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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow superb dear..it was really cool..geet was nt ready to dance bt msk had hs tricks and at least they danced lost in each other..actually geet challenged hm that she's nt amng others who drools over hm bt nt only geet maan also lost in her..finally i hav to say it was superb..cntinue soon dearie..
Love u
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the part..
And the dance was nice..
So geet again back to square one..
Maan kaise sambhalengi usko..
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Posted: 13 years ago
part - 7
Geet is sooo lonely... 😭
Maan is tooo much naughty... 😛
thn again, Maan cant c his Mishty restless & udhas... par usse tho pata hi nahi k inn sab k wajah bhi woh hi hain 😆
hayyeee... tooo cute mish 😳
next ---- MaanEet dance!!!!!!!!!! 😲 main pahle se hi faint 😉 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
b4 I cmnt 4 part - 8, I hav a complaint 😔
maine ek baar part 7 mein der se cmnt kya kiya... u didnt tag me in fb updt status 😒 bhul gayyii na tum mujhe mish 😭 khair jaane do... I will still cmnt 😆
choice of song is vry vry gud... in fact vry vry gud is nt enuf 2 compliment... so add whtevr adjectv u wanna add here 😉
thn dance scene... ab tumne faint hone k liye koi jaga nahi chode... sooo main mar gayyiii... hayyeee full of *maahii* moment ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Rohan n Pinky r just tooo cute... apne romance k chakkar mein giving full chance 2 MaanEet 4 coming bak home 2gather 😳 ab unhe kitna tym milega nok-jhok wid maahii maahii 😉 karne k liye... haayyeee... sochte hi kuch kuch hota hain 😆
sooo plsss continue soon... aur agli bar mujhe tag karna math bhulna... warna dande se marungi tujhe 😉 😆 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
interasting precap wait for next part engerly 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 9
Geet:(nodded pinky ) No its ok Pinky I can manage.tu barai selfish nikli .kher mjhy adaat dal leini chahey.

Maan: Its Ok Miss Geet.. I don't have any problem will not do anything. AJ ka
Dose kafi hay (Maan wink)

Geet: No Thanks. I can manage myself.

Rohan: c'mn saali sahiba u know MAAN is nice guy and aj dance k badh u

shuld trust him.

Geet: No Jeeju seriously I don't need favors.

Pinky parents came from back.

Sahi bol rahye Geet beta. Its too late and u shuld not go alone. Maan seems

really nice person so I don't think isk saath janay sy tumhein koi problem hogi. Wat say Boy

Maan: thanks Uncle.

Pinky: Chal na Geetu .. tery chakkr m me and Rohan are getting late.

Geet: (mouth wide open) No Thanks huh I will go myself and u pinky tumhein to mein badh m dekh longi.

With this she left laughing maan and rohan,pinky behind. Rohan and Pinky also left in their car. Maan was driving when he suddenly stop at glimpse. Geet was standing across the road and was waiting for cab.

Maan stop his car near her and open front side window

Maan: Excuse me Miss Geet shayad apko pata nhee is waqt koi cab ya taxi apko nhee miley gi. Ab un Gareebo ko kya pata k Miss Attitude (stop at her glare) I mean Geet madam will be late and waiting for dem.

Geet: Look Mr Dh'she stop

Maan: (wink) Yaa Say Mr Dhak Dhak well its Maan Singh Khurana

Geet: Watever I don't need ur sympathesis. M not Pinku who drool and enjoy ur attention so pls leave me alone.

Maan: haaayeee yee Zalim Ghussa.. Well Geet whatever u think but don't forget ur Pinky and Jeeju as well as Uncle gave me responsible to drop u safely. So pls come sit in car. Srsly will not do anything. He open his side door and Geet sat wid him in car.

After a few minutes silent drive Maan smirk and switched his car radio. Dono why he suddenly want to tease Geet. Shayad usko tang karnaa acha lagney laga hay.

Hey Frnds Aj Mausam Kitna Suhana hay. Hawaon ki sargoshiyan ar ye Mast angraiyan apsy kuch kehna chahti hein.. so doob jaye ..gum hojayiye kun key ye Mausam fr na aye ga. Ar ager ap kisi bohaat Special, Khubsoorat partner k saath hein to it's the best moment to KEHDO DIL KI BAAT. 😎

Geet glare at MAAN who was trying to control his smile with his eyes on road.Geet look out of window and blabbered "Hey BABA G kidher Phansa dya.. Pinku ur dead.. tujhy nhee chorongi"

Maan: wat happen Miss Geet apny mjsy kuch kaha.

Geet: Nahee mein apsy kun kuch kahongi. Pls apni nazrein samney hee rakhin.

Maan: (bend towards her which make her glue wid the window) KUN AB MERINAZRON SY APKO KYA PRB HAY.

Geet: (confuse'GOSH he has so expressive eyes. 'Geet shutup) wo woo woo Mein ghr zinda punchna chhati hoon he push Maan back and sat straight by giving him steal glances.

Maan: ooo don't worry beautiful ladies are always save wid Dhak Dhak .😆

After few minutes Maan start singing. SUHANA SAFAR AR YE MAUSAM HASEEN HUMHEIN DAR HAY HUM KHOO NA JAYEN KAHIN...

Geet felt uncomfortable. Something very strange really make her confuse. it seems he is singing what her heart beats speaks now when they drowned in his eyes.BABA G ye kya ho raha hay Pls jaldi sy ghar puncha do.😳

The car was moving on Highway. Suddenly rain starts and geet jumpswaaaooowww MUMBAI m Barish yuppieee.pls Maan stop the car plss plss.

Maan was surprised at sudden change at his behavior and wait a min dude he iscalling me MAAN waoww. He park car at the corner of road. Geet open her side door and move outside. She played and smile jump and was completely forgot where she was. She was playing with drops like kids. Maan was memorized with the sight.

Geet: Barsoo Rey Mega Mega Barsoo Rey Mehga Megha (geet dancing and jumping whole around the road. MAAAN come yar ur so boring sitting inside and missing dis beautiful weather.. she move to his side and open his car door and drag him outside. Aisy Mausam ka Mazza Bheeg kr atta hay..

Maan: (surprised n lost at geet)

This girl is something ..not lyk others, Pal pal badalny wali. Ik pal Ghussay m ar dosry Pal mein Khul kr muskruany wali.. fr roo deiny wali.. there are so many moods in one girl. Just few minutes back she was showing attitude, forgetting n taunting him and now she want to enjoy this moment wid him, calling his name and smiling. GOSH she had beautiful smile and these droplets waoww..KAASH ye MAUSAM KABHI NA BADLEY.. KASH YE BARISH KABHI NA THAMEY, KAASH ISK HONTON KI MUSKAN kabhee na Khatam ho. He was disturb from his thoughts when Geet shake him.. OH Mr Kidher gum Hogaye.. lets have some icecream.. see there is ice-cream parlor. U know Is Sardi m Ice-cream ka Maza kuch ar hay.. barish ka Pani and Ice-cream waaawooo.

Geet ran towards the parlor and order cones for herself. She was so lost in licking n enjoying ice-cream that she didn't notice Maan who was became statue at his sight.

Maan:Dude how could be someone so beautiful .. his eyes go towards at the side of Geet lips. He move towards her and stand in front of her. Geet became confused at his sudden closeness.

...

Precap: Geet Felt weak at her knees. 😉


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Wow superb dear..it was really cool..geet was nt ready to dance bt msk had hs tricks and at least they danced lost in each other..actually geet challenged hm that she's nt amng others who drools over hm bt nt only geet maan also lost in her..finally i hav to say it was superb..cntinue soon dearie..
Love u

Thanks dear 😊
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Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

loved the part..

And the dance was nice..
So geet again back to square one..
Maan kaise sambhalengi usko..

Thanks dear just wait n watch 😆
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Originally posted by: NiharikaNeha777

part - 7

Geet is sooo lonely... 😭
Maan is tooo much naughty... 😛
thn again, Maan cant c his Mishty restless & udhas... par usse tho pata hi nahi k inn sab k wajah bhi woh hi hain 😆
hayyeee... tooo cute mish 😳
next ---- MaanEet dance!!!!!!!!!! 😲 main pahle se hi faint 😉 😆

Thanks dear 😊 well dis tyme i tagged n posted as well. now waiting for ur feedback. see promise pura huaa .. 😆

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