My First FF: Tararumpum Part 27 Page 72 - Page 21

Created

Last reply

Replies

413

Views

76.1k

Users

50

Likes

1.2k

Frequent Posters

-Mounika- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
first of all iam really very sorry for the late reply..i was stuck with my final exams...
i read all parts in one go which i missed...omg finally maan came to know that he's gonna get engaged with geet and just love the way he said
Hope ye Jungli Billi mujhy accept krley🤣

even me too waiting to know what would be geet's reaction...precap was yummy..continue soon...

kamiya thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

loved it
waiting eagerly for the next update
continue soon

thanks for the pm

Remya_Pillai thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the part..
So maan came to noe that his bride s geet...
nw wat will be geet's reaction..
TinkerBella thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
awsome part
and interasting precap 😊
kkiddoo thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
nice waiting for their meeting 😉
Tyro thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
maan finally saw the pic...😳

n is hoping for her acceptance...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
MyInfatuationz thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago


Part 16

Maan standing under shower.. Closed eyes and recalling geet

and his meetings..

Hoo hoo hooo

(Maan and Geet first meet at pinky birthday party.)


Kyun raaton ko main ab chayn se so na sakoon
ooo..
Kyun aata nahin mujhe din mein bhi chain-o-sukoon
Oo kyun aisa hota hai main khud se hi baatein karoon

Oo kyun tu jo bole koi sune na woh main hi sunu

Maan came from shower in towel around waist ' he took geet pic from bed and stare it.
Dil ye bekarar kyun hai
Iss pe dhun sawaar kyun hai
Kyun hai ye khumaar kyun hai, tu bataa

he change into black sherwani and check himself in mirror. he saw Geet at back. Smiling and posture "BEST" a smile crept at his lips. He turn around and saw Geet in front.
Tera intezar kyun hai, tujhpe aitbaar kyun hai

Kyun hai ye khumar kyun hai, tu bataa
Tu bataa, tu bataa

Geet check Maan Dupatta and fix it. Maaneet smile


Kyun tujhe dekhe bina aata nahin dil ko sabar

Oo kyun tere chehre se hatt ti nahin yeh nazar

He remove strands from Geet face and came closer with closed eyes.

Oo kyun tujhe paake mujhe rehta hai khone ka darr

Oo kyun tere siva saari duniya se hoon main bekhabar

Geet lost and Maan saw around and found he is alone. Maan is hallucinating.. he scratch his head

Dil ye bekarar kyun hai
Iss pe dhun sawaar kyun hai

Kyun hai ye khumaar kyun hai, tu bataa

MAAANNN Jaldii Kareye we all are waiting for u.. Maan kept

picture back and finally check his-self in mirror and move

outside.


At Handa House Khurana Family reached. They gave warm

welcome to dem. Ranu and Mohindar did arti and took

dem inside.

Mohindar and ranu introduce their family with all..

Mohindar: Namsty G dis is my wife Ranu , Geet best friend Pinky

m sure u already know her. all became busy in introducing each other..

DIL YE BEKARAR KUN HAY
Tera intezar kyun hai, tujhpe aitbaar kyun hai
Kyun hai ye khumar kyun hai, tu bataa
Tu bataa, tu bataa

Maan eyes move around in search of Geet. But she was nowhere. He became restless and irritate. Aj Ye intezaar bhee lamba lag raha thaa.

Lijeye Naa Apto Kuch ley nahee rahey..

Geet served him.. he lost in her eyes .. Geet shy smile and closed his eyes with hands

Ye pyaar hai jo tujhe ho gaya hai

Naa jaane kyun tu iss se tha bekhabar
Jo aaj kal yeh tujhe ho raha hai

Nahin aur kuch, pyaar ka hai asar

Geet whisper in his ears from back and came forward. She

caress his cheek. Maan lost himself in those deep hazel eyes

and rosy lips which had naughty smile. He hold her tightly from

her waist. Geet hands move around Maan's neck and both bodies

slowly start moving with the rhythm of music which are more den

the celebration of new beginning..



Maan turn her hug her from back , his chin on her shoulder both

lost in each other arms forgetting world and dreaming about

there own world where no one is around just MAAN and Geet

and dey race of their heart beats which are giving new music

,new life and new lyrics of their soul song.

Kyun tere jalwo ka chatt ta nahin hai dhuaan

kyun chale hawa toh lage ki jaise tune chhuaa
Oo kyun maangta hai dil tere liye roz duaa
Oo kyun ho raha jo pehle mujhe naa hua

Maaan Bhaiya Where ru ?? aunti kuch puch rahee hein and ur lost

with closed eyes.. hehehehe abhee to geet aye hee nahee..ar

apka ye haal hay.. (Annive wink)

Maan open his eyes and found Ranu Aunty wid confuse looks.he

look around but His Angel is not there. He became embarrass

at his situation. A shy smile crept on his lips.

Dil ye Beqrar Kun hay Ispey Dhun Sawaar Kun Hay Tu Bataa.

Tera Intezaar Kun hay Tujhpey Ye Khumar Kun Hay Tu Bataa Tu

bataa

Maan : wo nahee actually'.

Ranu: koi baat nhee beta.. I can understand ur nervousness.

akher humhary par bhi ye waqt aya tha.

Annie: Nervous ar Bhai hahahaa kya baat kr rhaee hein auntie.

Bhai Nervous nahe ehoty.. ar yahan to fr..

Maan: Anniee Tumhra Samosa thanda hojayen ga.. wo Khaoo mujh

pr analysis badh m deina.

All laugh.

Daadi Ma: Ranu humhari beti Geet kahan hein.. Usko Bulaiye plss

Mohindar: Haan ranu kithye gai.. Pinky Puttar Ja shabash vekh

Geet tyaar hoyee.. usko ley aoo.

Pinky: Gee Uncle.

After some time Geet entered with Pinky she was looking

ravishing in red and pink lehnga.

Its like some fairy with her magic wand climbing from clouds

and moving towards Maan..Maan memories with side. How could

some one look so pretty, so innocent and pure. She is really angel.

Annie elbow Maan ( Bhai Maoun to band Krloo) all share laugh.

Maan glare Annie. And then smile himself.

Ranu move towards Geet and kiss her forhead. Ajto meri beti

saach mein Pari lag rahee hay. Kisi ki nazar na lagey. (put kala

tikka behind her ear)

Geet: (smile)

Daadi: Idher Aiaye Geet beta Hum humharey saath baitheye.

Geet bend for ashiwardh from daadi.

Daadi: ary beta Betiyan Paon nhee choooti Gallay milti hein.

(daadi hug Geet and kissed her forhead) apto apni picture sy

bhee zaida khubsoorat hein.


Geet: (shy smile)

Geet move ahead and touched and bend for Ashirwadh from Yash.

Yash: Jeeti raho Beta. Sada Khush Rahoo.

Maan saw Geet touch Daadi ma and Yash feet. Ary waah Junglii

Billi ko Larany k ilawa ye sab bhi atta hay (self-talk) thora idher bhee dekhoo fr pata chalay ga. Maan aj teri khair nahee. Dude Bacha leinaa (look above)

Annie: Hello geet. M Anvesha..U can call me Annie. Tumhari

Akloti NANDH But tum meri age ki lagti ho so no formalities we

will be like sisters. She tightly Hug her. Bohaat Pyaari lag rahee ho.

Geet: Hi Annie .. Tum bhi kam khusoorat nhee ho.

Ranu: Geet that's Dev.. Maan k Baray Bhai

Geet: Namasty

Dev: namsaty

Ranu: and That's MAAN .. Ur fiance ..Mrs Khurana's Grand Son.

Geet: (jerk at MAAN name).. She raise her eyes and saw Maan in front..

Geet: TTTUUUMMM



Maan smirk and a naughty smile crept on his lips.

'''''''''''


Precap: I love u😳

PREVIOUS NEXT

Edited by MyInfatuationz - 13 years ago
MyInfatuationz thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NiharikaNeha777

me 1st... for d 1st in ma cmnt record... me 1st in d cmnt 😆

hayye... updt kii baat kya karu 😍 😍 😍 main already shaadi kii barein mein soch rahi hu... me in maaneet la la land ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Maan smiled seeing Geetu as his would be fiance 😳 he sooo much likes her... par sabke samne usse hitler... janglii billi... pata nahi aur kya kya bolta hain 😆
❤️ I sooo love dis cool dude MAAN yaar ❤️
aur precap... pata hain yeh Geetu apne Karu k bare mein hi soch raha hoga... itna achha maaneet precap tu humein degi tho nahi... chalo abhi maaneet na sahi... geetu-karu hi sahi 😉 kabhi na kabhi tho maanet ka bhi tym ayega na 😆
post nxt part soon lyk dis... aur haan tera updt din din chhota ho raha hain... pahle 30 mint ka ata tha wid break *like apna Star One* 😳 ab 20 mint ka araha hain widout break *like LOk* 😡 iske baad 10 mint ka karne ka irada tho nahi hain na madam!!!!!!!!!!! 😛

THANKS A LOT FOR DIS LOVELY COMMENT. WELL now m posting according to ur wishes.. post is long too but not much as if u need daily updates den u shuld compromises wid medium length. anyways thaks for liking n loving my complaint queen. 😆
MyInfatuationz thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks 😊
MyInfatuationz thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nats024

nice one

bt precaps gt me hooked!!

thanks dear 😊

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

1 years ago

Something About You- MG || (Part 92|Page 111)- Last Part

Something About You Hi all Lovelies, I am starting to post a new wonderful story called 'Something About Love'. The credit for writing concept...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

5 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates~ New Part Updated~pg 43~28.07.25

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Vaidhumom

3 years ago

💗MG SS O RE PIYA #3 - Important note on page 19 dated 26th Jan 2025

WORK IN PROGRESS... . REQUEST YOU TO LIKE AND COMMENT ONCE I ANNOUNCE THIS THREAD IS READY I AM SO GLAD TO REACH TO THIS LEVEL. I CANT EXPRESS...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: WaveTeal

1 years ago

My First Crush * Maaneet TS * 🔺🔺UPDATED @ Page 6 || 28th Mar My First Crush * Maaneet TS * 🔺🔺UPDATED @ Page 6 || 28th Mar

M y First Crus h INDEX ~ A Maaneet Tale ~ CONTENTS : SHOT 1 - PART 1 Page 1 ~ Scroll Down PART 2 Page 1 ~ Scroll Down SHOT 2 : Scarlet Flames -...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

2 years ago

Th#3 Sauda- part 44/pg70- 28 may

Prologue sauda means deal... . kissi ke Armaano ka sauda... kissi ke khawabo ka sauda... . . . humne toh kiya tha sauda pyaar smjhkar... par nhi...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".