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Originally posted by: MyInfatuationz
Sorry FOlks for late update.. actually bzy wid my studs.. but m here wid next update which is long as compare to previous ones its long coz i couldn't update on friday and Sat as i would be bzy in my late night classes so will tired.. but u ppl stay connect coz in next updates there would be smashing surprises for all of u.
keep guessing sweets with this update 😆Hungry for ur LIKES n COMMENTS. DIL MANGEY MORE MORE.😎Love 😊Part 5At Khurana Mansion
Daadi was talking on phone with someone and had smile on her face.
Daadi: Theek hay Mrs. Malhotra ap uski pic bhej dijey .Hum ghr pr sabko dekha deitay hein. Apki baton sy lagta hay jaisii bahu ki humhein talaash thi ye wasii hee hay. Haan Theek hay hum jald hee YASH sy baat larkey ap ko batty hein.. G Naiq Kam m dairy Nahee Karin chahey. Ok gee Namsty.
Yash: (reading newspaper) he notice daadi smiling lost in her thoughts.
Yash: MA wat happen.. why ur smiling. Who was there at phone.
Daadi: today I am so happy. Finally I was waiting for this day and today Bhagwan has made this possible.She told all her convo to Yash.
Yash: that's great MA..Finally Is ghar ki khushiyan wapas any ka waqt agaya hay. Bhagwan karye ye is larki mein wo sab gunn hoon jo humhein apni bahu mein chahey. Abto to yahee is gahr ki khushiyan ley aye.
Daadi: haan beta.. But first we need to see her photo and then will talk with MAAN. U know ur beta that his first reply would be "NO" and I don't want to take another chance now. He has to accept this girl and this time I will not give him any chance to date with that girl and play his game to reject this proposal.
Yash: yes Ma.. we would be very careful this time. He is very clever in such stuff.
Just then a girl enter. Namstay Daadi,Namasty Uncle.
Daadi: Aoo Meera beta how ru? And why dis tyme Dev is not at home.. still in office and I don't have any clue about his lunch plans.(Daadi tease)
Meera: (blush) Daadi Ap Bhi na. M here just to give u taste of this Kheer. I cook for uncle g and u.
Daadi: ooo really (Daadi Wink)
Meera: (blush) gee daadi.
Yash: Ary bhai baatein krti rahogi ya taste bhi karwaogey. And who refuse to taste this kheer .
Meera: (blush) She put spoon full of kheer in Daadi mouth and then Yash mouth.
Hmmm Its yummy (daadi comment)
Yash: bhai akher bahu kiski hay. Waah beta its really sweet.
Hmmm to honey walli Saasu ma and Sussar gi ko buttering with sweet kheer. Not bad Meruu (Annie who just back from college and saw her serving Kheer.
Meera: Annniee.. Ye Lo Tum bhi Khaoo. After all ur my honey walli Nandh G so I should put extra butter on u,hope this could shut your mouth. She put spoon full of kheer in Annie mouth.
Annie: waah Bhabhii.. Dev Bhaiya ki to Nikal parii' ur really nice cook.
Meera: Thanks..
Daadi: YASH m thinking if the girl is really Sansikari and sweet then we should talk with Meera parents too. And Ik pandap pr do shaadiyan hojayen gi.
Before Annie and Meera question about "DO" shaadiyan..
Maan enter with his teasing looks when he see Meera and her bowl full of kheer.
Maan: Uffh ajkal ki bahuein.. Shaadi sy pehly apny saas susar ko hath m karny k kitny Gunni baan jati hein.
Meera: (she try to run) woo I need to go mom must be waiting for me.
Maan stop her way. Aaann aan Not now Bhabhie G.. after all your Devaar should taste this sweet Kheer too .u know M the only one in dis house who could make this wedding plan earlier. but need to work hard on me too to get Ur SAAIYAN (Maan hold her shoulder and sit her on sofa)
Meera: Pingu to bee naa.. Kuch to Daadi Ma and Uncle ka lihaaz karoo.. *meera blush)
Daadi: Meera Beta you don't need to come at this house with such excuses soon I will talk with Ankulp for ur and dev wedding.
Maan: yes Daadi Ma now these Toota Maina should be together. It's been 1 year of their love ..now this love should have some sweet legal name.
Annie: yes Papa and Daadi. Plss before there balcony moments become wild we need to give dem privacy and wo bhi legally .. (Annie wink at Maan)
Meera: ANniee ..tum bhi shuru.. plss (meera Blush)
Maan: BTW ANNIE imagine MEERA serving Kheer to her DEVAAA . Suniye G I have made Kheer specially for u with my own delicate hands. Pls taste na .(Mimic Meera)
Annie: pull Maan which make him sit in her lap Darling who care to taste this kheer when ur here my sugar syrup. I love to taste these buds only. These are sweetest and softest in whole world.
Maan: Issshhh badmash devuuu
All laughed and Meera start sweating '
Meera: (Shy) ufffhh u both badmash. ' M going bye..before MAAN again stop her she run. Leaving all dem laughing.
Nakul: Daadi MA lunch is serve.
Daadi: ok I need all of you at dining table in 10 minutes.
All proceed to move towards dining table and share laugh at Meera expressions when Annie and MAAN were teasing her.
Hmm so Nakul Sweet ley ayen wo meera jo Kheer laye hein (daadi order after lunch)
Just then Dev enter. Hello Everyone.
All see him together and the whole room again echoed with their laughs.
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Geet enter into her room and saw an envelope at table. She open and her serious face expressions change into big smile...her cheeks become deep red and her eyes glue on the photo.
Geet: ahaan Not Bad . hmmm he looks cute.. I must Say MOM AND DAD choice is brilliant (Geet self talk)
Just then her mom enters into her room and saw her smiling. She moves towards her and pat her shoulder. DO u like him?
Geet: (Blush)hmmm Theek thaak hay. One nose, two eyes and one lip. Just as normal guy.
Ranu: ahaaan Theek Thak hay.. that's why ur staring his photo since last couple of hrs and didn't notice my patting nor replied to my call.
Geet: (embarrass) na ma nothing like that I was just'''..
Ranu: (by teasing hitting on her head) Jhalli I am ur Mother. I know u much better than you. I saw Love for KARAN in your eyes when u was unaware with these feelings but always get jealous with girls around him.
Geet: Ma he doesn't deserve those cheapo and show off monsters.
Ranu: ya he is sent by GOD only with GEET name tag... hainaa
Geet: (Shyly hug her mother) Maaa
Ranu: Paagaall.
Geeettt Geeettt Geet Geet geet'(pinky scream)
Geet come out of her dream world and check envelop is still unopened lying on table and pinky was standing with her and calling her name.
Geet: when did u come??
Pinky: Aye Lo Madam I am calling you since couple of minutes and ur staring this wooden table and smiling like an idiot. Where u lost buddy??
Geet: nothing .tell me what happened.
Pinky: turn geet round and scream again GGGEEETTT am soo happy'. Finally Mom and Dad agree and guess what they invite ROHAN at my birthday party which is supposed to be tomorrow. M sooo happpyyy yeeehhhooo.
Geet: ohhh ya it's your birthday.. I forgot.
Pinky: oyee hello No sorry samghi but u can give me an expensive gift as Fine.. (Pinky wink)
Geet: (smile) Tu bhi naa ..Ok Done.
Pinky: hehehehehee ok gotta go..baas tujhy ye news deiny aye thi.. have to do lots of arrangements after all it would be PINKY KHUMAR birthday and most special expected engagement day. (pinky wink)
Geet: congratulations Pinky.. (she hug her). M so happy for u finally u got Ur love. Ur love story is complete.
Pinky: Ohhhoo Not Again Geetuu. Not today atleast' ohhkk chal Bbyee m getting late.see yaa.
Pinky left geet alone ..Geet again start to open the envelop, she was about to turn the photo when Pinky again pounced from back. Ohh terii Ik baat kehna to bhool gai. we are going on shopping tomorrow morning ..no buts and excuses this time..u know m so confuse and have to do lots of preparations for this. Parlor, shopping, meeting planning and I want my bestie to be with me in all dis arrangements. So be ready I will pick u at 10 am
Geet: Ok Pinky... relax I will be there... don't worry. Uncle and Aunty would accept Rohan.
Pinky hug Geet thanks Geetuu... chal tera ye ehsaan udhar raha... Remember soudh sameet wapas krunga.. Might be we both engaged together at same date..wait for tomorrow dhamka. Might be we have one more dashing, hottie for u in party . (pinky wink)
Geet: don't u think u r getting late.. go.
Pinky: oh yaa m leaving. bbyee see ya.
Pinky left room and geet put photo back in envelop without turning and left it in her cupboard.
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precap: Ek dujay K wastay lalllaaallaaa...Mahi Mahi 😉
Originally posted by: MyInfatuationz
Part : 6
Ppeeepp ppeeepp peeep OH Gosh This Mumbai traffic so annoying, I just don't like dis. We are getting late. I have to do lots of stuff today. (Pinky horn cont and blabbering)
Geet: Thand Rakh pinky. U know this Mumbai traffic and don't worry we will back before Ur parlor timings.
Pinky: Shut up yaar m already so nervous and u r reminding me about my parlor appointments.
Geet: (smile) relax see cars start moving.. Now speed up Ur car not ur tongue. We will reach in time.
On the other side Maan and Rohan are roaming in shopping mall.
Maan: Oh Man we are roaming like idiots in whole mall. Do u have any plans for shopping or we are here just for window shopping like girls.
Rohan: yaar m so confuse about today evening. It's my first time and I want look perfect in front of my future in-laws. I am so nervous.
Maan: (laugh) hahahahahahaa Rohan be a MAN .. Teri waja sy Mardo ki naa cut jay gi. By the way teri Barat jaye gi not aye gi..
Rohan: not so funny Maan. Tu mera dost hay ya dushman.
Maan: (control his laugh) chal us shop pr chal key tery leye allaa si jeans shirt leity hein chal ajaa.
They enter into the shop and start checking jeans and t-shirts. Maan choose black shirt with stylish button n curvy sleeves and ask sale man to pack for him. Geet and Pinky think to buy some outfits for evening and they entered into same shop.
As geet enter into the shop the breeze naughtily blow her hairs.. The strands teasingly move on her face.
Kitne duur duur ho, unn dono ke rasteMil jate hai jo bane, ek duje ke vaasteek duje ke vaasteMusic...
The tickling sensation passes in Maan's heart. For a min he stop and looked around as his heart beat became fast.
He becomes confuse with sudden change that he loses his attention from Rohan.
Rohan: Maan Maan kidher goom hay yaar. Mein tujhy bula raha hoon ar tu paglo jaisy idher udher dekh raha hay. Teri tbayaat to theek hay naa?
Maan: Haan m fine.. Just tired ab teri is shopping k chakar mein meri halaat kharab kardi hy m bored yar. Teri shaadi hay meri nahee.
Rohan: ok relax mein agey dekh kar atta hoon u just relax.. Take dis seat and have some water.
As Rohan left..Maan stood and again look around and move towards unknown direction.
GeeT check dis yaar.. hows this. (pinky show yellow sleevless long gown ) Aj birthday pr ye color kaisa rahey ga?
Geet: hmm its fine yar but try some bright colors as its very special day for u...
Geet : hmmm try this one. (Pick blue gown wid shoulder off)
Pinky: ahaan Not bad Geetu.. let me check. As Pinky move towards changing room leaving Geet alone.
Maan move towards the dress rack and the same rack at opposite direction geet is standing and busy in selecting dresses. She saw men black shirt with beautiful button styles and curve sleeves lying on nearby counter. The same shirt MAAN asked salesperson to pack for him. She moved her hand on shirt.
Jaise dil hai dhadkan haiek duje ke vaasteJaise aankh hai darpan haiek duje ke vaasteAt the same time Maan eyes go towards a beautiful red outfit. Red is always Maan's favorite color so he stand and move his fingers on the red out which has silver broach on her dupatta. Unknowingly he stare that outfit.
Jaise barkha savan haiek duje ke vaasteEk sajani ek sajan haiGeet serious looks change into sweet smile just as she felt tickle with Maan fingers moving softly on that red the dress. It felt Geet is wearing that dress and Maan hands are moving softly over her, admiring her. Standing opposite in front of same rack but can't see each other their moving fingers on cloths which is not just a piece of cloth for dem but a life and they adore that with their eyes and hands. A smile crept on Maan's lips too.
ek duje ke vaaste
ek duje ke vaasteek duje ke vaasteRohan came from back and pat his shoulder.
Rohan: Maan tujhy ye girlie outfit chahey (Rohan wid shock face)
Maan: (smile) no yaar u know RED is always my favorite and this outfit looks really cool. Haaye Kassh meri koi girl friend hoti then I would gift this elegant dress to her. M sure I would got something really sweet in return (maan wink)
Rohan: hahahaha Maan tu bhi na..
Maan: but one thing is sure that whoever would wear this outfit would be most beautiful and smart girl not by face but wid heart coz this elegant and stylish outfit is made just for that type of girl. Simple, sweet but smart brains ik daam hut key sabsy sundar sab sy alaag. Might me some angel from heaven .
Rohan: Oye hoyee Mr Tu kabsy Itna romantic type baan gaya..Kahin ye teri uss Mysterious Khirki wali ka to nhee asaar.
Maan: Uffh Kiski yaa dila di yaaar (Maan naughtily put his hand on heart) Ik bar mil jaye fr dekh kaisi halaat krta haoon. Gin gin kr badly lungaa (maan wink)
Rohan: hahahahaa tery iradhy khatarnaak hein Maan.(rohan tease)
Both share laugh.
Maan: chal chal bohaat hogayaa. Tera hogayaa now let's have some lunch fr mujhy bhabhi k leye kuch gift bhi leina hay.
With this they move towards counter for payment. And at the same time Geet who was busy in finding dress for herself saw the same beautiful red dress and select at first sight.
Geet: waoww its soo pretty. I m gona buy this.. Pinky teri birthday k leye kaisa rahey ga.
Pinky: ahaan Geetu tujhy ye bohaat suit krey ga.. Take it
Geet ask sales woman for that outfit and move towards the payment section.
After payment they move towards the other shop.
Pinky: uffh Geetu m so hungry. We are shopping and forget about our lunch. Right now I need 2 big Jumbo size burger with extra mayonnaise, extra cheese, with lots of French fries. One saucy pasta, two'
Geet: OMG pinky ye akely tu khaye gi??
Pinky: geetu m so hungry. u know mjhy bhook bardhst nahee hoti.
Geet ok u go and order I be just back in 5 minutes.
Pinky: ok come fast.
Geet move towards the "MOMENTS" shop for pinky birthday present.
She was selecting cards and gifts for Pinky. On the other side Maan is also busy in selecting gifts for her To-Be Bhabhi. Both are standing with back towards each other, standing side by side but unaware of each other presence. Lost in selecting gifts but their hearts recognized each other beats. Who can say they will be MANEET in future. They would be two souls in one heart. They are strangers for each other but there heart beats are known. Standing strangely with their backs but these two strangers will soon be together and will give new name to world's most beautiful feeling "LOVE"
Ush rab ne jab dil diyedil ke do tukade kiyeDono pe ek naam likhaek radha ek shaam likhaWhile reading card a smile crept on Maneet lips.
Ab yeh dil dhadakte haimilte aur bichadte haiek duje ke vaasteek duje ke vaasteA violin in some nearby instrumental shop starts playing giving sign that it's the beginning of their journey towards each other. Nature, and the world around them are giving signs that they are made for each other but none of them noticed that how wind change its direction, how music giving their beats new rhythm. Time stop, clock tick tock became silent as to not disturb the spell of hour. The dancing of heart beats with the rhythm of new music, the music which is mix of their breaths and heart beats.
Geet : (phone ring) tring tring
ek duje ke vaasteek duje ke vaasteek duje ke vaastePinky: Kahan hay tu Geetu. 5 min ka bol kar gai ar abhee taq nhee aye..
Geet: ok m coming.
Maan left shop and geet followed unknowingly. Both move towards opposite direction
Maan reach near the lift and press button for door opening. He entered and lift door close. There are many people in lift which make it bit suffocating.
Geet on the other hand call pinky
Geet: Pinky where r u? M standing in cafe.
Pinky: ooppss I thought u must be late so I m now at ground floor. Don't worry lift sy ajaa.. m waiting in parking area.
Geet: uffh tu bi na.. m already hell tired .dono how would I look fresh in ur party.
Pinky: hehehehe sorry baba..chal jaldi aja will go parlor and aj tujhy special relaxing treatment dilwaongi. M sure u would love it.
Geet: ok m coming tu parking sy jana nhee.
Geet move towards lift. She pressed button and after few minutes lift door opened. A rush come out from lift so she had to move aside. As one guy left ,she enter into the lift without noticing the guy and press close button. Lift start and with a sudden jerk it stop and it became dark. The jerk make Geet fall on the guy chest, due to darkness she can't loose her grip on his shirt. Exactly that's MAAN.
The smell of colone enters into her nostrils and she closed her eyes just to feel dem. The strong hands move on her back and cover her protectively.
Hum dono ek jaan haido dil ek armaan haiShe breath fast and her heart start beating as they are participating in MARATHON. Both lost in each other embrace. He said" Don't worry I am with u Mishti" She look upto his eyes. And start moving her hand on his face. Their breaths interact with each other. Their lips are few inches apart. Maan move his fingers on her cheeks and remove strands just to have clear view of her face. He was about to remove completely suddenly lift starts and lights on and lift door open. Suddenly light came out to disturb there peaceful romantic moment. Geet realize and as door open she run outside without looking back.
Lekin ab is mod pardeke daman chod karMaan standing static and shock as what just happen in last couple of minutes. Those eyes, those breaths and soft silky skin which softness still felt in his fingers..The caress he still feels on his cheeks. The rosy lips which could be seen in dark are so inviting that he urged to kiss them, to feel there softness, to enjoy their taste.
Waqt ka hai ye faisalahum tum ho jaye judaaMange khushiyon ki duva
Geet run fast as she could with control her tears that what just happen to her why dose words really melted her. Why those eyes have her reflection.
Why those breaths are matching with her breaths. The cozy, arms which are protectively around her make her feel she is in safe hands. She didn't feel such comfort before. That embrace was just for her. as she belong to them only.What make her body connect so perfectly with his body? So many unsaid words are said thru the meeting of their bodies, eyes, heart and soul.
ek duje ke vaaste
ek duje ke vaasteek duje ke vaasteek duje ke vaaste
With this confuse and mind ful of questions she sat in car without realizing pinky's non-stop questions and blabbering. When pinky didn't found her answers and found her lost she became silent.
MAAN standing in lift when Rohan call him
Rohan: MAAN dude its fine. Lift door is open .. Come we are getting late.
Maan saw Rohan blankly who drag him outside in parking area.
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precap: Waaat Shaaadiii 😲
Originally posted by: MyInfatuationz
Thanks friends for ur valuable comments.. it really motivate me .. Special thanks to dose wonderful Guru's of FF who already had blasting work in it. its amazing when i got patt on my back from dem. U guys are really sweet.well plss friends i have less likes still and comments too so share n keep in connect wid me,,m sure u would love it. there are so many beautiful surprises for u.. Hope i mark ur expectations in coming updates.Enjoy next update.Part4:Maan enter into his room, the room was dark. He search for light switch but can't find it. He tried to find candle in drawer when his eyes go towards the window. He saw a girl standing his back towards MAAN Her hairs were open and moving with the wind. As there is darkness so only the moon light is enlightening but only the part where the girl was standing wid his back towards MAAN. The whole room has strange sweet fragrance just lyk fresh flower in rain. He moves towards her. The girl starts breathing heavily just as she is feeling his presence at back. Her face was covered wid hairs the heavily breaths add more strange tickling sensation in this whole environment. Maan is about to hold her shoulder to face him when her dupatta cover his face. MAAN close his eyes in aroma of dat beautiful scent which make him feel Heaven. The soft silk cloth feels she is caressing her face. He heard "MMAAANN" (his name) and his eyes open. He sits on bed with his sheet in hands. He sweats.. For a min he fail to understand whether it's a nightmare or something really happened he regain his conscious. "OH MAN SAME DREAM AGAIN..Whose DAT GIRL .Why she is calling my name and the pain in her voice is like someone prick needle into my soul. WATS our connection..." GOSH YE LARKI MUJHY PAGAL LRDEY GI" (HIS SELF-TALK).
I think Maan u need to join gym again.. Ur mind seriously need some exercise. With dis he left his bed and move towards washroom to fresh himself. He stands under the shower which relaxes his mind. He came into his room and change into his gyming costume and took his exercise kit and move towards car. NakuL: he shouts
Nakul: Gee Maan Sir
Maan: I am going to gym inform Daadi if she ask about me. And I don't feel like eating breakfast so tell her don't worry about me. I just need some fresh air. And gym is best place for me.
Nakul: Gi Sir.
With dis He move towards his car and open car door with keys. And move towards his gym.
After reaching he starts his daily workouts which were not much regular from last couple of days due to his busy and lazy schedule.
Hey MAAN ..Waow Aj tum Gym mein.. All set naa (boy wink)
Maan: Hey Rohaan ya yar.. m fine.. and guess wat I have same dream. GOSH dis really makes me insane. Why it is happening wid me. Who's dat girl yaar. So m here to fresh my mind. I think it's due to over-stress of my routine. I shouldn't stop my exercise.
Rohan: hey Maan relax yaar. It's just Ur intuition. There is nothing serious. Everything will be fine. It's great to see u here.
Maan: I donna yaar but something is really happen..something really so connect wid me. M sure this is not just a dream. Hey dude wats cooking (he look above )
Rohan: ooo it means Ishq Mohabbat.com ;)
Maan: Shut up Rohaan. Mein ya pereshaan hoon tujhy mazzaq sujh rha hay.
Rohan : ok ok chill..but tell me.. how she looks..
Maan: how could I know yaar. That makes me more confuse .. Each tyme when I tried to see her face my dream ends or I woke up wid her shouts. She badly need me .. damn how do I know her in real. (he hold his head)
Rohan: hey Dude chill. M sure u would find her soon. Just relax. Haaa m surprise ppl who knw the DHAK DHAK MK would be shock as there Love Guru , the Savior is clueless to solve his own problem..his own dream girl.
Maan: (haa my reputation) Maan wink ;)
Tring tring (rohan phone start)
Rohan: (smile) just a min Maan I just back.
Maan: (start to run on treadmill).
After half and hr.. rohan back wid wide smile at his face.
Rohan: Maan wat are u doing tomorrow evening??
Maan: why what happen
Rohan: means is dere any Ur show or commitments??
Maan: Na yar. Not yet.
Rohan: great then ur coming to my girl friend Birthday party tomorrow.
Maan: are u nuts. She is ur girl friend what I will do .
Rohaan: arrryyy I don't want to go alone. U know these girls will eat me if I would be the only guy and as its my girl friends party so u knw' Chal na it would be fun and u will feel lighter and relax.
Maan: hmmm okk but Rohan'..
Rohan: no But and ' u are coming wid me and dats final. I will pick u in morning at 11 and we will go mall for her gift and some shopping.
Maan: now that's more boring.. c'mn u need to choose gift for ur gf then why I suppose to join u in morning too.
Rohan: MAAN ur my only best friend and I need ur suggestions yaar. U know dese girls and their choices.. I don't know. Plss yaar. Aaj itna Bhaoo kun khaa raha hay.
Maan: ok okk m not experience but will tell u. Btw I have to buy gift for my future bhabhi ji too.
Rohan: (Blush) ya ya abhi sy buttering start.. laga reh.. might be u got ur dis dream girl in party. Ik ticket m do mazzey.
Maan: hmmm I wish yaar.
Rohaan : cool then meet u in morning 11 am sharp.
Maan: absolutely😊
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Precap: She is beautiful 😳
Originally posted by: MyInfatuationz
Hello FOlks thanks for ur patience and ignorance 😭. well m back wi my part 7. so hoping u like it. or atleast comment or response. wake up lazy bones. 😭
enjoy. 😉Part 7Yash Ma when will u talk with Maan about that girl. I want him to get settle now ..he should be serious with his life Ma. I want to play with my grand children Ma. She is nice girl and I think she is perfect for Maan. (yash ask to ma)
Daadi ma: let him come today will talk and show him picture. M sure he would love her. after all she is very pretty .
Just as Maan entered, lost in geet and his meeting in lift scene.Yash call MAAAN . He came from his thoughts Yes Dad (Maan replied.)
Daadi Ma: (pointed Yash with eyes to go ) maan idher aiye humhein apsy kuch baat karni hay.
Maan: hey Sweet heart kya baat hai aj apny Pingu ki judaai bardhst nhee hoyee . thora late hua and u start calling me MAAN not Pingu ;)
Daadi ma: Ab Kya krein boyfriend apki judai ki to adaat dalni hogi ab kal apki shaadi hojayen gi to apki patni ko ye acha lagey ga k apki girl friend ap par Haq jamaye.
Maan: don't worry Sweet heart ur always my first love and '' (just relaise wat daadi said) WAAATT SHAADDDII. Not Again Daadi Ma.. U know I don't want to lose my freedom. plsss
Daadi Ma: don't be surprise Pingu. And wats dis freedom and all. Why u youngsters always think that being committed or engaged is like prison. Stop it and Grow up now.
Maan: but daadi plss u know MAAN SINGH KHURANA is not born for this marriage or any kind of commitments and when I have such sweet Sweet Heart then who wants wife.
Daadi ma: Maan m serious and u should be serious too. Yash and Me really want u to get married soon. U should be serious about ur life Maan. And mind it don't try to act smart wid me. No dates or meetings before marriage. We have saw a girl for u.. here is her picture and this tyme we don't need mess again. U already created so many scenes with other girls. I want you to accept this so dat we would get u married in a year.
Maan: wo woo Daadi plss hold on...
Daadi: (by giving him pic) check dis pic and I need your positive reply and this time its final. No arguments now.
Maan: (irritating tone) okk
As He was about to check picture when his cell phone start ringing. It was Rohan Call.
Rohan: Maan yar I need u.. sunn wo'
Maan widout seeing pic left pic on table. And move towards his room.
At 8:oo p.m all guests arrived at birthday party. Pinky and Geet were enjoying n chatting with their friends. Pinky again and again looks towards the door.
Pinky: Uffhoo ye rohan abhee taq kun nahee ayaa.😕
Geet: oye hoyee someone is very desperate .😉
Pinky: uffh geet chup kr. Aj nahii plss m hungry now u know tension sy mery pait m choohay nachna start kr deity hein. With this pinky left geet with other friends. She look out from main door and saw Rohan who reached with MAAN and call her name. Hey my laddu happy Birthday 😆(rohan Hug pinky)
Pinky: Rohaan again late. Tum kabhi nhee sudhrogye .. Mom dad were asking about u. u are so'.
Rohan: hey pinky this is Maan my best friend.
Pinky: (realize and feel embarrass ) oh Hi Maan sorry I didn't noticed.
Maan: (give side hug to pinki) its ok Bhabhi G i understand 😉.. Happy Bithday
Pinky: (blush) Thanks 😳
Rohan: By the way Laddu are u alone. I mean where is ur tail Geet.
Pinky: (angry) don't call her my tail. She is my bestie.
Rohan: ok ok m sorry I mean My Sali Sahibaa
Pinky: that's better. Wo wahan Eshita k saath hay. Ik min let me call her.
Pinky Mom and Dad' Pinky Beta if ur guests arrived can we cut cake. All guests are waiting for u.
Pinky: yes Dad. (She call Geet ) Geett Ajjjaaa yaar.
Just as Maan eyes go towards her direction and he saw a girl in red with dupatta around neck and have broch. He recognized that it's the same dress whom he choose in Mall. She was looking ravishing in that avtar with hair open but with hair band head. it looks she is Princess of some fairy land and that band is lyk her crown.😍
Geet: (smile) ok coming
Maan: heart stop beating. Dangerously cute and innocent smile and her voice is so sweet.
Rohan: (poke Maan) Oh Hello Meri Sali Ko nazar maat Lagaa
Maan: shut up yaar. She is beautiful.
Rohan: ooo kehta hay to Introduction krwaon.
Maan: tu rehny dey MAAN SINGH KHURANA don't need introduction. To apny Laduu par dehaan dey.
Rohan was about to say something but stop as Pinky came near dem and pull him towards the cake table. Pinky, Rohan and Maan join all near table. Maan gave stare galances to Geet who is standing with Pinky.. smiling ,chirping and teasing Rohan and Pinky. After the cake cutting Rohan call Maan and introduce him with Geet.
Rohan: Sali Sahiba this is my best friend Maan.
Geet: (smile) Hi
Maan: (Smile back) Hello
Rohan: He is an Rj.. Pinky's Dhak Dhak MK. M sure ager mein Pinky ko na milta she definetly try on MAAN.
Pinky: (blush) stop it Rohaan tum bhee na.
Geet: (smirk) oh so ur the great Dhak Dhak MK. Pinky crazy desire and Jeeju jealousy point.😆
Maan: (hold his collar) ya I am. U seems to be my fan too. (smirk)
Geet: (Serious and angry tone) Excuse me.. I hate Rj's and dis Radio. All bullshits' saying dis she left Maan and others shocked behind.
Maan: (confuse) wat happen to her. Mein ney aisaa kya keh dya. Why so much attitude and rudeness.
Pinky: M so sorry Maan. She is like dat. Actually she don't like dis Music stuff at all. Infact she hate dis word "love" too.
Maan: ( siping his drink and looking towards the direction where geet went in anger) INTERESTING.
Pinky was about to narrate Geet past when her Parents call. Pinky and Rohan come here. We need to talk with u. so they move towards dem and Maan left alone. When Maan notice that Rohan and Pinky are busy with Pinky parents he took his drink and roam around. He move towards the lawn and was about to move back when his eyes saw a Geet walking alone in lawn. She was lost in her own thoughts. She was looking like an angel. Her innocent face and deep eyes which have tears and the rosy lips have some complaints. She was staring above the sky. He took out his mobile cam and took some of her pix. She is really different I was right when I saw her first time, just like Lift scene girl. Might be she is de same girl (Maan think) he move towards her and clear his throat.
Maan: Rj's and Radio is not dat much bad that u left ur friends birthday party and complaining to BABA G.
Geet: (teary eyes look towards Maan)
Maan: (became serious) M so sorry I don't want to hurt u. I was just kidding.
Geet: ( without a word she move inside)
Maan: (became restless with her tears) Damm I hurt her, dose beautiful eyes have tears coz of me. Tujhy kya zaroorat thi ye sab bolney ki .. But Dude "Husn ki ye ada nhee hey baiwaja,Kuch to baat hay jski parda daari hay". And MAAN SINGH KHURANA will get this secret so soon. (Maan Self-Talk)😊
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Precap: Sensational Maneet Dance 😍
Originally posted by: MyInfatuationz
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PART: 8
Hey Pinky yar ur bzy with ur ROHAN m getting bored.
Lets have some dhamal yaar.. music, dance' something.
eshita ask Pinky)
Pinky: Relax yaar. Abhi to party start hay. I have something very exciting today.
Pinky move towards the mic and announce. Attention my sweet guest. Party is full on and I want to make this party more exciting, sweet and ROMANTIC by some games,dance, masti. So dear's lets have some DHAMALL yyyeeeaaahhh
Ok I have a brilliant idea to make dis prty more bright n thrilling. I have this two boxes which has Guests name. Red Box contains Girls name and Blue Box Contains Boys Name. so one by one u all have to pick one paper and read name. That's would be ur partner name and u have to dance or perform with dat person.
Wwwooohooo (all cheered) and whose performance would be loved that couple would be Our PRINCE AND PRINCESS of the party. Ooowww so be careful ..
Lets the Party Begin ooohhooowwooo. After all guests got their Paper, Again pinky start. So who's the first couple we have.
ESHITA and Rahul ooo ((Couple move ahead)
Janvi and Pratik ooo
ARmaan and Laila aaawww
Rithik and Amisha
Panchi and Abhay
Then its Geet turn ,she open her paper and found it has name "MAAN" she became confuse and speechless. Pinky ask Hey geet Speak up yaar. Who's the lucky man hmmm
Geet :yar pinky I don't want to play. Plsss
Pinky and Rohan: that's cheating Geet..don't be spoil sport. Tell me whos' name card u have.
Geet: Plss plss Pinky try to understand.
Rohan came towards Geet and took her card and surprise at name "MAAN" wooohhooo Kya baat hay Sali Sahiba. Not bad hummm. This confused Geet more and she start playing with her hands. No Jeeju Pls mera mood nahee hy plss Jeeju.
Pinky: so Maan now ur turn open ur card. Maan open his card n found "Geet" name. he smile inward. Hehehehe Cool dude. He call its "GEET"
Pinky: terrific.
Rohan: C'mn geet. Its ur bestie b'day atleast uski khushi k leye.
Maan: Rehny dey Rohan.. I know Maan Singh Khurana ka charm aisa hay k she can't handle me. Isko daar hay kahin ye bhee apni besties k jaisy mujh par Fida na hojayen.
Geet: excuse me mr .. ur not that much charming. And Geet kisi sy nahee daarti..Mujhy Impress Karna its not so easy.. get it.
Maan: Ohaa Ya I can see dat.. (maan Smrik)
Geet : haan ok ye baat hy M ready. Abhi sab tumhara M-
o-Hot ka nashaa utrey ga.
Maan: Great Dude..Hit on target. (Maan smile on his trumiph) he came close to Geet ears and whisper " SHAYD YAHEE CHAHTA HOON"
Geet: became restless and glare him.
PinkY; Greeeaattt sooo let the part begin. All couples proceed towards the dance floor.okkk Dj lets the music play..
Music...
Eshita and Rahul start there dance and all cheered but after few minutes all get bored so crowd start.. wooo (wid thumbs down) both quit dancing wid sad faces and left stage.
Janvi and Pratik start dancing and all start whistling n cherring dem but Janvi fall so all start wooo (wid thumbs down) looossseeerrsss both quit dancing and left stage. One by one couples eliminate.. Only Maneet remain so they came on dance floor.
Music start: (play Mohabbatein Theme dance music)
(theme song have 3 kind of music but I will include only two fast beats not classical ones. so m giving dem 1.2)
Music 1.
Geet start dance on the music ..She move around Maan with smirking expressions and pointing finger towards him. And stop as Music end end.
Music2.
Maan start dance on second music. He move back n forth towards geet and twist Geet by pulling her hand as beat change. And both start dancing together. Maan hold both hands and both move back n forth and right left.
Music 1
Both start dancing on beats wildly forgetting around where are they and wat are they doing. Lost in each other eyes and sweating and beating with fast breaths. They didn't realize it's just a dance. It's like they are fighting with their emotions which are attracting them towards each other. They want to refuse wat their body and beats want.
Music 2.
Maan put his hand on geet waist an they start moving with the beats. Lost in each other arms and eyes. Forgetting the world and their fights or Nok Jhonks. They were busy in the spell of love which touched there beats and they are lost in their own world where there is no one except Maan and Geet. A smile crept on both lips and twinkle in eyes. Seems the soul meets soul and bodies are enjoying their interaction. Hand in hand seems they are made for each other. Just perfectly in grip.
Music1.
Geet run towards Maan jump, he holds her from waist and lift her in air and turn around. Geet spread her arms with close eyes like she want to fly and feel this soul soothing air. It feels she is free from tears, sadness and hurting moments and now she has smiles and love around. She want to live dis moment in MAAN arms. Maan make her stand and both again start dance with the beats which has new theme. It's the music of their breaths, hearts and soul dancing at the beautiful MILAN of two bodies.
❤️Janey kabsy Is pal ka inko intezaar thaa. Kho Jayen, Gum hojayn, is duniya sy dur kisi ar duniya m ponch jayen. Ye waqt yahee tham jaye, ye hawa younhi gudgdati rahey.🤗❤️
As the music goes wild both there dance, moves become fast and passionate. Its not the dance for some event it's the celebration at the meeting of perfect TWO souls, bodies and hearts. Is Dil ki Barsoo Ki talaash Khatam hoyee. Both start heavily breath and can't resist the charm ,the calmness, the passion of each other, Both are so comfortable with each other in arms that they don't realize wat they were in last couple of minutes. For them they are always together like this. They don't need excuses to come near or to feel each other.
Beats stop and now the slow music giving new feeling, sensation in air. The feeling,the love, the sensation which Maneet hearts only understand. Geet stand static with heavy breaths and closed eyes. Both were sweating, breathing heavily .A drop clearly seen on Geet neck moving naughtingly and tempting inviting Maan. He can't control and move towards her and hold his waist from back n remove hairs from her shoulder and start drawing pattern on her neck with his finger on dose droplets. He doesn't like them to move wildly on her Mishti body and make tickle her when his fingers are enough for make her crazy. He closed his eyes and lost himself in beautiful scent of her hairs and body. He tightly hugged her from back. A huge round of applause start and all start cheering, clapping and whistling on couple. Maneet realize and both open their eyes and free dere self's from each other holds. Both bodies don't want to leave each other but they have to separate.
Geet saw confusingly around and then to Maan who was confuse too at his actions moving his hand on his hair looked towards Geet. Maan lost in dose deep, beautiful brown eyes who had so much hidden emotions, tears which are ready to come out, the confusion or hurtful sight which pierce Maan's heart. He wanted to took her far from this cruel world who had given her so much tears that they lost their sparks , lips who were enjoying pleasure in last minutes and become more red are now like a dry leaves who became lifeless in autumn.
Pinky and Rohan came forward and hug both. Waoww waowww u guys are amazing just sooperb.
Rohan: Hey dude wat was dat.. aaa its smashing yaar. It doesn't feel u guys were fighting at de start and now dis much bonding simply fantastic. It seems u both know each other since ages. Waoww waoww.
Pinky: So Buddies all knows who are the STARS of the SHOW'crowd shout MAAN and Geet yeeeaahhh.
Maan and Geet move towards the stage and got their Title belts as Prince and Princess. Both thanks and with smiles move from the stage. All congratulate Maan and Geet. Geet wid fake smile thanks and MAAN as usual cool dude with really killing smile.
Pinky came from back n whisper in Geet ears " Mein na Kehti thi MK is Dhak Dhak,ik baar miley gi to u can resist her "
Geet gave him angry glare and was about to say something when Rohan and Maan came towards dem with smile and teasing gestures.
Rohan: so u guys have wonderful chemistry and u really made dis event rocking. That's wonderful.
Maan: (came close to geet ears and whisper) I told u MSK charm is so magical no one could resist. Miss Geet welcome to MK drooling list. But ur lucky coz dis tym MK accept his heart stop beating when u were in my arms and I love it. (maan nuzzle in her ear)
Geet gave him glare and Maan in return give her wink.
No one notice as Pinky and Rohan were busy in praising dem and discussing their performance. After some time.
Rohan: dude don't u feel its late now. We should take a leave now. Warna in haseenao k ABAON ney dhulai karni hay mera to susral hay. (Rohan wink towards Pinky)
Pinky: hey Maan pls do me favor. Geet ko usk ghar drop krdoo. Me and Rohan really want to go for ice-cream.. wasy tum dono bhee humhein join kar shakty ho but u know Kabab m haddi bana kisko acha lagta hay RIGHT!
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