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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MyInfatuationz




I DINT READ "TARARUMPUM" SS FROM THE BEGINNING..SO I THOT I WILL BE RAEDING IT FRM THE FIRST..SO I NID TIME TO READ IT ALL:) U PLZZZ PM ME ALL UR UPDATES!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MyInfatuationz

Thanks frnds.. so now my Part 1 update is coming.. Hope u like it. Bear my mistakes as its my first tyme.



Part1:

8 pm night at RADIO FM 91.2 all members of the office are running and working fastly.

Girl: OH GOD, Today Boss is like Boiling water.. I will definitely lose my job.. Oh God Help me.

Girl2: Haan Yaar only one man could save us.. but where is he.. Boss is asking for him since last couple of minutes. If he would not here..I will be next to throw out..Suddenly a car stop outside the building.. A Boy with 21 come out of car .. His eyes speak volumes. He is tall, dashing and every girls dream. He open car door wid an attitude and wid his famous killing smile on face as he know his affect on surroundings. He lock car door and go straight towards office.

Girl1 Haayee Koi To rok Lo.. He is looking dam hot today. M would be the first one who wishes him today. (Girl set her makeup n dress and moves towards him).

Girl1: Hi Handsome '.

Guy: (turn around and remove his goggles') Hey SIMI ..WATS up.

Simi: haaa u r here and all will be set.. After all Ur the great Dhak Dhak of our Radio MAAN Khurana. I tell u boss is asking about u since last couple of hrs. We are in great trouble if u would not dere in any min..GOSH why all boss are lyk dis Hitler type. But tell u m gona fired if boss check me out in chit chat wid u.. Go MAN ur late again.

MK: chill chill baby' when MK is here.. No worries.. Go back to Ur seat and let me handle Kharooss Boss. How could he scared sweet babes.. (MAAN WINK)

Simi: hehehehe Hey MK c'mon who knows better den u ;)? Anyways meet u after Ur show... GOOD LUCK hmmm

MK: oh thanks babe

A man wid early 50's come out of cabin and shout " hey MAAN finally u care to join hmmm. Where have u been since last hr.. Why u always late. Have u prepared anything for today.. I know UR THE MAAN KHURANA THE MOST DEMANDING PERSON AMONG LISTENERS but still everything should be pre-planned.

MK: Hey bossy bossy bossy c'mon that's against MK rules.. U knows m the BEST and what I have to share wid my Fans MK doesn't need scripts or any handouts. I believe in what u feel just speak out...it will really connect hearts... JUST LYK MK FUNDA DIRECT DIL SY BINDAAS BOL.'.let it be BOSSY u r too old to understand me... (Smirk)

Boss: (angry of being call Old but he control) ahaaan Over-confidence.. hmm I like ur attitude but play smart my BOY.. Anyways show is about to start... Go and got ur seat... m sure Listeners are waiting for their DHAK DHAK .

MK: Ohh yaaa.. see ya.

Maan enter into record room.

On the other side of corner a girl with early 18 wid fair complexion and light brown eyes seem lots of dreams in it. Sitting on bench and anxiously waiting for her love, her life'

Girl: ufffhh He is again late.. dis tyme will not accept. He has to pay for his late habit.. arrghh.. (she pick her phone) where the hell of u KARAN' m sitting lyk an idiot in park from last 1 hr and u are still not in mood. U are never serious about our commitments.

Karan: hey Sweet Heart just turn m just standing at ur back.

Girl: (look back and Excitedly hug him but suddenly she realize.). hmmm m not talking to u.

Karan: hug him frm back "hey my Geetu my Jaanu fiance. Sorry u knows office work and dis Mumbai horrible traffic really stuck up.

Geet: hmmm u n Ur lame excuses. Now leave me.. Dis tyme ur excuses don't work. M thinking to ask my parents that I don't want to marry wid such irresponsible guy..u should marry wid ur files and office. huh... (she remove his hands and move further)

Karan: haaa don't do dis princess u know I will die without u. My Sexy Babe (he move towards him)

Geet: aaarrgghhh stop it Karan u know I hate dis cheap language..ur getting too bold KARU

Karan: hahahahahahaa (He come close and whisper in her ears) really SEXY U HATE WHEN I CALL U SEXY.. (wid dis he start running and Geet run behind him)

Geet: I will not spare u Karan..aaa,, ur def dead'

Karan runs and hit wid stone on de way which make him fall.

Geet shout:;KKKAAARRRANNN

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Precap: don't dare to call my MK idot 😉


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MyInfatuationz




Thanks for all ur likes well still i need more.. or i can say i expect more. anyways never mind.its just a start.. i m sure will got many likes in next updates afterall u never know wats in store for u ;)

Part 2:

Geet sitting on window suddenly shout. Bitter reality stuck her that she is alone in dark room which has no other source of light except moon light which is glowing her face . her teary red eyes She closeher eyes and tears again start flowing. Suddenly her room door open and girl enter...

Pinky: Lalllaalllaaallaaallaaa dancing and dreaming in own world. She jump on bed

Pinky: haaayeee Rohan is world's most handsome, dashing guy.. M in love wid him.Haye Baba G Aping setting krwa do.. ik baar..

Geet: (quickly wipe her tears) and look towards pinky'.. Rohaan ?? is dat uncle aunty got new driver or a cook.

Pinky: aarrgh Shut Up Geetu.. he is not lyk dat and don't dare to call him ..May be he is ur Jeeju in future.

Geet: haaa Not again Pinky.. how many jeeju's are in ur list. I even don't remember my Jeeju names.This would be the 1000 one. hanaa

Pinky: Shut up geetu he is DE ONE.. my exboyfrnds are just tyme pass. He is the one made for me.

Geet: how do u know he is DE ONE made for U Pinky.

Pinky: Coz when I saw him my heart starts thud thud.. His one sight makes me restless. When he talk its lyk m listening whole orchestra in my ears.. He is..

Geet: Baas Baas U and Ur stupid logics. Grow up Pinky. This love only give pains and tears.

Pinky: leave it Geetu. U don't understand.. Hey wait a min.. Madam do u have any plans for dis electricity savings.. Why all lights are off and ur sitting lyk (noticing her red eyes) ARE U WEEPING GEETU.. Come here.. wat happen to u .(pinky Surprise)

Geet: (Fake smile) these tears are now part of my love. Coz I dare to love and love always give pains tears and darkness. This dark is my inside...I don't deserve happiness and smiles. That's what my life teaches me. I am''.

Pinky: Ohhh Stop it Geetu. Why Ur always blaming urself. U should forget about Ur past and have to live in Ur present. Who knows u have joyus, smily life ahead? M Sure Somewhere someone has made just for my Geetu and when he is here.. U don't have tyme to look back and shed tears on dose moments.. Meri Jaan Purani Yaadon Mein rahogi to Nahee Yadein kaisy banaogii' Correct ;)

Geet: Piinnnkkkyyy stop it.. U know it I can't think anyone else beside my KARAUU.. Love happen once in life and BHAGWAN had given me dat chance but at de end HE snatched my KARU... I live my life and Karu memories are enough for my survival. I love him more den myself. How could I throw Karan out n give his space to someone else. No doubt my love was incomplete but it was most beautiful years of my life. I don't need anyone... I can't anymore bear dis Love anymore. NO LOVE For me now...i don't trust anyone... Dis heart only belongs to Karu and still it is.

Pinky: but dear u never know.. Bhagwan has some other plans.. anyways I think u have to listen sweet music.. coz MK said MUSIC IS BEST medicine for all SICK AND DEAD HEARTS.. MUSIC Life Koi MAST Bana deta hay. Saying dis she turn on radio. Hey Its Saturday MK show would be on .. Let's sink into the sea of love, masti and musical life. M sure u will feel better. After my MK is de Best.

Geet: U and Ur MK.. Btw dis MK has no other work to do kya.. Always dis Love, Music and life.. huh he never know wats is de real meaning of life. I hate non-serious jokers.

Pinky: Oh hello he is most Dhak Dhak RJ of Fm.. don't dare to call my MK idiot. He is King of Love, He is most dashing guy.M sure once u listen his show den u would be diehard fan of his.. His voice, his style and his all funda's haaa simply killing yar..

Geet: one min when u met ur DHAK DHAK MK.. do u know him personally.. huh.. DHAK DHAK RAJ CHamchi. Don't forget I hate dese radio and Rj

Pinky: don't forget KARAN JEEJU wanted to be Rj too. He think they are super cool. Infact he was going for Rj Audition too.. when'''

Geet: ya and wid dis crazy passion in listening radio he didn't notice truck and crash in accident. Dis bl***y radio snatch my Karu.. how could I love dem and ppl who are in fm. In their stupid shows they make audience dumb and deaf, blind that one forgets wat he is up to. Where he is. Due to dem I loss my Karu..my life..my love

Pinky: that's an accident GEETU and Karan Jeeju was so lost in listening show that he didn't heard truck horns. . Why u always blame radio and RJ for dis. They even don't know wat ur past and u think dem culprit for loss of ur Karan.

Geet: Stop it Pinky.. I don't want to argue .. pls leave me alone. Nobody could understand me. No one could know my pain. Na u and na ur Bhagwan and na ur ye stupid .show off MK . No one feel wat happen when someone so close ur love snatch away. It's like someone took my life. It would be better if I was wid Karan in car. At least I don't have to suffer widout Karu.

Pinky: (thinking Hmmm well no use to argue wid u Geetu .. life has made u so rude and harsh .. it killed my sweet bubbly ,vivacious geet.who love life. I wish BHAGWAN hee kuch miracle krey. And we get our Geetu back.)

Ok Madam U win happy.. Now m leaving. Its late mom must be waiting for me...catch u later.. see yaa.

Geet: Ok Pinky sorry for being rude. U know when dis radio n RJ discussion start I lose myself. Already I have nothing and'..

Pinky: oh yaa yaa Madam. Bbye

Saying dis she left Geet room and Geet again lost in her own thoughts.


Precap: I Love U MK 😛



Part 2:-AWESOME!😃 😃 😃 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks Eshita Sweety for commenting on each update.. m really happy dat u love it. Have a Good Day. and Thanks 😊
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PART 18

Geet entered into the hall in hurry with sad looks. Maan followed her .

Daadi ma: agaye Beta.. itni jaldii.

Mohindar: ajkal k bachon ko tyme kahan lagta hay G. wo to humhara zamna thaa .Jab we need tyme to ask one word.

Annie: I know Maan Bhai ney Geet Bhabhi ko kuch bolny ka moka hee nahee dya hogaa.

Pinky: Geet bhi kuch kaam nahee hay. M sure Dhak Dhak.. Oppss Maan Jeeju is speechless.

Dev: AB ye to Geet hee bata shakti hay k kisny chup krwaya kisko.

Yash: SO beta kya ap dono is shaadi key leye tyaar hein?

Daadi: Gee jaldi sy humhein Khush Khabri dedein. Taqy hum roqay ki rasam aaj hee puri krlein.

Ranu: Gee I know my daughter. She is ready for dis marriage. Haan hee hogii.. Haina Geet puttar.

Mohindar: (hold her shoulder) Hmmm Geet Puttar ajja beth jaa.

Geet look at Maan face and then all who are waiting for her one "HAAN" she confusedly played with her hands and den with heavy voice she said " PAPA G, MA" before u all take my life decision I want to say something.

All look worried.

Daadi Ma: is dat all fine? Kya baat hay?

Ranu: Kya hua Geet puttar (in heart praying Geet accept maan)

Geet: Mujhy ap dono sy is baray mein Akeley baat karni hay. Pls

Yash: beta sab theek hay na.. Maan ney koi baat ki? (glaring MAAN)

Maan: (self-Talk) dude lagta hay mera purana record dekhty hoye mujh pr shaq hogaa. Bachha leina. Pehly ye jungle billi and now my saru DAD. MAAN aj teri keher nahee. Ik bomb yahan phooty ga ar ik mery ghar par.

Mohindar: Beta Kya Baat hay? Sab theek to hay naa?

Geet: Pls Papa G. Just 5 minutes. With dis she went inside leaving all worried and tensed.

Ranu and Mohindar both give each other tense looks.

Daadi ma; Koi baat Nhaee Afterall its dere lifes. Both have right to decide what they want. I think u both should listen to ur geet. May be she has something to say. Ya wo sab kay samny bolney sy Sharma rahee hoo. Shaadi ka mamla hay koi doubts nahee rehny chahye. We can wait u take ur tyme. We are leaving now. Ap apni beti sy araam sy baat kr lijeye. Pls don't force her.

Yash: Gee koi Masla nhee.. ye bachay to humsy zaida samghdar hein. M sure is MAAN ney hee koi garbar ki hogi iski adaat hay.. ye

Daadi Hold Yash hand who was looking angrily to Maan.

Maan: (self-talk) ye lo moft ki shamaat.. Ik taraf dad ar dosri taraf Jungli billi.. start ye hay to mera anth kya hogaa. Dude aaj bacchaa leina..

Mohindar and Ranu look embarrassed. M sorry G wo pata nahee kya..

Yash: Its Ok G Aisa to hota hay. Wasy bhee isi leye to hum aaj aye thy. Dono parivaar mil lein koi apaas mein gul mil jayen. Afterall puri life ka sawal hay. Zindagi to in dono ney guzarni hay.

Mohindar: twadi bari mehrbani G. pata nahee kyaa yee.

Yash: Koi gul nahee g. ap aaraam sy baat krlijiey we can wait.

All bid bye to each other and Khurana Parivaar left handa house .

RanU; Ab kya hoga g.. Is larki kay damagh mein kya chal raha hay. Meinu bohaat daar lag raha hay. Itni muskil sy inna sohna parivaar mila si .ar geet to raazi thi fr ye sab kaisy.. pata nhee ye apni life sy kya chahti hay..

Mohindar: Thand Rakh Ranu.. Chal ja kar dekhty hein wat she want to talk. Shayad MAAN ney hee kuch bola ho.. warna meri beti aisi nahee hay

Ranu: rehny do tussi.. mein achay sy jandi aan ye Geet nhee chahti key hum uska ka kanydaan apni zindagi mein krein. Pata nhee humhein apni fiker mein maar kar hee khush hogee.

Mohindar: Ohhooo pehly usnaal gal tey krley. Yash G is right we shouldn't force her. and u know Geet and her condition. And Don't force her nor talked anything. Let her share.aj kuch humsy kehna chahti hay to usko moqa deina chahey. Chal ajjaa.. RAB Kher krey ga.

Both move towards Geet room.

In Car All blast on Poor Maan.

Yash: Maa Mein ny pehly hee kaha thaa..pehly is nalayaak sy puccho lo..Ye larka humhein hamesha bezat karwata hy, Kya izzat reh gai humhri. Isko koi ehsaas nahee hay. Na business mein dehaan deta hay na apni life mein. Kuch apny Baray bhai Dev sy hee seekh ley.. liken nahee.

Daadi: What u did Maan? Apko to koi aiteraaz nahee thaa.u were happy but ye achanaq apny aisa kya keh dya.. Hum sy apny wada kya thaa k is bar u would not do anything and again. Aj apnay humhein bohaat sharminda kya. Wo log kya sooch rahey hongey.

Maan: Believe me Daadi mein ny kuch nahee kaha.. infact I was expecting her reaction. She knows me . I was taking all in friendly way. She was not ready to accept me. Usko lagta hay hum achay dost zaida better hein.

Daadi: Baas Kijiye maan .. Tang agaye hein hum apk is dramay sy. Hamesha Larki ko hee kun apsy problem hojati hay. Kahan kammi reh gai humhary pyaar mein MAAN. (daadi in tears)

Maan: ohoo sweet heart not dis drama plss.. u know I love u.. kya apny boy friend ko itna bhee nhee jantii.

Dev: Daadi ma .. might be MAAN ney is baar kuch na kiya hoo? Geet ko hee problem ho. Apny dekha nahee when she heard his name kaisy react kya thaa. Wo to RANU aunti ney zbrdsti usko ander bhejaa.

Annie: yes Daadi she was so happy ..lagta nahee tha k kuch aisa hogaa. Dev Bhai is right Maan Bhai is in love wid Bhabhie. How could he do dis? M sure Geet ko hee ,koi prb hogi. Kahin uska koi boyfriend to nahee hay?

Yash: Baas kro Dev and Annie.. u always supported him. I know dis Maan, apky is ladh pyaar ney yee MAAN ney humhari kabhi izaat ki parwa nahee ki.

Daadi ma: Sab apky Bhai jaisy nhee hoty. Pehly pata hota to in dono ko milny na deti. Pata nhee kya boldiya k ik dam sy she need to talk with her parents.

Yash: Tujh Jaisy Nalayak sy ar koi umeed nahee. Mera Mazzaq Bana kar rakh dya hay ager ye rishta hath sy gaya to mein tujhy golli maar dongaa

Maan: Dad u have gun 'kahan rakhi hay kabhi bataya nahee'

Yash: MAAANN

Maan: Dad Pls trust me. I know I always go against with dis marriage thing. But this tyme mein ny kuch nahee kaha. I know u ppl never believe me and I don't want to anymore.

Yash: Chup Ik dam chup. Nalayak Gadhaa Kahin Ka.. Tu meri Ulaadh ho nahee shaktaa..pata nehe kahan sy tapak gaya..

Maan: really Mujhy to pehly shaq thaa. Mom hoti to confirm karletaa. (Maan seriously thinking)

Yash: Kya bakwas kar raha hay. Ghar chal abhi tery doubts clear krta hoon. Kun apny budhy baap ki izaat utarney mein laga hay. Kuch apny bhai Dev sy kun nahee seekh ley.

Maan: sooch lo Dad.. mein bhee Love Marriage krlun kya??

Yash: Isko chup karwao warna ye mera heart aaj fail karwaye gaa.

Daadi Ma: (hit maan) baas kijiyee. Apko mazzaq sujh raha hay.

Dev: Dad and daadi ma relax abhee unhon ney kuch kaha nahee ar hum aisy kaisy Cheeko ko bol dein . key usny iqaar krdya iski waja sy. shayad us larki ki koi shart ho. Ya annie is right uska kisi k saath affair ho.

Daadi: Humney sab pucch kar hee faisla lya tha. Pata nahee humhri zindagi mein Maan ki shaadi hay ya nhee.

Maan: Hey daadi soo sall jeeyngi app. Mery nhee to dev bhai key bachon taq ap zinda hein.. Kun Dev Bhai

Annie: Haan Daadi ap sab aisy pereshaan ho rhay hein. Kal unka phone any dein sab theek hogaa

Daadi Ma: kya karein Annie apky MAAN bhai ka record kabhi sahi nhee raha.

Maan: Daadi Maa (Innocent face)

''''''''''''''.

Ranu: Kya Hogaya Geet Tujhy ab tu ney kya soocha hay? Aisa Kya hay Jo ab tujhy nahee pasand arahaa. Larka Shareef hay achi family sy hay. Ab tujhy apny Parents ka khyaal hay ya nahee. Ye konsa Tareeka hay wahan sy ajany ka.. Tujhmein kuch sharam hay ya nhee. Kya yahee hein mery sanskaar? Is din kay leye tujhy bara kya.. Tery Babu G ko kitni sharmindagi hoyee hay.. tujhy apny Ma Papa g ka koi ehsaas hay? Tang agai hoon mein teri harkaton sy.. akher kab taq ye sab chalay ga.

Jawab dey geet mein tujhsy puch rhee hoon. Ab aisy kun bethii hay?

Mohindar: ( stop her with hand and nodded) he move close to Geet and caress her head politely which made her sobbing loud. She raised her head and saw her parents with worried faces.

Ranu: Geet putaar Kya hogaya.. tu roo kun rahee hay.. Bata jaldi Maan ney kuch kaha.. usney tery saath kuch..(check worriedly)

Geet became horrified with her mother words. Just she could say is "MAA"

Mohindar: chup kr ranu kuch bhee bolti hay.

Ranu: mein to baas'

Mohindar sat beside Geet and hug her. Geet meri jaan wat happened. Tell ur Papa g beta. Kya baat hay? Tujhy achanaq kya hogaya?

Geet saw her parents eyes which has so many questions and worries for her. she stand and move little ahead and with back towards dem she said'''

Precap: "Call from handa's" 😳

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Edited by MyInfatuationz - 13 years ago
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update maan and his family talk



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Awesme dear
maan and hs family convo was hilarious..bechara maan..
I hope geet says yes
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Yash : ager ye rishta hath sy gaya to mein tujhy golli maar dongaa
Maan: Dad u have gun 'kahan rakhi hay kabhi bataya nahee'
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after reading this portion I cant control my laughter ...excellent update dear...
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awesome update
what does geet wanna say ?
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Loved the update..
waiting for geet's jawab..

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