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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for all ur likes well still i need more.. or i can say i expect more. anyways never mind.its just a start.. i m sure will got many likes in next updates afterall u never know wats in store for u ;)

Part 2:

Geet sitting on window suddenly shout. Bitter reality stuck her that she is alone in dark room which has no other source of light except moon light which is glowing her face . her teary red eyes She closeher eyes and tears again start flowing. Suddenly her room door open and girl enter...

Pinky: Lalllaalllaaallaaallaaa dancing and dreaming in own world. She jump on bed

Pinky: haaayeee Rohan is world's most handsome, dashing guy.. M in love wid him.Haye Baba G Aping setting krwa do.. ik baar..

Geet: (quickly wipe her tears) and look towards pinky'.. Rohaan ?? is dat uncle aunty got new driver or a cook.

Pinky: aarrgh Shut Up Geetu.. he is not lyk dat and don't dare to call him ..May be he is ur Jeeju in future.

Geet: haaa Not again Pinky.. how many jeeju's are in ur list. I even don't remember my Jeeju names.This would be the 1000 one. hanaa

Pinky: Shut up geetu he is DE ONE.. my exboyfrnds are just tyme pass. He is the one made for me.

Geet: how do u know he is DE ONE made for U Pinky.

Pinky: Coz when I saw him my heart starts thud thud.. His one sight makes me restless. When he talk its lyk m listening whole orchestra in my ears.. He is..

Geet: Baas Baas U and Ur stupid logics. Grow up Pinky. This love only give pains and tears.

Pinky: leave it Geetu. U don't understand.. Hey wait a min.. Madam do u have any plans for dis electricity savings.. Why all lights are off and ur sitting lyk (noticing her red eyes) ARE U WEEPING GEETU.. Come here.. wat happen to u .(pinky Surprise)

Geet: (Fake smile) these tears are now part of my love. Coz I dare to love and love always give pains tears and darkness. This dark is my inside...I don't deserve happiness and smiles. That's what my life teaches me. I am''.

Pinky: Ohhh Stop it Geetu. Why Ur always blaming urself. U should forget about Ur past and have to live in Ur present. Who knows u have joyus, smily life ahead? M Sure Somewhere someone has made just for my Geetu and when he is here.. U don't have tyme to look back and shed tears on dose moments.. Meri Jaan Purani Yaadon Mein rahogi to Nahee Yadein kaisy banaogii' Correct ;)

Geet: Piinnnkkkyyy stop it.. U know it I can't think anyone else beside my KARAUU.. Love happen once in life and BHAGWAN had given me dat chance but at de end HE snatched my KARU... I live my life and Karu memories are enough for my survival. I love him more den myself. How could I throw Karan out n give his space to someone else. No doubt my love was incomplete but it was most beautiful years of my life. I don't need anyone... I can't anymore bear dis Love anymore. NO LOVE For me now...i don't trust anyone... Dis heart only belongs to Karu and still it is.

Pinky: but dear u never know.. Bhagwan has some other plans.. anyways I think u have to listen sweet music.. coz MK said MUSIC IS BEST medicine for all SICK AND DEAD HEARTS.. MUSIC Life Koi MAST Bana deta hay. Saying dis she turn on radio. Hey Its Saturday MK show would be on .. Let's sink into the sea of love, masti and musical life. M sure u will feel better. After my MK is de Best.

Geet: U and Ur MK.. Btw dis MK has no other work to do kya.. Always dis Love, Music and life.. huh he never know wats is de real meaning of life. I hate non-serious jokers.

Pinky: Oh hello he is most Dhak Dhak RJ of Fm.. don't dare to call my MK idiot. He is King of Love, He is most dashing guy.M sure once u listen his show den u would be diehard fan of his.. His voice, his style and his all funda's haaa simply killing yar..

Geet: one min when u met ur DHAK DHAK MK.. do u know him personally.. huh.. DHAK DHAK RAJ CHamchi. Don't forget I hate dese radio and Rj

Pinky: don't forget KARAN JEEJU wanted to be Rj too. He think they are super cool. Infact he was going for Rj Audition too.. when'''

Geet: ya and wid dis crazy passion in listening radio he didn't notice truck and crash in accident. Dis bl***y radio snatch my Karu.. how could I love dem and ppl who are in fm. In their stupid shows they make audience dumb and deaf, blind that one forgets wat he is up to. Where he is. Due to dem I loss my Karu..my life..my love

Pinky: that's an accident GEETU and Karan Jeeju was so lost in listening show that he didn't heard truck horns. . Why u always blame radio and RJ for dis. They even don't know wat ur past and u think dem culprit for loss of ur Karan.

Geet: Stop it Pinky.. I don't want to argue .. pls leave me alone. Nobody could understand me. No one could know my pain. Na u and na ur Bhagwan and na ur ye stupid .show off MK . No one feel wat happen when someone so close ur love snatch away. It's like someone took my life. It would be better if I was wid Karan in car. At least I don't have to suffer widout Karu.

Pinky: (thinking Hmmm well no use to argue wid u Geetu .. life has made u so rude and harsh .. it killed my sweet bubbly ,vivacious geet.who love life. I wish BHAGWAN hee kuch miracle krey. And we get our Geetu back.)

Ok Madam U win happy.. Now m leaving. Its late mom must be waiting for me...catch u later.. see yaa.

Geet: Ok Pinky sorry for being rude. U know when dis radio n RJ discussion start I lose myself. Already I have nothing and'..

Pinky: oh yaa yaa Madam. Bbye

Saying dis she left Geet room and Geet again lost in her own thoughts.


Precap: I Love U MK 😛

Edited by MyInfatuationz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting start and update please do continue

geet hates anything to do with radio her meeting with MK will be interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update but saddy tha.

hope geet maan se nafrat na kare.

sad that karan is no more.

waiting for precap.

n

for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hei nyc concpt n strt...luvd it

quite near to daily lyf

plzz add me to ur pm list as well

thnx

Luv Divzi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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1st thing's 1st... Congr8zzz Mishu 4 ur 1st evr ff on Maaneet 😃
ohhh... Maan is a hot n famous RJ 😳 btw Mishu... I luvvv RJsss tooo re ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
and Geet is saddy... saddyyy 😭 she loved Karan & Karan is no more... he died in a car accident dat too when he was listening radio... & dats why Geet hates radio n RJs 😲 😲 wahhh... kya link hain 😉
I guess story needs tym 2 open up... bcz its just start 😃 and will turn interesting wid its upcoming flow n Maaneet meetings 😉 😳 😛
so all d best 4 Tara Rum Pum... lets see wht u store 4 us next 😊 aur haan, kuch achha hi lekheyo, samjhe na!!!!!! 😉 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice Start!!!!👏. Keep writing.😊

Wish you all the best!!!!!!👍🏼

Prema

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks friends for ur likes and comments.. but need more as usual.😭 for maneet love track..u ppl have to bit patience but Life is full of twists and turns.. so Be with me and keep supporting. it will help me to entertain u wid my Story.plsss plsss response 😕 Lots of love..
Enjoy 😃

Part 3

Hellloo Salam,Namasty😳 ,Sasriyakaal,adaaabbb.. Yes Its Saturday and ur DHAK DHAK MK is back to beat ur hearts ' so listen my show at ur own risk..Now be ready for amazing coaster of MK .. dis drive will make u cccrrraaazzzyyy

so hows the week.. bzy,ok,bindaas' boring.. well mine was chakkay day phattay.. had lots of parties, and hangouts wid frnds. Ohkk No more idher udher ki baatein.. I know wat u all waiting for.. Today we have most beautiful, smashing, rooocckkking topic.. LOVE ooo so just call me 143 oopss Kidding folks I knew it ;) dial 134** and share if u have someone in ur life. Or u want to propose someone' or any prb need suggestions ur DHAK DHAK is here.. Tell me wats so special in ur love. Wats ur story dude still virgin or aaaha aaan aaannn U KNOW ' ;)

So heres our first caller.. Let's see whose heart wana beat wid us;)

Helloo

Caller1: hey MK

MK: hey May I know who the lucky one m talking.

Caller1: m ur biggest fan MAAANNNIUU.. Ur sooo sweet' I Love u

MK: hahahaha Okkk Thanks but may I knw the sexy name of dis sexy voice lady.

Caller1: OMG m Pooja.. But my frnds call me pppohh u can call me shonaa.. haaye ur so hot and I love ur show.

MK: thanks Pooohhh.. Btw would u like to share anything wid us regarding the LOVE , Dedication or some love problems.. .do u have any boyfrnd or thinking to be '

Caller: ya I love u MK.. Pls say "YES"

MK: ohhh But Sweet heart u have to stand in queue..

Caller1: Ooo I love ur attitude ' well Sorry Hottie I have someone so special in my life.. so will think about u in my Next Janam'

MK: aaaww my heart break' hahahahaa fun apart so tell me wat u wana share more.

Caller1: ya I want to say my ANKU "I LOVE U SOO MUCH" UR MY SHONA.. and I want to dedicate a song to him which is " MEIN WAARI JAWAAN"

MK: ok that's so sweet. Ok heres the special dedication from Poja to Ankit.. U ppl enjoy will be right back after dis song..aaa aaannn don't switch off my channel.. ;) stay tuned cz we have lots more to showww..

(Song play)

Mein Waari jawan'
''''''''''''''''''''

At 10 pm morning Geet house:

Ranu: suniye Larky ki family ka apna business hay.. kfi achay log hein.. ap ik baar larkey sy mil leity.. ar Geet sy bhee baat kr lein..akher kab taq wo Karan ki yaadon k saath apni zindagi barbadh kreygi

Mohindar : Hmmm ya I will talk wid Geet today.. and tu us pr zaida pressure maat daal..

Ranu: I just want my Geet smile.. Bhagwan jany kiski nazar lag gai meri bacchi..ik dam bujh si gai hay(ranu become teary)

Mohindar: ohoo chup kr. Kaha na mein baat krunga. Tu ab baat baat pr emotional maat hojaya kr.

Geet come downstairs..Good Morning Papa G

Papa G: Good Morning Geet Puttar.

(Geet was moving towards study room when her father call her)

Papa G: Geet Puttar come sit wid ur Papa g

Geet: (Smile and sit with her Papa G).

(He call rano)
Papa G: Ranoo Pls bring Tea for me and Geet in lounge.

Rano: Gee Just 10 min.

Papa G: so hows Papa ki Jaan?? U r mother was telling u were at pinky house. I was relieved that now u starts visiting ur frnds house.

Geet: (Wid bow Head) gee Papa G ..

Mohindar: wat about ur studies?

Geet: They are fine Papa G.. next month I have exams and then there would be 2 months holiday.

Papa G: ok puttar if u need any of my help then let me know. Remember your PAPA G is always with u.

Geet: (with heavy voice) Gee Papa G.. Ur world's best Papa.

Mohinadar: beta geet. Always keep smiling.. U know Ur Ma is worried about u. You have to take care urself. I know you are my shair puttar but beta life must go on.. it can't be remain as always. U have to leave ur past memories and accept smiles in your way. Beta we want to see u happy,chirpy geet..who always in rolling mood. You are my chirya and I miss my chirya chirping sound. There was a tym when u smile, and spread smile. When u enter in house there is mess but now look urself. It hardly feel ur around.

Geet: (wid tears) Pap G m trying but Ma should understand me ..i can't forget Karan. I will so alone after his death. Papa G I know my rude and sad behavior worried u and ma but I need time. Plss papa G.

Mohindar: ok beta we are not saying u should forget Karan but beta Janay walay to chalay gaye hein unk saath maara nhee jataand tjhy apni zindagi ko ik ar mokka deina chahey. Tujhy Khush rehny ka Haq hay.

Geet: Gee papa G

Mohindar: beta we got a proposal for u. the guy is from noble family. Very nice.. He has family business too . U have to check him beta.. Give some tyme and met dat guy.if u like that guy then we will move forward .but plss apny PAPA g k leye ik baar dekh ley.

Geet: but papa G'..

Mohindar: Geet Puttar m getting old and I don't want my Chirya to be as sad and teary. The Guy is very nyc and has own job too beside this construction business. He would make u happy. We choose Karan for u but destiny has other plan but beta U have to move on.. U can trust ur dad puttar.

Geet: '''ok Papa G I will check and will let u know but plss Mujhy Thora waqt chahye.

Mohindar: Its k beta. Take ur tyme . nothing is more impr then my chirya smile.

Geet: (with tear eyes hug papa) Thank u Papa.. and m sorry .. U all are worried because of my behavior.

Mohindar: Na Puttar don't say lyk dat. We are always with u but we only want ur smile..

Geet: Gee Papa

(Wid dis Geet move to her room)

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Precap: ... 😆

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Edited by MyInfatuationz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry yar late comm kaRnaki liye

part 2

no maan 😔 but i still love this part so much feel bad for geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aww i jst luv mk
nyc update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: NiharikaNeha777

1st thing's 1st... Congr8zzz Mishu 4 ur 1st evr ff on Maaneet 😃

ohhh... Maan is a hot n famous RJ 😳 btw Mishu... I luvvv RJsss tooo re ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
and Geet is saddy... saddyyy 😭 she loved Karan & Karan is no more... he died in a car accident dat too when he was listening radio... & dats why Geet hates radio n RJs 😲 😲 wahhh... kya link hain 😉
I guess story needs tym 2 open up... bcz its just start 😃 and will turn interesting wid its upcoming flow n Maaneet meetings 😉 😳 😛
so all d best 4 Tara Rum Pum... lets see wht u store 4 us next 😊 aur haan, kuch achha hi lekheyo, samjhe na!!!!!! 😉 😛

thanks soo much.. ur beautiful appreciation really add more gulocose in my blood.. thanks alot.. well wait ..u never know wats ncome next 😆

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