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Posted: 13 years ago

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oye hoye...fab update!!
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Precap ws superb
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Posted: 13 years ago
hellooo Madam... kahan kho gayye ho????? main itna tang karti hu kya... k ab bahar ane ka naam hi nahi lete ho tum 😆 chalo jaldi aao aur updt do... shayad pahle baar kisine tumse tumhari updt jaldi dene ke liye bola hoga 😳 so rqst ko ijjat do... and updt soon mishu 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 17

Geet: jerk at MAAN name.. She raise her eyes and saw Maan in front.. Maan smirk and smile crept in his lips.

Maan: Namasty Geet G. Kaisii Hein APP.

Geet:TUUMM' Tum yahan kya kr rhey ho.

Geet: (Glare) Ohh To ab samgh aya ye Pinky kun uchal rahee thi.(Self-talk) She saw Pinky and Rohan who are giggling and trying to hide from elders. That's cheating. I have to talk with Mom and dad about it.i can't marry wid dis show off. Dost bana to kya hua ab life partner never.. NO WAY. Isko to mein chornogi nehe ,Geet handa sy panga..

Maan: Dude wats she is blabbering.. kahin mera murder plan to nahee.

Ranu: Hmm beta do u guys know each other?

Geet: Haan Maa woo.

Daadi Ma: ary waah that's nice. U both already met then u both must be ready with dis.

Geet: Naaheee'.

All Glared

Geet: woo I mean..(Baba G Kya bolun kahan phans gai) glare at Maan and gesture (Kuch bolo)

Maan: Haan wo Daadi baas aisy hee Pinky bhabhi ki party m intro hoa thaa zaida nhee jantay.

Daadi ma: Oh achhaa chalein ye to bohaat achi baat hay.

Ranu: plss ap sab betheiye naa.. Geet beth jaa..

After couple of minutes with little chit chat session of Khurana Parivaar with geet.

Yash: we met with geet so I think now Maan and Geet should meet alone and den let us know. If they accept we would do roka today.No doubt they know each other but afterall its dere lifes so they should decide and think before accept each other.

Ranu: Jee hmmm Geet Maan ko apny room m ley jaa.

Geet: (Glare her mom with Wats dis Mom gesture)

Mohindar: haan Beta go and Talk. We are waiting. Afterall shaadi to tum dono ko karnee hay.

Annie: I know Bhai ko is shaadi sy koi problem nahee hogi..

Maan: (Angry look) Chup karjaa Annie.let me go with her. she will

eat me alive..Dude bacha leinaa ajj. Itni muskil sy to dosti hoyee.(self talk)

Geet: CHaliyee MAAN G (taunt) we need sometime alone.

Maan: (scary expressions)

Geet: Sabko Lagta hay. (Geet Smirk)

Maan: aaa gee (Dude bachaa leinaa.. she would eat me, scratch me, kill me uffh ye angry eyes, and red cheeks.. Gosh she accept me warna I will eat her she looks so cute in dis sherni looks too)

Maan and Geet move towards geet room .. As they entered Geet close door behind with force which create noise.

Maan: Oiieee Maa Dude Help me. sherni in action..(self-talk)

Geet: ( fake smile) Sorry Ghalti sy aishta bandh Hogaya.

Geet: (glare with folding hands )

Maan: Waat??

Geet: Yahee to mein pucch rhee hoon. Waats dis??

Maan: oooh ye ' (fake shy) Meri ar Tumhari Shaadi.

Geet: Shut up wat ur doing here and all dis Natak and sympathizes yesterday. Mujhy impress karna chahty thy? Saach bataoo MAAN u know all about our rishta naa. Tabhee u try to be M SO CUTE type. Bolo.. Mujhy pehly hee shaq tha how could u flirty MK became such a nice and sedha type. (Geet pointed her finger) Wat u think I will marry wid u Joker.

Maan: (Looking here dere) are u calling me a JOKER>. MAAAN the Dhak Dhak .. A Joker.

Geet: Stop distracting.. Come to point.. Ye sab Kya hay?

Maan: Nothing pls believe me.. I don't know about u until my sister Annie showed me ur pic. I swear I don't know yesterday about all dis.

Geet: fine but wat now.. So Inqaar tum krogy ya Mein krdun.

Maan: Waaat Kun Yar. Mein itna bura bhi nahee hoon. And ager tumhein inqar krna thaa to itni tyaarian kun ki.(he move and came from other side and with side sight he smirk )MERY LEYE .

Geet: (throw vase towards Maan) u deserve dis..

Maan: ( escaped) wooo woo wild lioness calm down. I will explain all. Firstly I don't know all about dis. In fact I saw ur picture in morning and den my daadi ma told me about our rishta and all.Believe me mera aisa koi iradha nhee tha.. wasy I was not in mood for all dis commitment but after knowing about dis. I m ready' Tumhein Jhelny k leye m ready.. Tum apna sooch loo..He came close and saw in her eyes " MUJHY SAMBHAL LOGI"

Geet: (Push him back) shut up.. mein abhee ja kr dad sy kehti hoon m not ready for all dis.. How could u accept it Maan.. U know wat I am upto.. fr bhi u want to marry me, u can't get me.Idon't love u. and I will never think about dat.. Its wrong, I don't want to cheat u and ur family. and our friendship which is just one day old. How could u think Maan. I hate sympathizes..

Geet move towards door but Maan hold her hand. She turn andsaw Maan.

Maan: (words Pierced MAAN's heart) who need u and ur love geet? How do u think we can't be best life partners but just friends. Geet I accept dis proposal coz I know u would refuse if u know m that idiot who have to tolerate u whole life.

Geet: (angry Glare) its not a Joke Maan Singh Khurana.. Its Our Life.

Maan: (Serious face) Ok Jokes Apart actually I accept coz I don't want that some one to play with ur life again. I know its hard for u to accept someone else den ur Karan but if I refused dis proposal ur parents will force u again for new proposal. Isn't that easy to accept me who knows u more den anyone else than that new person. Who knows how he behaved after knowing u. isnt't dat better to commit wid me who knows ur past and except u with dis reality that I would never be ur love.

Geet: ( Pull back her hand) Ur right Maan but I don't want u to accept me just to save me from others. I don't want u to take me for granted. Ur my friend but ye sab theek nahee hay.u don't bother or think about me MAAN. Meri khatir apni life barbadh maat kro. U are nyc person.. u will got whatever u like but why u are interested in me.. why ruining ur life for me.

Maan: (came closer and hold her chin) because I want to ruin my life

Geet: ( confuse)

Maan: I love u dumbo I love u so much. Jabsy Tumhein Dekha hay mjhy tumsy pyaar hogaya hay,. Dil ney first tym Ding Dong kya k UR THE ONE MADE FOR ME. U R ONE Jiski MAAN ko Talaash thi. Ur simplicity, ur innocence ur changing moods .. All know dis arrogant ,rude and angry Geet but no one knows the real Geet who is pure, soft and loving who had so many dreams but always think about others before her self. Jo apny Pyaar ko aj taq nhii bhul paye.. kahan hoti hein aisii larkiyan.. tum apny pyaar ki khatir jo ab is duniya m hay nahee full life aisy akely rehna chahti hoo.. and today again u won my heart.. again u think about me and my life We are just one day friends and u already care a lot. Why don't I fall in love wid u. how could anyone ignore such cute and pure girl. Bolo na Geet.. how could I reject dis proposal. How could I leave such loving girl whose heart is as beautiful as her face. PPL love dis face but I fall for ur sweet heart.

Geet: (stare and lost in Maan words suddenly reality stuck her.she move back and remove his hands) Ye sahi nhee hay Maan. M not dat sweet.. Tum ney mjhy Zaidahee Mahaan bana dya.. I don't deserve such words. In fact aj taq mujhy kisi ney itny achay words boley nahee. Ur thinking too much about me MAAN. Plss Don't do dis. U would never be happy wid me. Im not such nice person who could give anyone happiness or love, infact they lose dere lifes coz of me. Coz of my love I don't want to lose another person coz of me. And Mujhy adaat nahee hay.apny baray m aisa sunney ki.. plss don't embarrass me. (she stand with back towards Maan .Tears start rolling from her eyes)

Maan: (hold her shoulder and turn her towards him 'Raise her chin) Geet see into my eyes.. have u got any lie dere.Did I say anything wrong. Why ur over-estimating urself.Tumhein pata hay.. tumhari yahee baat tumhein sabsy alag banati hay. U are unique. Sab sy alag. (he wipe her tears) u deserve happiness, smiles and love.. jaisy tumhara pyaar hay shayad m kabhi utna na kar paon but I promise I will snatch all ur sorrows and give u real meaning of life. Trust me Geet. I will love u my whole life.

Geet: (stare) I have to talk with papa plss don't force me.. plss I can't ..plss don't do this to me. Pls Maan I hate dis word Love..it doesn't suit me. Plss mujhy janay doo. Plss with dis she rush towards door with tears in her eyes Leaving rejected and disappointed maan back.)

Maan: U dumbo kaisy kahon ur my life and more den dat' I really love u geet and all dis is just to give u all happiness, smiles which u always deserve, u smile shine my whole world. I fall in love wid u when I was unaware about ur reality. I didn't realize when u entered into my heart. Ur first who beat dis Dhak Dhak. Who became beats of my silent heart. Plss Dude Help me.(praying ) mein ny ye thori kaha thaa k usko mjhsy dur krdoo. AP bhe na sab serious leity hoo. Now dekhta hon kya tamsha krti hay ye Junglli billi. He follow Geet .

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Originally posted by: NiharikaNeha777

hellooo Madam... kahan kho gayye ho????? main itna tang karti hu kya... k ab bahar ane ka naam hi nahi lete ho tum 😆 chalo jaldi aao aur updt do... shayad pahle baar kisine tumse tumhari updt jaldi dene ke liye bola hoga 😳 so rqst ko ijjat do... and updt soon mishu 😆

m back wid my lonnnggg update..😊 enjoy
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Koi na koi sun lega inki bate. N luv maan confession totaly rocking.
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awesome update

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