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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Nilam-

Yash : ager ye rishta hath sy gaya to mein tujhy golli maar dongaa
Maan: Dad u have gun 'kahan rakhi hay kabhi bataya nahee'
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after reading this portion I cant control my laughter ...excellent update dear...

hehehehehe thanks buddy.. m happy dat u like it. PAISAA FASOOL 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
THANKS DEAR 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

awesome update

what does geet wanna say ?

Donno ... I tried to check her mind but it was LOCKED 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MyInfatuationz

Donno ... I tried to check her mind but it was LOCKED 😆

how about we check u r brain dear i am sure it isn't lock 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

how about we check u r brain dear i am sure it isn't lock 😆

I Lost my keys 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
A VERY NICE UPDATE..👏
BTW I JUST FORGOT TO SAY U A BIGGG "THANK YOU" FOR USING MY NAME IN UR SS...☺️
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ WISH I HAD SOMEONE LIKE "RAHUL" TO DANCE WITH..😉
AGAIN A BIGGG "THANK YOU"...🤗 LOVE READING UR UPDATES 😊 PM KARTE REHNA..😊
Thanks dear.. i m happy dat u like it.. SO ur part of Maneet love track.. hmm cool have fun and thanks a bundle of commenting on each part,. m over-welmed.
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Posted: 13 years ago
mish maina soch rahi hu aajke baad tujhe cmnts fb pe de dungi... aur yahan sirf likes 😉 waise bhi now u dont need our cmnts 2 fill up d thread 😛 jis tarah se last page pe ane k liye mujhe teri har ek updt phir se revise karna padha... bap re maine aaj tak xms k liye bhi aise revise nahi kiya 😆 ab mera sar ghum raha hain k actually last part mein tha kya 😳 bcz abhi tak uska revise nahi hua hain... jab uska revised version aa jaaye na... plsss pm me 😃
arey haan... plsss GEETU se haa bulwa de 😕 kyun kharoos aurat ki tarah behave kar rahi hain maaneet ko alag karke kya milega tere ko 😡 agar HANDA house se kiya gaya phn pe maine "yes" nahi suna na... tho dekh lena... main tera sar phodh dungi 😈 😈 😈 waise bhi yeh tere thread pe mera last cmnt hain 😉 akhri baar complaint kar rahi hu main... iss baar meri baat manle plsss 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago


PART 19

Papa G I don't want to marry with Maan. Pls U reject dis proposal from my side.

Ranu: Kyaa How could u?? why, is dat kind of joke? Why u can't marry with Maan. He is nice, sweet, and respectable and I feel he like u too. Apna family business hay and also he is famous Rj. Pinky told me that people love him so much but he is so decent that he don't have a bad eye or any kind of scandles at all. I don't think is sy zaida koi shareef ho shakta hay. Usk leye kisi cheez ki kami nahee . Savitri Khurana is most reputed woman in our city. They have construction business and MAAN is really good. U would always happy with him. Tery to bhag khul gaye that they choose u for Maan warna log tu aisy unchy khandan sy rishta joorny k leye tarasty hein.

Geet: But Ma I don't love him. Usko mein janti hoon. He is non-serious and stupid guy. He dam care about life and his responsibilities. RJ is not a mature job.

Mohindar: Beta G Karan also want dat .. don't forget. Only u take Rj as immature profession. Ok if he is rj then they have dere own family business. There construction business is within India and outside of india.

Geet: wo to theek hay par Papa G mujhy baas Maan sy shaadi nahee krni. U want my ans naa so dey to dya hay.. Plss Papa G..

Ranu: Kya Bakwas kr rhee hay.. to hosh mein to hay.. akher tu ney humhein samagh kya rakha hay. Tu ney jo chaha life mein hum ney dya but ab tu humhary pyaar ka faida maat uthaa. Ye kaisi excuse hay Humhein to usmein koi aisi baat nahee lagi. Tery Papa G ney sab sy pata karwaya hay bohaat hee achay ar khandani log hain. Paisa, power, respect sab hay but Khurana Sahab aur unkey beto mein koi khott nahe. Ary jhallii Log tarasaty hein aisy rishton k leye aur teri kismat khuli to tujhy nakrey sujh rahey hein.. chahtii kya hay akher key tery dukh mein teri Ma ar Papa g maar jaeyn.

Geet: Maa don't say plss (Geet in tears)

Mohindar: chup kar Ranu. Mujhy baat karney dey

Ranu: Baas Bohaat hogaya.. apky ladh pyaar ka ye asaar hay. Mein pehely hee kehti thi is larki ney humhein zaleel karney ka sooch lia hay. Ye Koi na Koi bahana Nikal ley gi. Ar kuch nahee mila to usk masti mazzaq ko ghalat lelyaa. Apney apko dekh ab har koi tery jaisaa Maara ar dukkhi to nahee reh shakta naa. Tera bas chaley to duniya sy hunsi cheen ley na khudh khush rehti hay na apny budey ma papa ko khushi naseeb honey deity hay. Is din k leye tujhy itnaa ladh dya kay tu humhein Kanydaan ka moqa na dey. Maar jayngy to fr rooti rehnaa. Tera ghum to na jeeny deta hay na chain sy maarney deta hay.

Mohindar: RAANNUU chup kar..Kya boli ja rahee hay.

Ranu: Keh deti hoon ye larki humhein ab kahin ka nahee chorey gi.. meri sunty kahan hoo. , (Ranu started cry loudly and went out of room in anger)

Mohindar: Beta idher ajaa araam sy beth kar baat karty hein.

Geet: (sat with her father and wipe her tears) papa G ma ko aisa kun lagta hay. Mein baas shaadi nahee karna chahti. Ap dono sy barh kar Is geet ka koi nahee. Fr mein kun apki khushiyan cheenoyngi. (geet cry bitterly)

Mohindar: (hug geet) Na Putar mera shair Puttar.. she is ur mother .. she care for u.. she want u to marry. We want u to be happy and move ahead. Geet Puttar u were agree with dis proposal. Even u were happy when they talked but suddenly aisa room m kya hogaya that u think MAAN is not perfect for u? Usny tujhsy kuch ulta seedha keh dya? if mazzaq masti mein he said anything den why ur taking all so serious. I know he is naughty but that doesn't mean he never be a good partner. I saw his eyes who have so much respect and care for his parents. Ajkal k larko mein sanskaar nahee hoty jo MAAN mein hein. Mujhy yaqeen hay is sy acha larka tumhein kahin nahee miley ga. Khurana Sahab is really nice business man. Mein ny MAAN k baray mein pata karwaya hay Tujhy apny papa g ka vishwaas krna chahye.

Geet: But papa G

Mohindar: beta Har Ma baap ki khawaish hoti hay k unki beti ka ghar basy unki zindagi mein. Wo uska kanydaan karein. Usk bachon ko khush dekhein. Maan Bohaat acha larka hay.Humhein lagta hay Khurana Parivaar mein wo sab tujhy miley ga jiska har Ma Baap sapna dekhty hein. Mujhy aur teri Ma ko Maan bohaat pasand hay. Ik baar sooch ley mein tery jawab ka intezaar kar raha hoon. Is baar zaida waqt nhee hay

(he move towards door and turn again) .. (Papa G joined hands in front of her) Geet Puttar Is baar Mujhy Meri beti ,Meri ladoo Ki Hunsi Lutta dey.. Mujhy meri geet Lutta dey ..Beta Lutta dey Meri Beti Lutta dey Mujhy.

Geet: Papa G plss

Mohindar open door and went outside.

Geet sat on ground and start crying again " KAISY LUTTA DOON WO SAB JAB MERY PASS KUCH KHUSHI RAHEE NAHEE' KAISY ZINDA KRDUN US GEET KO JO KARAN KI MAUT KE SAATH MAAR GAI.. MUJHY KHUSH HONEY SY DAAR LAGTA HAY PAPA G.. MEIN KYA KARUN"

AT Khurana mansion all were having their evening tea and watching their favorite show on tv.

Daadi ma raise again and again goes towards her mobile phone. She checked and then kept back her mobile . she was much confused, tensed and desperate.

Yash: wat happen Ma.. kiski call ka wait kar rahee hein?

Daadi ma: Mrs Handa ka .pata nhee what Geet said.

Dev: relax daadi. Ajaye ga. Give dem some tyme.

Maan came from stairs with his files and move towards outside.

Yash: Maaan

Maan: ( NOT AGAIN) yes Dad

Yash: Where ru going?

Maan: Dad Its Saturday .. My show so m going office. Today I need to talk with director about some coming week shows so need to rush earlier.

Yash: Dekh rahee hein Ma here we are upset about their answer and he is dam care about us nor wat they said and all. Chalein hein shaba apny Show k leye.

Maan: Dad apsy hee seekha hay Work and Commitments first.. Be a Prfessional ..baas wohi kar raha hoon.

Yash: Meri Baatiein ager suntan tu aaj ye nobaat nahee atti.

Maan: (plead gesture towards Dev)

Dev: Dad Baas kijiey ap frsy start na hojaiye.

Dev: maan good luck Chikko.. Don't worry about dem u go and enjoy.

Maan; Thanks Bro ur de best.. See ya.

He ran towards main door before his dad again start another series of lecture on his show and dis new drama which created in morning.

Tring tring tring tring.. Phone ringgg

Daadi: hello

Ranu: G Savitri G

Daadi: Yes Hum Savitri Khurana speaking

Ranu: Namasty.. m Mrs Handa from Handa house.

Daadi ma: Gee Ranu ..we all are waiting for ur ans. Kahiyee.

Ranu: Gee wo kehna thaa kay '.

MAAA PAPA Mein MAAN SY SHAADI K LEYE TYAAR HOON. Ap Un logo ko Haan kardein. (geet came just as Ranu about to tell daadi about her refusal)

Ranu: Gee Bohaat Bohaat Mubarik Ho Geet ney haan krdi. Humhari taraf sy rishta pakka samjiye.

Daadi: Kyaaa saachii apko bee Bohaat Bohaat mubariq hoo. Himhein kabsy is Khush Khabri ka intezaar tha..

Ranu: gee Baas Baba G sab mehrbaniyan karey. Ye rishta Khushiyan ley kar aye .

Daadi Ma: Hum abhi sab ko Bataty hein .. abhi pandit G ko phone kary SAGAI (engagement) ka ar Shaadi ka Muhraat Nikalwaty hein. Apsy phir baat karty hein.

Ranu: Gee Bilkul Mein Geet ki Kundali Bhejwaa dongi. ' G Namastay

Daadi MA: Nakul Jaldi Sy methai Laiyee.. Yash Unhon Ney haan kardi.

Dev and Annie: Kyaaa Geet ney Haan kardi.

Yash: waah Ye to bohaat achi Khabar hay Maa.

Dev: Mein ney to pehly hee kaha thaa dad ap aisy hee chikko ko dant rahey thy.

Meera entered into house with her parents.Mr and Mrs Sindhiya.

Rajbeer Sindhiya: Bohaat Bophaat Mubarik Ho. Hum Dev and Meera ki Sagaai Ka puchny arahey thy ar apny ye khush khabri sunadi .

Mona Sindhiya: Savitri G Bohaat Bohaat Mubark ho. Ab is Ghar sy Do Do baratein NIkleingi.

DaadiMa; Haan G humhara baas chaley to aaj hee dono bahuein apni betiyan bana kar ley aye.. (she gave sweets to all)

Meer and Dev wid steal galances to each other ,shying n blushing.

Annie: Haan Daadi Ma Maan Bhaiya and Dev Bhai k chakkar mein Mujh bechari ko sab bhool gaye.. Thank God ab Koi mery baray mein bhee soochey ga

Meera; ohoo some one is very desperate.. Kahin tummy pehly sy dhoond to nahee lya

Annie: aaawww my sweet Bhabhi Ur genious.. dekhti jao kya dhamaka karney walli hoon.

All laugh.

Daadi Ma: Hum abhi pandit G ko phone karkey bulatye hein tab taq Mrs Handa Geet ki Kundali bhee bhejwa deingi. Ye kaam jitna jaldi hojayen utnaa acha hay.

Annie: ary koi Maan Bhai ko to batayee.. Unko subha sy kitnaa sabney sunaya.. Ab Khush Khabri mein dairr kun.. Mein abhee unko call kareky atti hoon.

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Precap: Donnoo Help Me 😆

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Edited by MyInfatuationz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: NiharikaNeha777

mish maina soch rahi hu aajke baad tujhe cmnts fb pe de dungi... aur yahan sirf likes 😉 waise bhi now u dont need our cmnts 2 fill up d thread 😛 jis tarah se last page pe ane k liye mujhe teri har ek updt phir se revise karna padha... bap re maine aaj tak xms k liye bhi aise revise nahi kiya 😆 ab mera sar ghum raha hain k actually last part mein tha kya 😳 bcz abhi tak uska revise nahi hua hain... jab uska revised version aa jaaye na... plsss pm me 😃

arey haan... plsss GEETU se haa bulwa de 😕 kyun kharoos aurat ki tarah behave kar rahi hain maaneet ko alag karke kya milega tere ko 😡 agar HANDA house se kiya gaya phn pe maine "yes" nahi suna na... tho dekh lena... main tera sar phodh dungi 😈 😈 😈 waise bhi yeh tere thread pe mera last cmnt hain 😉 akhri baar complaint kar rahi hu main... iss baar meri baat manle plsss 😛

Thanks for commenting Neha.. tujhy mein FB pr hee puchongi.. yahan tera sabk samny band bajana acha nhee lgta.. kya izaat reh jaye gi teri. lolss
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Posted: 13 years ago
me phast again 😉
sooo tym for detailed cmnts 😳 be ready 4 my tanas 😆
arey mujhe tho pata hi nahi tha k yahan pe koi mujhe competition de rahi hain 😉 ab se tho hushiyar rehna padhega bhai ... competition dene wala bhi tho apna hi hain 😳
mish tu GEETU k mamma se itni karwii baatein bulwa kaise rahi hain yaar 😭 ab bachhi kii shaadi nahi ho rahi hain... woh Maan ke zindagi kharab nahi karna chahta hain yeh koi kyun nahi samajhta hain 😡 bcz GEET knws if she marries MAAN... she wont be able 2 keep him happy 😒 and MAAN deserves all d happiness in his life 😒 so woh MAAN k bare mein soch ke hi iss shaadi se mana kar rahi hain... apne bare mein soch akr nahi par koi usse samajh hi nahi raha hain 😭
finally GEET gives in 2 her mamma aur papaji's wish par apne mann se nahi 😕 chalo par shaadi k baad usse pata chalega k MAAN iss duniya ka bestest hubby hain 😛 aur GEET kitna khush kismat hain aise hubby pakar 😃
abt precap>> I knw tu kya likhegi 😆 isme itne sochne ki kya baat hain 😳 MAAN ko apni GEETU kii approval ka pata chalega 👍🏼 aur woh ek baar phirse apne lala land mein kho jayega 😉 aur tu aise hi kahin beech mein humein latkake apna updt khatam karegi 😡
chalo... mera cmnt ka kota khatam hua... ab bolo competition mein kaun jeeta 😳 sirf competition hain... isi liye aaj main font size bhi nahi badha rahi hu... aur nahi coloring kar rahi hu 😉 warna tu bolegi k maine cheating kiya hain 😆
updt soon nxt part... mee waiting 😃
Edited by NiharikaNeha777 - 13 years ago

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