My First FF: Tararumpum Part 27 Page 72 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 3

awsome update love maan and poja conversation and also geet and her papa conversation geet realy need to forget her past i hope next part maaneet meet with each other hayyy😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
wow just amazing dear👏👏
u r really doing great...👏
it doesnt seem that you are
writing for the first time..
keep rocking👍🏼
continue soon...
love...
mona
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
nyc concept
luvd d update

add me in PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Maan tho bohut hi dilkhush aur bindaas mood ka ladka hain... hayyee I just love him 😳 😳 😳 loved his convo wid d caller poohhh 😆
and Geet is also sooo sweet but need 2 come out of her past... her talks wid her papajii is also so heart touching & nrmal father-daughter chit-chat 😊 😊
lets see who is d businessman ladka & how they will met & wht they do whn they met???? 😛 😛
All d Best Mishu... story is getting reallyy interesting day by day yaar... MaanEet ko jaldi mila de take aur interesting ho jayye 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Great Start Hun!! Waiting for the story to unfold😃

Love,
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Luvly updts...waitng fr stry to unfold soon
updt real soon
Luv Divzi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start dear
i hope its maan only who is going to meet geet and then it will get hell interesting 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start..
so geet s still living in past..
Interesting concept..pls add me..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks friends for ur valuable comments.. it really motivate me .. Special thanks to dose wonderful Guru's of FF who already had blasting work in it. its amazing when i got patt on my back from dem. U guys are really sweet.
well plss friends i have less likes still and comments too so share n keep in connect wid me,,m sure u would love it. there are so many beautiful surprises for u.. Hope i mark ur expectations in coming updates.

Enjoy next update.

Part4:

Maan enter into his room, the room was dark. He search for light switch but can't find it. He tried to find candle in drawer when his eyes go towards the window. He saw a girl standing his back towards MAAN Her hairs were open and moving with the wind. As there is darkness so only the moon light is enlightening but only the part where the girl was standing wid his back towards MAAN. The whole room has strange sweet fragrance just lyk fresh flower in rain. He moves towards her. The girl starts breathing heavily just as she is feeling his presence at back. Her face was covered wid hairs the heavily breaths add more strange tickling sensation in this whole environment. Maan is about to hold her shoulder to face him when her dupatta cover his face. MAAN close his eyes in aroma of dat beautiful scent which make him feel Heaven. The soft silk cloth feels she is caressing her face. He heard "MMAAANN" (his name) and his eyes open. He sits on bed with his sheet in hands. He sweats.. For a min he fail to understand whether it's a nightmare or something really happened he regain his conscious. "OH MAN SAME DREAM AGAIN..Whose DAT GIRL .Why she is calling my name and the pain in her voice is like someone prick needle into my soul. WATS our connection..." GOSH YE LARKI MUJHY PAGAL LRDEY GI" (HIS SELF-TALK).

I think Maan u need to join gym again.. Ur mind seriously need some exercise. With dis he left his bed and move towards washroom to fresh himself. He stands under the shower which relaxes his mind. He came into his room and change into his gyming costume and took his exercise kit and move towards car. NakuL: he shouts

Nakul: Gee Maan Sir

Maan: I am going to gym inform Daadi if she ask about me. And I don't feel like eating breakfast so tell her don't worry about me. I just need some fresh air. And gym is best place for me.

Nakul: Gi Sir.

With dis He move towards his car and open car door with keys. And move towards his gym.


After reaching he starts his daily workouts which were not much regular from last couple of days due to his busy and lazy schedule.

Hey MAAN ..Waow Aj tum Gym mein.. All set naa (boy wink)

Maan: Hey Rohaan ya yar.. m fine.. and guess wat I have same dream. GOSH dis really makes me insane. Why it is happening wid me. Who's dat girl yaar. So m here to fresh my mind. I think it's due to over-stress of my routine. I shouldn't stop my exercise.

Rohan: hey Maan relax yaar. It's just Ur intuition. There is nothing serious. Everything will be fine. It's great to see u here.

Maan: I donna yaar but something is really happen..something really so connect wid me. M sure this is not just a dream. Hey dude wats cooking (he look above )

Rohan: ooo it means Ishq Mohabbat.com ;)

Maan: Shut up Rohaan. Mein ya pereshaan hoon tujhy mazzaq sujh rha hay.

Rohan : ok ok chill..but tell me.. how she looks..

Maan: how could I know yaar. That makes me more confuse .. Each tyme when I tried to see her face my dream ends or I woke up wid her shouts. She badly need me .. damn how do I know her in real. (he hold his head)

Rohan: hey Dude chill. M sure u would find her soon. Just relax. Haaa m surprise ppl who knw the DHAK DHAK MK would be shock as there Love Guru , the Savior is clueless to solve his own problem..his own dream girl.

Maan: (haa my reputation) Maan wink ;)

Tring tring (rohan phone start)

Rohan: (smile) just a min Maan I just back.

Maan: (start to run on treadmill).

After half and hr.. rohan back wid wide smile at his face.

Rohan: Maan wat are u doing tomorrow evening??

Maan: why what happen

Rohan: means is dere any Ur show or commitments??

Maan: Na yar. Not yet.

Rohan: great then ur coming to my girl friend Birthday party tomorrow.

Maan: are u nuts. She is ur girl friend what I will do .

Rohaan: arrryyy I don't want to go alone. U know these girls will eat me if I would be the only guy and as its my girl friends party so u knw' Chal na it would be fun and u will feel lighter and relax.

Maan: hmmm okk but Rohan'..

Rohan: no But and ' u are coming wid me and dats final. I will pick u in morning at 11 and we will go mall for her gift and some shopping.

Maan: now that's more boring.. c'mn u need to choose gift for ur gf then why I suppose to join u in morning too.

Rohan: MAAN ur my only best friend and I need ur suggestions yaar. U know dese girls and their choices.. I don't know. Plss yaar. Aaj itna Bhaoo kun khaa raha hay.

Maan: ok okk m not experience but will tell u. Btw I have to buy gift for my future bhabhi ji too.

Rohan: (Blush) ya ya abhi sy buttering start.. laga reh.. might be u got ur dis dream girl in party. Ik ticket m do mazzey.

Maan: hmmm I wish yaar.

Rohaan : cool then meet u in morning 11 am sharp.

Maan: absolutely😊

...

Precap: She is beautiful 😳

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Edited by MyInfatuationz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: SONOMAKTER1

part 3

awsome update love maan and poja conversation and also geet and her papa conversation geet realy need to forget her past i hope next part maaneet meet with each other hayyy😆😆😆

thanks dear.. stay connect :)

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