My First FF: Tararumpum Part 27 Page 72 - Page 20

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
thnks for pm
waitng for dhamkedar maaneet meet
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
thnks for pm
waitng for dhamkedar maaneet meet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hellooo writer jii 😃
main apne tarike se cmnt karne agayii 😉
par ek prblm hain 😳
main bhool gayyii hu k main kaise cmnt karti thi 😆
okay... okay... mu math bana... try karthi hu 😛
hmmm... so aaj Geetu Day hain... no Dhak Dhak in d updt 😔 😔 😔 missing ma cool RJ Maan... par Geet is sooo jhalliii 😡 ekbaar phto dekh leta tho kya jata... Pinky k itne dialog k baad bhi nahi dekha 😒 😒 😒
par nxt part mein tho Pinky k sath sath humein bhi bohut maza ane wala hain 😳 but precap se mujhe lag raha k finally Maan will see his would be's phto... and then will give d precap wali dialog 😆 hehehehe... Jangliii Billiii 😉 tune mere SRK ko bhi nahi choda na 😳
chal jaa... bohut ho gayyiii meri nautankii... ab apna promise bhi pura karo 😡 give me ASL updt now... warna nxt tym se main emoticons bhi nahi dungi tere updts pe 😈 😈 😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
gud part..
loved pinky geet convo..
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the pm


Love it graphics
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Posted: 13 years ago
pinky saw his face...but geet is still unaware...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago


Part 15

Maan woke up with noises.

Maan: OH YAAR why dese so much noises. Sakoon sy sooney

bhee nhee deity.

He covered his head and ears with pillow and dosed off. After some time he again woke up with noises. He checked his watch and it was 9. A.m strange itni subha ghr mein hungama kun hogaya hay. he fresh his self and after some time he move outside to check the reason about all dis noise and mess.

As he reached he saw all servants are rushing around at Daadi

orders. The main hall was full of gifts, sweets, and flowers. there

are basket full of jewellary sets and dresses with large baskets of

fruits, dry fruits, flowers and daadi was instructing Nakul about

more things.

Maan: Daadi Ma wats dis?? Ye sab kis key leye hay.

Daadi: ( smile and kissed his forehead) m so happy today ,, is din

ka mujhy barso sy intezaar thaa. Thank u Maan.

Maan: Why thanking me Daadi ma?? Bateyngy aj subha sy kitna

shor ha I wake up so early due to ur voices and all dis hungama.

Daadi: dear its 9:00 a.m not so early and its good u wake up ,now

go and get ready .. I will send ur cloths from nakul at ur room. If

u need anything den tell me.

Maan: but Daadi ma mein kun tyaar hoon ap mjhy batati kun

nhee. Wats going on??

Yash: Aiyee Maan Sahib Hogyee apki subha,.

Daadi: Not today Yash. Aj Maan ko koi kuch nahee boley ga.

Annie : Oyee hoyee Kya baat hay. Ajto Bhai ki Nikal paree.

Maan: Oh Ok baas bohaat hogaya.. u guys trying to play some

joke. Seriously ik to subha subha utha dya and now dis suspence.

Plss koi mjhy bataye ga kya baat hay.

Yash: Maan beta today is ur Raukaa.. ur daadi n me selected a girl

for u and now we would all going at dere house.

Maan shocked "WHAAATTT" daadiii yee'

Daadi and Yash: ahaan No more arguments.. u said YES urself and

we had showed her pic too .. we all were waiting for ur reply but

when after saying "OK" n didn't replied den we take as ur

Acceptance. Now get ready fast we will be late. They invited us

today.

Maan: hold on u guys where is dat pic?? And Kisney dekhaii

kab.?? I don't remember.. that's not fair. Itni jaldi.

Yash: Its not Jaldi Beta.. right age for get married.

Daadi ma: yes and don't play smart I showed u picture. Ab koi

bahana nhee chalay ga MAAN.

Maan: but daadi seriously I don't have her picture.. plss show me

once.. I promise will not do. Trust me plsss

Annie: uffhoo Bhai ap bhee na.. wait let me show u.

She took Geet's pic from daadi's room and gave dat to MAAN..

Annie: ye lejiyee Maan Bhai and now be ready,. Ap bach na

paogy' (wink)

Maan snatch her picture and his gaze move towards picture and

his eyes glued at the sight.

Annie: heellloo (wave hand) Khoo Gayee ' kaha thaa naa..

Yash and Daadi laugh'

Maan: GEET' ap logo ney Geet ko mery leye pasand kyaa??

Daadi: how do u know her name?? did u guys met?

Annie: Kya baat kr rhey ho Bhai.. u know her name.. OMG LOVE

SHOVE (elbow him)

Maan: (shy smile) No bohaat Angry types hay.. we met in Pinky

..rohan's girlfriend b;day party. GOD ap log bhi naa.

Daadi: ary waah.. fr to apko ye Geet pasand hay hainaa.

Maan: (smile) she is nice girl.. thori ghussay ki teez hay but she is different.

Annie: oye hoyee kya baat hay .. Bhai seems ur in love,..

Maan: (smile) Na na.. but ik prb hay.. us Hitler ko mera pata chala

to I think she would kill me.

Daadi ma: why apny aisa kya kaha??

Maan: (Smirk) Relax Daadi ma.. mein ny kuch nahee kiaa..

Yash: challo challo that's great.. now m happy ye MAAN koi prb

nhee kreyga.. lets go and ready all. We are getting late.

Yeah yeah..

Maan run to his room with picture in hand. He was so happy after

knowing that he would be engaged wid Geet . the girl whom click

his mind, beat his soul.. the Girl who is so pure and so cute..hard

from outside but have beautiful lovely heart.

Maan: Hope ye Jungli Billi mujhy accept krley. (maan self-talk)

'''''''.

precap: Geet Smile and Came more closer ❤️


Edited by MyInfatuationz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

me 1st... for d 1st in ma cmnt record... me 1st in d cmnt 😆

hayye... updt kii baat kya karu 😍 😍 😍 main already shaadi kii barein mein soch rahi hu... me in maaneet la la land ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Maan smiled seeing Geetu as his would be fiance 😳 he sooo much likes her... par sabke samne usse hitler... janglii billi... pata nahi aur kya kya bolta hain 😆
❤️ I sooo love dis cool dude MAAN yaar ❤️
aur precap... pata hain yeh Geetu apne Karu k bare mein hi soch raha hoga... itna achha maaneet precap tu humein degi tho nahi... chalo abhi maaneet na sahi... geetu-karu hi sahi 😉 kabhi na kabhi tho maanet ka bhi tym ayega na 😆
post nxt part soon lyk dis... aur haan tera updt din din chhota ho raha hain... pahle 30 mint ka ata tha wid break *like apna Star One* 😳 ab 20 mint ka araha hain widout break *like LOk* 😡 iske baad 10 mint ka karne ka irada tho nahi hain na madam!!!!!!!!!!! 😛
Edited by NiharikaNeha777 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one
bt precaps gt me hooked!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely part dear...
eagerly waiting to know the next...

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