to Swayam. This is going to be fun. Can't wait for the second update !!

Edited by ABBY92 - 12 years ago

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@DaShInG_DeViL

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

I loved the starting...simply gave away the depth of their relationship and the flash back that followed was even more beautiful... Hahah different form if apology han sharon can't help herself in front of our majnu bowy... Hahah and then The kiss full of dark promises hahah it made my brain cell do a dark dance and my imagination showed me a picture which is not going to help me sleep tonight so if i dont sleep tonight i am blamming u guys.
Now this could either go a romantic comedy way or a romantic drama way when sharon will drop the bomb. We have always seen kriya and sharon rivalry it would be interesting to see reyam rivalry.
A very good attempt for first time. Keep up the good work :)

Edited by DaShInG_DeViL - 12 years ago

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

waoo veryy nic loved it plzz update soon

swayam nd rey are rivals sound intresting

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

lovely!!!!!!!

btw as i am always confused what is your name joshua? and kisne yeh fantastic chapter likha hai?

whoever ya jiska bhi team work have done a commendable job!!

thanks for pm:)

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Pankhuri295

@Pankhuri295

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

You guys are kidding... Ryt... Can't believe this is you're first work...First you say you are writing fir the first time and don't allow to keep much expectations... Then to give us a 1000 volts jhatka by giving this...Liar's huh 😲

The first chapter is super duper awesomely fantastic...believe me👏... And yes it has raised much expectations...after reading this I can't wait for the next part... So I want the update fast...n by fast I mean really very fast 😈

Congo 🥳

Edited by Pankhuri295 - 12 years ago